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Burying the Hatchet

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Burying the Hatchet

Of all the things I do resent,
Time takes most precedence;
For He's a Thief- the giver of Grief,
And a Lover of the Present...

Today he plots to plague my thoughts,
And wrought His plans for Pain!
Ideals are fraught, my Mind hath caught-
His buried hatchet in my Brain

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  1. Date: 10/12/2013 5:36:00 PM
    an amusing twirl of information, almost missed....love it babe....

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    Date: 10/13/2013 6:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks as always, Don; glad you enjoyed :)
  1. Date: 10/12/2013 2:08:00 PM
    Very witty figurative piece here. With two wonderful veiled figures of speech. 1)"A hatchet job" on your brain. and the offended party has 2) "buried the hatchet".

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    Date: 10/13/2013 6:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Very astute of you, Jon, but I would expect no less from you. You nailed the meaning of the whole piece. Thanks for the read and review :)