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Spring’s last whiff wafted delightfully through my parents bedroom window where I swung myself at that time after a distressing storm scenting of newness light as angel hair stroking my nose arousing a sublime serendipity Maybe that’s when poetry flowed from the brood or possibly the years of injury from a cracked first wedding or missing my dad early on just as I lacked him most who grasps Though I believe poetry came from a beauteous strange amalgamation of life’s vicissitudes churning emotions & propelling them into words alike now as I gaze out over snow-covered fields gently rolling under powder blue sky while a couple of sparrows chirp happily assuring all spring is nearly absconding from the meadow 1St Place Contest Winner Written: June 18, 2022 A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 6/26/2022 9:27:00 AM
A beautiful metaphor of life~congratulations on your win in the contest. :)Paulette
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Date: 6/24/2022 8:46:00 AM
This is so wonderfully creative Lasaad. I enjoyed your use of words that created the scent of spring as it moved on into a new season of life - your life. Nice metaphor. Congratulations on your trophy win! Blessings my friend!
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Date: 6/22/2022 12:52:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me delight in Spring's beauty though I live in a "Springless" country. God bless you.
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Date: 6/21/2022 7:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win, Sotto! Brilliantly penned indeed
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Date: 6/20/2022 11:57:00 PM
It's, indeed, a great painting. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/20/2022 10:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your prestigious trophy win dear friend Lasaad ! Great recognition !
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Date: 6/20/2022 7:43:00 PM
This is so fresh, you can feel the breeze
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Date: 6/20/2022 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Lasaad, so well written. Tom
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Date: 6/20/2022 12:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tom. So much appreciated
Date: 6/19/2022 9:00:00 AM
This is a lovely poem expressing spring's oncoming goodbye, in tandem with your personal experiences and your initiation into poetry....
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Date: 6/18/2022 1:01:00 PM
I like this a lot, Lasaad. I could picture your images so well. Nicely written.
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Date: 6/18/2022 11:15:00 AM
Excellent write, Lasaad, in superb vocabulary. Enjoyed the glimpse of your hues of spring.
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