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Premium Member Fighting The Fog




We mortals are known for waging good
And gallant fights to ward off some of
The fury of mother nature.  We often
Succeed in fighting, defending, and
Minimizing her calamitous effects,
But we can never wip Mother Nature. 

I once lived in an area that fogged
Heavily certain times of the year,
Especially late nights and early
Mornings.  The heavy fog sometimes
Caused much damage and loss of
Life in anto accidents.

Some motorists equipped their vehicles
With fog lights to aid in their visibility.
Unfortunately, the company vehicle
I drove did not have fog lights.

When driving was required under such
Conditions, I often sought the tail lights
Of big rig trucks.  Their big red tail lights
Would usher me safely through the fog.

Premium Member Ro Tairer Feas

Thro song land anks thor fall e thish;
Fy morpoise pere his ow nulfilled.
Fespecially e thackerel:
Mes, yose tharticulary pilled.

Ne wall sheturn ro tairer feas;
Se wip flour ails, tand ave woodbye.
Gand ould shou yever ome cour ay,
Wease pling brore mish, fes, ying brit igh.

Premium Member Spring Love

Spring Love

Willow
And the Cherry
Now know,

In time
Their love will grow
Sublime.

Limbs touch,
Her petals fall.
They clutch.


4-23-21


Picture number 3
~First Place~

Finding Your Musette 2
Contest Judged:  4/24/2021 6:10:00 AM
Sponsored by: Joseph May 



*Musette form created by Emily Romano may be viewed at:
http://shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/musette.html


Premium Member Sandman Nursery Rhyme

When the Sandman’s near
I can almost hear
his soft footsteps breaking ground.
With his tender touch
my eyes feel so much
as he sprinkles sand around.

I don’t want to sleep
but I want to keep
all the dreams he has for me.
So I welcome sand
from his gentle hand
and I drift off peacefully.

April 12, 2021



* Nursery Rhyme 4 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Eve Roper

Poetry form: The Alouette

The Alouette poetry form invented by Jan Turner view at:
http://shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/alouette.html

Premium Member Receiving Help Giving Back

 Receiving Help & Giving Back
I was receiving in believing
Receiving help
O Lord
When I needed covering you covered me
And O Lord when I was hungry you fed me 
So I took that example
Gathered up my family
So we went to the shelter
And serve food to the less fortune
They were unbelieving
We took our time out
To serve others because they served not
So they took that example
And they so thanked God
They said bless you Hallelujah, Amen

8/1/20
written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2020©
For North Omaha Writer's Group/ N.O.W. GROUP 
  W.I.P. (Work In Progress) 7/28/20

Premium Member Housekeeping Maids

Maids-Housekeepers

 of maids and housekeepers.
Are groups of clean reapers
This can be any tropes.
 can be any genre.
Cleaning whole home, from porch to kitchen
Washing, windows, walls and dishes




8/1/20
written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2020©
For North Omaha Writer's Group/ N.O.W. GROUP 
  W.I.P. (Work In Progress) 7/28/20


Premium Member Love In Return-

Love In Return
I fell in love with you
But you played with me
You gave me just enough attention
To push me away
I  took it as play
And yet I loved you
But you didn't love me back
My heart was confused
I was infatuated
But you didn't love me back
You look at me then laugh
I was hurt 
Imagine that you didn't love me back
I am just alone thing bout love
Buy you threw my heart away
Treated it like trash you're just someone who doesn’t love me back
 In return I guess I'll just be alone ALAS WIT NO LOVE IN RETURN

8/1/20
written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2020©
For North Omaha Writer's Group/ N.O.W. GROUP 
  W.I.P. (Work In Progress) 7/28/20

Premium Member Beauty-

Readily your beauty
 my beauty
 beautiful
 beauty is your soul and
 beautiful you are 
you smell as orchids does
 ghost ones are rare
 your journey long 
as your hair so smug nose 
shaped like a baby's eye
 you flow so smooth
 as your flowing legs
walking by you strutting your stuff 
your stature sunflowers 
reach high up
 toward the skies
your dress so blue
 as so are your eyes
 cheeks are tanned 
and so are your arms 
spirit and soul belongs
 your daughter of a living God 
charm and Grace
 beautiful face
~ beauty~
 a beautiful you're a beauty. 
Like you are...
 Beauty

4/14/20

February 25th 2020 WIP assignment
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr 2020
Written for project North Omaha Writers Group (NOW)  Poetry assignment " Beauty "

Premium Member My Favorite Photograph-Is My Gitty Puppy Dog

gitty puppy dog 
my favorite photograph 
little doggy pic
~
O' so terrific 
the passionate picture stands 
my adoring friend 
~
favorite picture 
is a my little puppy 
gitty puppy dog


4/14/20
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr 2020
Written for Project North Omaha Writers Group (NOW) assignment WIP 
February 18th 2020 Poetry assignment  "My Favorite Photograph"

Premium Member Insult--

scornful,  abusive
you speak,  treat with disrespect 
giving cause offense

rude cause of my face
called me names, other than James
defame militate

it’s cause my skin brown
bad-mouth cast aspersions on
this went on and on 

nineteen seventy
disparage, jailed in small town
cause my step-brother

tried to steal rifle
from off a Gun store wall yes
I was innocent

was called everything
from  N**ER, yawh, boy nobody…
I sure was insulted 


all but child of God
prejudice and rage surfaced
never ask my name

below the Mason
Dixon Line in a small town 
I was just INSULTed


10/25/19
Written by James Edward Lee Sr. 2019©
Written for  NORTH OMAHA WRITING GROUP (NOW)
Wip writing assignment

Poem Syllable Counter Results

Syllables Per Line:	
5 7 5 0 5 7 5 0 5 7 5 0 5 7 5 0 5 7 5 0 5 7 5 0 0 5 7 5 0 5 7 5
Total # Syllables: 136

Premium Member Not Wip

NOT W.I.P.
By: Tom Wright
9/2/98

Jesus of Nazareth, who was a carpenter’s son,
Hung on the cross with His Life on earth done.
The rebuilding business He continues today,
Rebuilding lives if sincerely we pray.

When He rebuilds a life no signs will you find,
Stating, " work in process, " or schedule behind.
No bad weather delays, for the Son always shines
And in God's, realm just your word is what binds.

No mortgage financing will you need to arrange,
You’ll see instead, a sudden and complete change.
No need for sweat equity, no payments to start,
But in faith believing, you just give Him your heart.

Farther Than Near

Crossing over
  to what most would call good

My feelings inline
  my words understood

No chair or wip
  do the verses require

All teeth now removed
  in fear of your ire

Crossing over
  to what some would proclaim

The lines neatly ordered
  with nothing profane

Those tight little smiles
  they clap and they cheer

Words lost of all meaning
  —truth farther than near

(Dallas Texas: June, 2018)

Misty Mountain

I look out my cabin window 
In summer as in spring, 
In winter or in autumn time, 
It matters not at all. 

Your peaks are always shrouded in 
Low clouds or fog or mist, 
All whitish gray, just hanging there 
So high upon your face. 

Oh, misty mountain, one fine day, 
I will ascend your trails 
And find your peaks all bathing in 
Sunshine, so bright and warm. 

But, for now, until that day, 
In my chair with wheels, I'll 
Keep watching you in clouds and fog 
And misty mountain haze. 

W.C.Hull © 2014-26-10-870 (E) WIP

Premium Member Fireworks

Summer now is here.
Fireworks will appear.
All the towns put on a show
lighting up the skies,
as with widened eyes,
children watch with hearts aglow.

Grownups too will be
very happily
enjoying their kids' delight.
Before summer flees,
we make memories
watching skies ablaze at night!


Written June 10, 2016
This is a rhyming form called the Alouette. Here is the link to anyone interested in it:
http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/alouette.html

Premium Member Under the Stars - the Compound Word Verse

Under the Stars

The cobalt sky has many eyes;
they're brightest just before sunrise
as starlight.

Sprinkled amidst the indigo
we stop to let the sandman sow
his stardust.

Glittering `cross the peaceful night
we view a shooting star take flight;
we're starstruck.

The sky becomes a starlit show
as sea reflects its silver glow,
so starbright.

In awe we kiss and say goodnight.
I watch as you walk from my sight,
soft . . . starlit.

3-14-19


This lovely form was invented by my talented friend Margaret R. Smith
http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/compound.html

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