A Faint Whiff of Perfume

    A stray lock of hair
       in the corner right there

    In the parlor, a faint whiff of perfume

    The couch messy and wrinkled
       piano’s ivories uncovered and tinkled
    I know what you’re thinking, dear
       but please don’t assume

    For these are just clues, all part of a poem  
       ~ detective-style, ala Watson and Holmes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Lawless Avatar
August 4, 2024 at 6:52 AM
all heading toward the climax......
Wolf Avatar
August 4, 2024 at 6:19 PM
Hmmm. I'll dig my mind out of the gutter before I incriminate myself here...
Jones Avatar
August 3, 2024 at 10:09 PM
Very creative and interesting!
Wolf Avatar
August 4, 2024 at 6:19 PM
Thank you for the compliment, Karen.
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