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The Horde's Prayer

The Horde’s Prayer Our Mother who dwells in Hell Hollowed be thy Fame Thy Freedom come On Dearth as it is in Hell Give us each day Our daily Dread And don’t forgive us As we don’t forgive Those who don’t trespass Or whoever wins against us Lead us into Temptation And surrender us to Evil And into Condemnation For thy is the Freedom To Cower and to be Hoary Forever and ever.... Hearken! ** This awkward prayer is not meant to be blasphemous. The purpose for it is to enunciate the abundant grace of Almighty where there still exist a people who devote their time, faith and belief to the unsubstantial....They seem to recite the Lord’s Prayer in reverse, as I see it., directly contemptuous to the Great Creator. **Freedom of belief is a Human Right. That too, is not being denigrated either. **Contents of this poem are purely a work of Art not Religion. Don’t Do It at Home! **Should anybody embrace it and adopt it, I’ll not be held liable. JM 24th Oct’ 2013

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Date: 10/30/2013 1:23:00 PM
Joseph, this is an exceptional work of art. The irony in each line top notch. WOW
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Date: 10/31/2013 4:19:00 AM
It's good to hear from u. I also enjoy your poems. Thanks Karen. Friend, JM
Date: 10/25/2013 7:28:00 AM
Well, I can only rate 1-7 but I am rating this as highly as possible :)
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Date: 10/25/2013 9:04:00 AM
Thank you so much for the high rating. FriendJM.
Date: 10/25/2013 7:16:00 AM
OMFG! This is freaking AWESOME, JM! Going straight to my "favorites". This is one of the wittiest and most clever things I have read in ages. I mean, KILLER piece, dude. Absolutely LOVED this. It's one of the most impressive things I've read by you. If I could, I would make this the feature poem of the day. You blew me away with this poem. EXCELLENT and SUPERLATIVE in every way :D
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Date: 10/25/2013 9:05:00 AM
It's cool to hear from you Great Poet. You left me chuffed. Thanks. Friend JM
Date: 10/24/2013 3:36:00 PM
It's a opposite of truth poem. May God bless you. Loved always, bl
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Date: 10/25/2013 9:06:00 AM
Bl, thanks for the comment. I also enjoy your work. Friend, JM

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