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Summer now is here. Fireworks will appear. All the towns put on a show lighting up the skies, as with widened eyes, children watch with hearts aglow. Grownups too will be very happily enjoying their kids' delight. Before summer flees, we make memories watching skies ablaze at night! Written June 10, 2016 This is a rhyming form called the Alouette. Here is the link to anyone interested in it: http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/alouette.html

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Date: 6/15/2016 8:26:00 PM
I like this, Andrea! I love trying new forms so I'll have to check this one out.
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Date: 6/15/2016 4:13:00 PM
A poem with a sparkle! I like fireworks, especially the coloured ones. In the summer all Maltese towns and villages celebrate feasts which are renowned for their firework displays. // paul
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Date: 6/14/2016 2:04:00 AM
I enjoyed this Andrea. I love the Alouette form. Sorry this didn't make the winner's list. My Alouette for another contest got an N/A too. :(
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Date: 6/13/2016 11:48:00 AM
Well done! Good luck in the contest, Andrea. ...Fran
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Date: 6/13/2016 12:31:00 AM
That's what I like about fireworks, watching the joy in the children's eyes.
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Date: 6/11/2016 7:05:00 AM
Great write Andrea:) Must try this new form:) Connie had also used this form for another contest:)
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Date: 6/10/2016 10:04:00 PM
Fireworks have been a favorite all my life! My Dad was wonderful in making it a highly anticipated and fun experience in our lives and this brings so many memories! Thank you for the share! It's heartwarming and grand!~Trudy~
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Date: 6/10/2016 12:01:00 PM
Had a zebra cracker go off in my hand. Didn't light any more fireworks that fourth. Love, daver
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Date: 6/10/2016 11:07:00 AM
Great job with this form in this exuberant piece, Andrea. Janice
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