An Ounce of Pretention

A healing Heart will now depart to seek anew the chance of start to make it right come what may or might, but be well prepared if you are smart! For you never know what Fate bestows which can hit so hard with heavy blows, lift you up, throw you down, or bless you sweetly if it so chose...

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Mark Peterson

Date: 11/2/2013 11:31:00 AM

It's all true and from somewhere hope keeps pushing us to try again. Unless we seek, we never find, but oh the pain. Thanks for this delightful rhyme. Mark

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/2/2013 11:34:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by, Mark; I sincerely appreciate the feedback :)

Nudershada Cabanes

Date: 11/1/2013 4:34:00 PM

Excellent piece. we never know what fate has in store for us we could only hope that fate would be kind so as not to throw us down in the journey of life.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/2/2013 8:14:00 AM

Very true, N. Thanks for reading and replying :)

Robin Davis

Date: 10/30/2013 5:26:00 PM

My Friend this is a truthful and honest write. You never know what life will put you through or give you each day. Nice write. Thanks for the nice comment on my Love Hints poem. Hugs and Love Sweet Pea

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/31/2013 8:39:00 AM

Thanks for the review, Sweet Pea! <3

Joseph Matose

Date: 10/30/2013 12:13:00 PM

great poem. Your 'stamina' is unique. Keep it. Friend, JM

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/31/2013 8:39:00 AM

Thanks for your review as always, JM :)