An Exercise In Versatility

I sacrifice my rhyming, And to what avail? Is this me? *For Dr. Ram's Quinzaine Contest **JustThatArchaicPoet

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/21/2014 4:23:00 PM

yes, it is you--aunthentic!.. cheers for your winning streak, chan.. huggs

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/21/2014 8:22:00 AM

You do grow and change with every breath so if each new Chan is still Chan the answer would be yes. Congrad's on a fine win. Light & Love

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/20/2014 7:13:00 PM

Hi there, Rhyme isn't everything...congrats and pass the bottle. BG

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/20/2014 12:36:00 PM

Hey, Chan, Congratulations, the poem is awesome. Enjoyed your winning poem. Happy Easter, luv LINDA

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/20/2014 11:00:00 AM

Very well written ,,, great win !

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/20/2014 9:40:00 AM

Thanks for your support and congrats on the win in my contest, Chan

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 3/21/2014 2:44:00 PM

Heavy, like it!

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 3/22/2014 9:54:00 AM

That's an interesting perspective, Keith. I thought, in juxtaposition to my rhyming poems, this was rather light. But I think it's cool you have this interpretation. Thanks for stopping by and for reviewing :)

Tim Smith

Date: 3/21/2014 2:29:00 PM

Very well done...Tim

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 3/22/2014 9:54:00 AM

Much appreciated, Tim; thank you! :)