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Perfectly Terrible

It's a beautiful day for a hurricane, And perfectly I feel terrible But my Mind is twice my Bane- My Emotions are unbearable! I admit I've made mistakes, Some were small but most were great Revenge I covet- I dearly Love it: But it's the worst of thirsts to slake!

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Robin Davis

Date: 2/21/2014 8:36:00 AM

Chan The Man This are some deep and powerful words that a lot of people can relate to. Making mistakes, feeling pain and sorrow, and not liking our selves for what we've done. Nice job my friend. UH OH My Willpower has a boo boo. I better go make it all better. LOL Thanks for the nice comment.. Hugs and Love Sweet Pea

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 2/21/2014 10:53:00 AM

Thanks, Sweet Pea :)

Karl Marszalowicz

Date: 2/2/2014 4:59:00 AM

your last line is very good I encourage you to write more like that!

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 2/2/2014 5:24:00 AM

Thanks, Karl :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 12/22/2013 7:49:00 PM

I can relate, because I have felt like this before...I really like the contrasts in every line of this poem, including the title. A very clever write, BP! I enjoyed it immensely!

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 12/23/2013 9:24:00 AM

Thanks, SP; sincerely appreciated, as always :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/20/2013 7:09:00 PM

very entertaining Chan.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 12/21/2013 7:56:00 AM

Thanks, Richard :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/17/2013 8:31:00 PM

A pure heart, JTAP

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 12/18/2013 11:57:00 AM

Thanks, Doc :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/17/2013 7:55:00 PM

The ending is right Chan, ... However, I love the first and second line. How you mixed a double emotion in both lines.... I am sending soup mail. Again... PD

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 12/19/2013 10:05:00 AM

Thanks so much, Linda; I sincerely appreciate it :)

Robin Davis

Date: 12/17/2013 4:38:00 PM

Chan The Man I can feel you pouring out your heart so the reader can see what's inside your soul. The emotion you are expressing is done in a creative way. Nice job my friend Hugs

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 12/18/2013 11:59:00 AM

Thanks, Sweet Pea <3 <3 <3

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/17/2013 3:56:00 PM

The first line got to me..my mind gets scrambled too, I can relate to your poem. BG

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 12/17/2013 4:03:00 PM

Thanks, Barbara; much appreciated :)