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Faintly falling in failing flight- En route to crash in Death's Delight! (To be blown apart, 'tis a better start) Than to travel back and make things right

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Date: 12/9/2013 8:50:00 AM
Chan my friend A few lines but very poignant and meaningful. You made this thought provoking and deep. Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my Christmas Tale poem. Alvin and The Chipmunks is a classic. Hugs and Love
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Date: 12/9/2013 9:18:00 AM
Isn't it though, lol? Thanks, Sweet Pea <3
Date: 11/12/2013 10:59:00 AM
Would be much easier to implode than make up for past transgressions. Superb ~
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Date: 11/13/2013 4:53:00 AM
Thanks, K <3 <3 <3
Date: 10/2/2013 1:12:00 PM
beautifully put
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Date: 10/2/2013 2:07:00 PM
Thanks, Liam :)

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