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Call Me Monday When I'Ve Made My Millions

How true it is- it's you I miss, Deep inside my Heart's bare core Oblige me, please, with one more kiss- Oh, my Love- this I implore! Of you I dream the sweetest dreams, That in my arms you hither lie When I awake, and seen what I've seen, By my own guilt I wish to die!

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Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 11/18/2013 3:28:00 AM

The title is a knockout, but I'm not exactly sure how it relates to the text? Loved it though. Does the protagonist really want one last kiss? No! Never! Guilty bugger wants redemption. Or so I say.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/18/2013 5:31:00 AM

Thanks for the read and reply, Scott. They title and body are meant to be purposely disparate, but the more I reflect on it, the title may have a deeper subconscious meaning than I initially recognized. I appreciate you stopping by :)

Carol Eastman

Date: 11/2/2013 1:56:00 PM

Your work is quite unique... in a fun way!

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/2/2013 2:07:00 PM

Thanks again, Carol; much appreciated :)

Poet. Undertaker

Date: 11/1/2013 9:00:00 PM

"just "!my blog no place to vent your depression. (: ) Jenish.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/2/2013 8:08:00 AM

I wasn't aware I was venting "depression"; I was aware that I was expressing an opinion, which had nothing to do with depression whatsoever. I think something got lost in translation, Jenish.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/1/2013 9:52:00 AM

Thanks for the explanation, I ponder no more. I like all the thought and comments you provoked.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/1/2013 10:14:00 AM

Thanks, Richard. I'm always delighted when you stop by. Thanks for the review, my friend :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/30/2013 5:56:00 PM

Intriguing post..Its as if someone is in love yet lost his love..the one whom He dreams about through lack of money which makes it impossible to be with his love..Pondering!!!

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/31/2013 8:44:00 AM

Thanks for the review, Charm :)

Robin Davis

Date: 10/30/2013 5:29:00 PM

Chan my friend This is an intriguing and interesting write. The reader has to wonder what is going on and what you saw that made you feel like this. Nice job Thanks for the awesome comment on my Devilish Demons poem. Love and hugs Sweet pea

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/31/2013 8:45:00 AM

Many thanks for the read and review Sweet Pea! :)

Joseph Matose

Date: 10/30/2013 12:15:00 PM

Great LOVE poem, Archaic! Thanks for sharing. Friend, JM

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/31/2013 8:46:00 AM

Thanks, JM :)

Honestly J.T.

Date: 10/30/2013 11:35:00 AM

Soo are you saying you love both the money and the woman and the woman could love you for your money even though that may not be the case. Also its a good feeling when a man can provide.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/31/2013 8:48:00 AM

The title and poem and completely disparate; I think I did this for the purpose of ambiguity which seems to have backfired. Thanks for the review, PJ :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/30/2013 8:49:00 AM

Here I ponder!

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/30/2013 9:01:00 AM

Good; that's what I was hoping for. Thanks for the reviews, Richard :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/30/2013 7:36:00 AM

Interesting work work of a pinning love..I am left with a question at the end as to what you have seen..Thanks for the visit to my page..I liked that word lugubriosity also..Sara

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/30/2013 8:09:00 AM

should say * I wanted the reader to ponder lol ;)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/30/2013 8:08:00 AM

I left that intentionally ambiguous and vague; I wanted the reader the ponder what it was I saw and decide for themselves. Thanks for the review, Sara :)