Whiff Poems | Examples

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Premium Member More Tips to Make Porch Thieves Whiff


   I hereby attempt to satisfy poplar demand
         as best I possibly can…  
               
    Seeking more creative ways to stop porch thieves?
         Here are some more in which to believe

    Hang those dirty diapers on a clothesline
         right above the package ~ this works just fine

     For extra effect, make sure the diapers have been sitting in a pile
          for quite a long while… 

      Here’s one that has those wannabee thieves running away
          Post a ‘Beware of Skunk’ sign not far away 

       And this concludes my tips this time
          for which I ask nothing, not one thin dime

Premium Member Porch Thieves All Whiff

  
	  Put a clothesline over my front steps
              hung my sweaty athletic wear over there

           Amazon delivered a package 
              placed it strategically, under that line

            Porch thieves came and took just one sniff
               ~ on this one they all whiffed

Toeing The Line

The whiff a nasty niff a strong pong
may be earth-shaking
but if we do me and you
beautiful music we'll be making
when I break out my guitar
and strum a song
then you remove your shoes
and hum along


Premium Member Getting a Whiff of Sunflower Zombie

Sunflower Zombie is here the corn told the pigs and the fence
They strained to look, wondering about her fashion sense
Bet she’ll be wearing a feathered boa, an old sow said
Bet she’ll be green and ghoulish, after all, she is quite dead.

This was stated by a bull who had been nearby chewing cud.
Don’t mind him, said the fence to the others. He is quite the dud.
Sunflower Zombie sauntered over to give them a little whiff.
She is sure pungent! Said the corn after getting a sniff.

A Whiff of spring


  Cherry blossoms
blowing in the wind …    
  a whiff of spring

Premium Member A Faint Whiff of Perfume

    A stray lock of hair
       in the corner right there

    In the parlor, a faint whiff of perfume

    The couch messy and wrinkled
       piano’s ivories uncovered and tinkled
    I know what you’re thinking, dear
       but please don’t assume

    For these are just clues, all part of a poem  
       ~ detective-style, ala Watson and Holmes


A Whiff of Carbolic

I sniff at my hands and oh!
Such scent, such ecstasy,
a memory presented to my nose.
But where do we find this block of adorable redness?

It was sold in every shop: lovable carbolic soap,
an aromatic compound, so ruddy, so redolent.
But this is now so rare; it merely
presents itself to my pleading mind -

a psyche that puts forth its arms,
a plea to a storehouse of valuable memory,
a whiff of an echo, an echo of an odour,
an odour that's been sent.

So who remembers, recalls a soap that's not
so round, bright pink, cream, blue or white,
that isn't sold in pretty-pretty paper?
We do so wish to sniff, sniff, sniff at an odour that's so old.

(3 Oct 2023)

Skew - Whiff

When life has gone skew-whiff
And best laid plans have gone awry 
When everything is topsy turvy 
And you're winging it on the fly 

There is something you can do 
To rectify the situation 
Don't waste another moment
Go and run off on vacation 

It's a radical approach
Not to stay and tough it out
And instead hope problems disappear 
When you are not about 

Lying under a palm tree 
Drinking pina coladas while you read 
May not change your problems - 
But its probably what you need

Premium Member Skew-Whiff

see the seesaw sea
send its waves to rock 
the barrel stave wooden seahorse 
to and fro, askew and slow

though I'm feeling 
skew-whiff in the waddle
and iffy sickly not well
I think I'll stay
riding the bare-back bronco
to whittle the whiles away 
letting the be, what's may
till the break of day

Premium Member The Whiff Was Something Else Now

Miss Maisy cow with a floral headdress crown
You are ever so gorgeous, all the way around
Never have we seen a prettier bovine than you
Too bad your cow pie has stuck to my shoe.

It was okay until I tried to pry it off.
Some old lady was wheezing with a hard cough.
Whew! The whiff was something else now.
Allergic to perfume, from Miss Maisy Cow.

Premium Member Winter Whiff

tall tree trivet tents 
tempt thrush toucan and trogon ---
tantalizingly tempting 

crude cute corals crawl 
calm candescent capricious ---
caressing captivating 


10 January 2023

Premium Member A Whiff of Perfume

Lovers choose red roses
To express their undying love,
For their beloved
Who shines like an angel from heaven above.

Life is a Paradise; when we are young,
Life is like an epic film,
That has just begun
It has lots of pages

Not yet known to you,
Will you and your sweetheart
Stay together,
And be forever true?

Like the magnificence of the rose
Will your love fade over time
Or will you always,
Keep your first love in mind.

Memories come flooding back,
Sometimes when your alone
Has your love ever married,
Or is she all alone?

Does she ever think fo you?
And memorise the same,
Or does the perfume, like the rose,
With memories remain?

Premium Member Whiff Of Foolish Me

My friends have already revealed that I'm in loved with you
That's why I don't know what to do nor to say.
And so am I confounded as to how should I evade this ballyhoo
With no regret when I wake up early in the day.

It seems to me that you are yet unaffected
By the reverberations whispering in your ears?...
But if you'll only knock the portal of my heart unwavered
You'll discover that my heart for you wait and sears.

Others say... I am not perfect for you.
Others say... I am not the man you're looking for.
They may be right for making such comments like these
Comments, however, are not always impeccable and therefore, subject to error.

I may be a fool to love someone who cares not for me.
I may be a fool to choose someone who's not probably meant for me.
God knows how much I love you why don't you look back and see?
For the shadow of a man with sincerity and urgent plea!...

I wish to end this flim-flam jive 
Because I don't think the concerned is blind
Why don't you show me the feelings that you hide 
And make thine eyes sparkle again with pride!

Premium Member Spring Last Whiff

Spring’s last whiff

wafted delightfully
          through my parents
                bedroom window
where I swung myself
                at that time
after a distressing storm
                scenting of newness
        light as angel hair
stroking my nose
arousing a sublime
              serendipity

Maybe that’s when
poetry flowed
                    from the brood
           or possibly
the years of injury
    from a cracked
            first wedding
or missing my dad
early on
just as I lacked him most
                        who grasps

Though I believe
poetry came from
      a beauteous strange
                        amalgamation
        of life’s vicissitudes
churning emotions &
propelling them into words
        alike now
                as I gaze out
over snow-covered fields
    gently rolling under
            powder blue sky
while a couple of sparrows
                  chirp happily
assuring all
spring is nearly absconding from
                           the meadow 

1St Place Contest Winner


Written: June 18, 2022

A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

Premium Member Smooth Elevator Operator

Smooth Elevator Operator
I truly am a smooth operator 
When I let one loose in the elevator
If it’s only me there my air blows free
Have got my own detonator you see.

Able to let fly with such immense pride
And can play a fine tune from my backside
That is until others enter the lift
I tell them someone else has left the whiff.
* * *3rd August 2021

When I Let One Loose In The Elevator Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Charles Messina
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