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The One Least Likely

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The One Least Likely

The One least likely to understand, 
Was the One who knew the most 
On broken knees, I cannot stand, 
But haunt, do I, as wraith or ghost 
The One least likely to be subtle, 
Was as gentle as a Lamb 
And, Oh! My emotions, deeply muddled- 
Woe is me is all I am!

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  1. Date: 10/24/2013 1:18:00 PM
    chan Very touching and emotional. You touch the reader in a way that gives them chills. Nice job my friend Hugs

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    Date: 10/24/2013 1:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Very sweet of you to say; thanks for making me smile, Robin <3