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Soliloquy

“To be or not to be”, was Hamlet‘s sole question.
We’ve a common conundrum, that’s my confession.
Burn bridges or mend fences, in my discretion…

I stand above them, pistol heavy in my hand.
They cringe before me, she’s sobbing and he’s unmanned.
My mind’s really roiling, though my expression’s bland…

She surely did me wrong, there’s truly no dispute,
In flagrante delicto, they cannot refute.
Leaves me such a dilemma, achingly acute…

The Lord tells us “Vengeance is mine, I will repay!”
Also “to forgive is divine” didn’t he say?
How is a mere mortal to decide the right way…

But wait! “Nature weeps”, a pathetic fallacy 
As “either or” is just a false dichotomy 
In reality both are merely sophistry…

Should I mend the fence? Overly optimistic.
Should I burn the bridge? Aptly apocalyptic.
There is another choice, neatly nihilistic…

My attention was caught, resolution was sought.
The decision was fraught, it’s a Gordian knot 
Hamlet’s vexing question solved with a single shot…

New intent nicely teased, and tension slightly eased.
My mind now appeased, prior predicament ceased
With resolve swiftly pleased - the trigger slowly squeezed…

Joker vs Jester


The husband decided
To take a stand
Assert his rights
Make his demand
Thought he was holding
All the cards in his hand
Now he realizes
Things did not go as planned
His brain and his mouth
Left his heart unmanned
Anger and bitterness
Quite eloquently spoke
The heart left with no defense
Naturally got broke
The wife watches quietly
As not once she spoke
For none of this madness
Did she evoke
What a cruel.. cruel joke
Mess with her head
Breakup a marriage instead
Joker~vs~Jester
Throw in the towel enough said

Elusive Echo

The stream, a phantom in my hand,
I clench; the liquid's gone, unmanned.
To hold what shifts beyond recall,
Is chasing silence through a wall.


     David B Hurlburt Jr.


The Death of Dreams

A couple builds a home upon positive thoughts,
Thoughts plaited soft in assumed structures,
Structures of forever, of love’s warm talent,
Talent currently wrecked, torn apart.

Apart the couple drifts, unmoored, invisible,
Invisible the discomfort where love had been,
Been muffled now, this universe we fill,
Fill with stillness, cold and motionless.

Motionless the couple turns into memory’s ash,
Ash that glows then turns to trash,
Trash of promises and once-shared egotism,
Egotism now vanished, on either side.

Side by side, the couple used to stand,
Stand as one, with hearts unmanned,
Unmanned now by what life cashes,
Dreams are dead; the couple buried dreams.

Poem by N. Mugisho

Premium Member The Wordsmith - Apr 4, 5

Yes! day and night, inside my roaring shop,
pounding my heavy hammer ceaselessly 
against the hardened anvil Poetry,
I ply tough steel into a pleasant shape.

Working words cleansed of cheap and easy trope
which would debase my art’s due quality,
I craft a blade, or else a spade, to be
the prying prod of clever penmanship.

But sometimes, in the silence of sorrow,
my forge sits still, uncluttered and unmanned.
My arduous tasks exhaust me, and I say
“Let what labour’s left be done tomorrow!”—
For when my mind and vision wallow bland,
It’s best to rest and recover for a day.

Premium Member The Death of My Soul

In my chair, I sat, pure as the light/
When the Holy Spirit came with its might/
An outward explosion, a thunderous purge/
To banish the evil, to cleanse and emerge/

But I was a Saint, a soul unblemished/
Calm and serene, a power replenished/
Confusion stirred, its effort in vain/
Lightning crackled, I felt no pain/

Booming thunder, a storm's command/
Yet I stood stronger, my spirit unmanned/
The third attempt, a futile endeavor/
Power profound, fearless forever/

From ashes reborn, Hell now my home/
A fire unimaginable, I stand alone/
The Holy Spitit's trial, what did it achieve/
A Luciferian Saint with strength to believe/


The unspoken fear

The unspoken Fear

The weight of care, a constant hum,
For my son, my love, my fragile sum.
His needs are vast, his needs are deep,
A constant vigil, while I barely sleep.

I fear the shadows, the unseen hand,
That could steal my strength, leave him unmanned.
Who would hold him, with such tender grace?
Who could meet his needs, with the same embrace?

The thought of leaving, a chilling dread,
A gaping void, where hope lies dead.
My heart aches with worry, a constant tear,
For his fragile future, and my fading cheer.

But I will fight, with all my might,
To shield him from the coming night.
To find the strength, to carry on,
Until the dawn, when shadows are gone.

A bus in the hand

A bus in the hand,
Is worth two that fail to land,
Or fail to stop on demand,
Because they are needed,
   when trains do not run as planned,
Or there has been slide of hand,
From drivers on a mission unsanctioned,
By those in command.

The good news is that the bus in my hand,
Stops within walking distance at my command,
Which is a lucky break for my chances of  
 staying above Ground, 
Longer than planned,
With heart and lungs feeling needed,
And legs that are no longer unmanned,
With a good dose of natural Vitamin D,
That helps steady my hand,
And gives my brain a chance to expand.

So, I thank buses out of hand,
When I am tempted,
To wait on a bus that was scheduled,
But with no intention to arrive on time stated,
  on the electronic notice board, 
That those in the know never take for granted, 
Whenever the word scheduled, 
Remains unchanged,
And there is a near enough bus on hand.



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Premium Member With a ruthless hand

In shadows cold, you made your stand, 
With all the nerve yet none of the spine
You broke my heart with a ruthless hand

The bed you chose, I wish lies unmanned, 
A ghostly hollow of your design 
In shadows cold, you made your stand

True friends arise, they understand, 
But your treachery wears a warmer sign
You broke my heart with a ruthless hand

You left me here to face the sand
Your whispered promises malign;
In shadows cold, you made your stand

Each tear I shed is carved; but you planned,
Yet still, I rise from this decline; 
You broke my heart with a ruthless hand

Oh, taste the bitterness claimed, unplanned;
The price of trust—now pain entwined;
In shadows cold, you made your stand;
You broke my heart with a ruthless hand

A Consuming Weather

Clouds in a Walmart mirror.
The galvanized roof is
eclectically painted and rattling
its shifting shadows.

Some mutter,
hurry to the unmanned checkouts,
some seek a deeper shelter in the
sporting goods aisle's
The distant sounds of fire engines
and sirens,
a howling chorus of trepidation.

Outside in the midday gloom
parking-lot geese
are forming escape lines.
Squirrels gawp and chatter,
hit the ground running.

Another shoplifting tornado
has come to town,
pushing empty carts ahead
of its imminent funnel of fear.
A store greeter
grins like death,
as the gatecrashing wind
steals his breath.

The aftermath has yet to be counted,
though bargain priced Chinese calculators
are readily on sale everywhere.

Premium Member Behind the Scenes of a War-torn State

     The doctor’s practice went to waste
        the moment that the medic faced
     A call from his reserve platoon
        to fight a battle all too soon  

     The CEO of Pharma-Tech
        would leave behind all hands on deck
     When his brigade came calling him
        he knew the war was no mere whim

     The principal of my kids’ school
        had fought the call, but overruled
     He swiftly left his chair unmanned
        The army had ripped up his plans  

     ‘Coz ev’ry year since 'forty-eight
        Disruption's marred the Jewish State

The Domino Effect

The sky fell mercilessly and tornadoes fury was landed 
The earth caved where seeds of new crop, a farmer had planted.

In recession, the capitalists made a fortune 
and the deprived were left with debt and burden

In moments triumphs were not of those who had toiled hard
but those who were able to play the fluke card 

The rain did not fall in the barren land 
and the army fired at the innocent & unmanned

The aging parents lost their bread winning child 
And the winter at the refugee camps was anything but mild 

The father hit the mother in front of her young children very violently 
The forest fire cost every house on the ground blatantly 

The privileged were given more favours and opportunity 
The humble were provided with disappointments and ambiguity

 A family slept hungry again another night
 A child was left alone in fright 
 The pups were treated by their caretaker unkindly 
 All because someone treated their loving friend badly!

Crane

During the night, husks of buildings haunt the skies.
A hook hangs high a universe away.
It appears like a body - the way light lies.
Don’t do this anymore: make it day, make it day.

A swift gust would make the body fly.
Further and further and then something is missing.
Without the hook, a crane would but sigh.
Scale it please - the wind is listening.

There’s no need to fret just don’t hang.
He did that and now he explores the clouds.
Catch the northern wind with that familiar pang.
Now you can see how dull lights are through these shrouds.

In the place where you stand,
In an ocean of metal caskets,
Every inch is unmanned
Just for now. You’ll have to wait for the rackets.

If the chain around your neck is inevitable.
Then jump off and hear what he said.
Wind blows everything that is stable.
And then he’ll tell you that you can’t be dead.

You can’t be.
He’d never let that happen to me.

Premium Member Drone

A drone be, a male bee,
useless in hive of she's,
except at mating time!
Expelled when job done.

A drone is monotonous hum
of sitars and bag-pipes,
mantras meditating,
prayer wheels.

A drone is now an aerial vehicle,
an unmanned helicopter
used for surveillance
and dropping bombs.
A modern form of warfare
whose hum is feared
for the terror it brings
anonymous and remotely
with the sender
out of harm's way.
Just as the bullet be,
when it leaves the barrel
of the way off shooter's riffle.

The drone is still so masculine
but hardly humdrum,
anymore.

Underneath the Bubbles

The lines in my eyes are red-rimmed in sweat
 Burning is the sensation of this melting intellect
  Focus has abandoned to an easier place to think
   Unmanned in disaster melted skin turning pink

The ringing in my ears compromises my own thought
 Unable to pay attention to who, when, where, or what
  Overwhelming my existence, won't follow my own path
   Nothing seems to add up I just can't do the math

Lines crack beside the crow's feet of my eyes
 Belief is beginning to feel like the Devil in denial
  The sands never fall up just down to time one's death
   The water is rising under the bubbles of my last breath


                    bmdavey@01/16/2023

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