As God As My Witness

The Life Quixotic is still Chaotic, Still despotic while Tyrants rule. Joy, it seems, a thing of dreams When I wander like a Fool. Eternally internally profoundly confused- Searching for Time far better spent In a Mind I find unfit- MISUSED! A wish to be Omnipotent... *Favorite Poem Old/New Contest Entry ~JustThatArchaicPoet

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/2/2013 8:39:00 AM

Congrats on the win, JTAP

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 12/2/2013 11:49:00 AM

Thanks, Doc! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/2/2013 5:57:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 12/2/2013 8:34:00 AM

Thanks so much, Anne Lise! :)

Robin Davis

Date: 11/8/2013 7:21:00 PM

Chan my dear friend This is a deep and emotional write. All your emotions are coming out in this write and the reader can feel your despair. thanks for another great comment on my Crazily Contagious poem. Hugs and love sweet pea

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/9/2013 5:43:00 AM

Glad you felt the emotions. Thanks for dropping by, Sweet Pea! <3

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/6/2013 2:46:00 PM

I can feel your pulse rate ..and the beating of a heart searching for joy..What you search for is what im searching for and others too.Never give up..Joy might touch your life when least expected..through the simplest of things .I am enjoying the prodound way you think with.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/9/2013 5:44:00 AM

Than you for the kind and encouraging words, Charm, and for dropping by with a review :)

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/6/2013 2:47:00 PM

profound..Grr sorry for typo..its so difficult when im using phone : )