Pharm Fresh

A little chalk ring 'round my nose, Sends me into Pleasure's throes Another line, I'm feeling fine Providing that the Powder flows Peach and blue and green and white, Only then when Life is right Liquid Love my veins to flood- Burdens gone; my shoulders light Euphoria swims through my blood Troubles out of mind-- and sight!

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Robin Davis

Date: 10/25/2013 5:14:00 PM

Chan This is the most honest and powerful piece I have read of yours so far. It is insane how real this is. Makes me feel like I am there doing it with you. Nice job Glad you got the message I was trying to say in my Technology poem. Hugs my friend

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/26/2013 6:47:00 AM

Thanks, sweet pea :) This one is pretty raw but, as you know, I'm very candid about my addiction issues. I enjoyed reading your poems yesterday :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2013 10:40:00 PM

I never did this. Wonder what it would be like. Good one.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/11/2013 7:47:00 AM

"DO NOT try this at home!" lol. Be thankful you never did it; addiction is a terrible plight. Thanks for the review :)