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Gardens Grey

Pardon my Gardens; they're withered and grey: Unkempt and wild and quite defiled Given my odd and reclusive ways: Eccentric is my fashion style Look at Life through special glass: I see it all now magnified But my gardens grey, my cage, alas! Damn society- be defied! You should truly be in pictures, You were born for it, you see: Nevermind your fear and stricture; What a starlet you would be! Come and visit my grey gardens: Bring your cameras; we will talk Mother and I have long been hardened By the way the others balk! Jackie O. was in the know, And embarrassed by our home We let her in since she was kin Though we sought to be alone I am Edith Bouvier Beale, A model once I was Did cabaret 'til my dying day When the flies began to buzz

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/18/2018 12:05:00 PM
Creative write!
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Date: 12/16/2013 1:47:00 AM
Delightful, coherent write--as good as anything out there. I loved the last two lines of each stanza, which means you really delivered the rhyme.
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Date: 12/17/2013 11:34:00 AM
Thanks, Mark! Try to find the two different documentaries on the Beales of "Grey Gardens" and watch them; it's the only way to truly appreciate the character of "Little Edie" :)
Date: 12/12/2013 8:52:00 AM
Thrilling poem and very creative! I was entertained throughout with your vivid imagery. It flowed nicely and had a very eccentric touch. Very much enjoyed reading. : ) Always. Laura
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Date: 12/17/2013 11:31:00 AM
Thank you, Laura; much appreciated :)
Date: 12/9/2013 6:02:00 PM
Very well written Chan, You were inspired!
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Date: 12/10/2013 5:31:00 AM
Thanks, my friend :)
Date: 12/8/2013 1:18:00 AM
I wish to share your lash grey gardens, Chan. They sound to me paradise enough. Thanks Buddy! Friend, JM
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Date: 12/8/2013 6:15:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by and for the read and reply, JM :)
Date: 12/3/2013 8:34:00 PM
Enjoyable story and the title really drew me in, too.
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Date: 12/4/2013 12:11:00 PM
Thanks, David; much appreciated :)
Date: 12/3/2013 10:37:00 AM
Very cool....and smooth. Well done!
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Date: 12/3/2013 12:48:00 PM
Thanks, Caleb! :)

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