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From high above the mighty eagles soar and gaze with teary eyes upon the land; a proud and peaceful nation thrived, before the bombs began to fall with czar’s command. Their saddened eyes see blood upon the sand as innocence lay scattered on the shore; they’re witnessing the slaughter now at hand from high above as mighty eagles soar. Her cities lay in ruin from the war; her leaders pleading for a helping hand; the world in horror watches evermore, and gaze with teary eyes upon the land. Atrocities and pillage deftly planned erasing all the joys from days of yore; the villages and townships now unmanned where proud and peaceful nation thrived before. I cannot see the reason for this gore nor endgame of this despot’s evil hand, and history repeats itself once more as bombs begin to fall with czar’s command. And what will be the outcome of this stand when smoke has cleared the war which we deplore; and who will be the next at his demand as angel’s tears begin to fall once more from high above? July 1, 2022

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Date: 9/12/2022 3:02:00 PM
Dear John, an exquisite poem full of potent passion and powerful imagery masterfully executed in the perfect frame of a rondeau redouble. Your poignant pen shines with artistic empathy and intensity. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark’s contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/13/2022 6:05:00 AM
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, Susan. Your thoughts always brighten my day. Hugs, John
Date: 9/12/2022 10:11:00 AM
John, wo, I love this poem and congratulations on your win in the contest, blessings~
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/13/2022 6:03:00 AM
Thank you so much, Constance, I'm glad you liked it. Hugs, John
Date: 9/11/2022 9:05:00 PM
John, a very poignant message with an interesting perspective, "The View From Up Above" including eagles and angels. "What will be the outcome of this stand when smoke has cleared the war which we deplore ...?" Man dominates man to his injury now, but I believe that one day soon man will learn war no more. Congratulations on your win on Mile 13 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 14 has already started!
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/12/2022 6:21:00 AM
Thanks, Mark, I'm glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for hosting this great race! John
Date: 9/11/2022 8:35:00 PM
"who will be the next at his demand" - Very beautiful. Congratulations!
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/12/2022 6:19:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate it. John
Date: 9/11/2022 8:30:00 PM
Back again with warm congratulations on your win, John!
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/12/2022 6:18:00 AM
Thanks, US, I appreciate it. John
Date: 8/8/2022 5:13:00 AM
John this is poetry at its best and there could be no doubt that the sponsor recognized that this masterpiece certainly warranted a trophy win. I love your eloquent words used and send you huge congratulations my friend, Jennifer
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/8/2022 5:36:00 AM
Thank you, Jenn, I appreciate it so much. Hugs, John
Date: 7/21/2022 10:17:00 AM
Superb writing. Big congratulations on your trophy win!
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/21/2022 10:27:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea, I appreciate it. John
Date: 7/18/2022 7:17:00 PM
Wow John so poignant, melancholy, intense and beautiful all at once. The eagles gaze is a brutal reality with much joy erased.This is a fav for me . Big congratulations on your win. Blessings, Susan :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/19/2022 2:49:00 AM
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and comments, Susan, and thanks for saving it to favorites. Hugs, John
Date: 7/17/2022 1:55:00 PM
Wow,wow,wow John! This difficult form was exemplified perfectly by you in this amazing Trophy poem. The passion and empathy was felt in every line. Bravo John and congratulations on your fantastic win! A Fave for me my friend. Blessings xxoo
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/18/2022 6:02:00 AM
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, Connie, I appreciate it. And thanks for saving this to your favorites. Hugs, John
Date: 7/15/2022 10:52:00 AM
Hi John, I'm happy I checked out your work, this poem is beautiful and heart wrenching at the same time, thank you.
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/15/2022 1:55:00 PM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments, Eileen, I appreciate it. John
Date: 7/14/2022 4:27:00 PM
Excellent Rondeau, John. Congratulations on your "Trophy" win! Timely topic written from the perspective of a soaring eagle. Such a tragedy, power mad men around the world threaten our existence for selfish and needless reasons. The terror of war and possibility of the end, just because Putin and a few other world leaders think they can do whatever they want to get wht they want. Humanity is the price and it doesn't matter to them. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry. Bill
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/15/2022 1:54:00 PM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments, Bill, it is truly a sad situation when a person's ego and greed for power are more important than their compassion for humanity. I'm not sure that Putin has ANY compassion for humanity. Perhaps one day the Russian people will realize this and overthrow him. Have a good weekend. John
Date: 7/10/2022 8:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win. From high or ground truly the war that changes everything.
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/11/2022 6:18:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments, DW, it is hard imagining this happening in the 21st century, yet here we are. I wonder where it goes from here. John
Date: 7/10/2022 2:12:00 AM
For fear of just repeating all that has been said John, I'll just add the words "Sheer Brilliance." Cheers - Gary
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/10/2022 7:34:00 AM
Thanks so much for your kind words, Gary, I appreciate it. Cheers.
Date: 7/9/2022 6:40:00 AM
Awesome and congrats! This flows beautifully. A well-deserved win! Linda
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/9/2022 8:15:00 AM
Thank you so much, Linda, I appreciate it. John
Date: 7/7/2022 11:28:00 AM
John, you have lifted us above the fray to give us your birds-eye-view of chaos all couched in your poetic wisdom. Congratulations on your trophy win. Blessings!
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Date: 7/8/2022 2:56:00 AM
Thanks so much for your thoughts and and comments, Sam, I appreciate it. John
Date: 7/7/2022 8:24:00 AM
You’ve hit the angst, suffering and historical repeat nail on the head! Congratulations on your top trophy!
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/8/2022 2:48:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kim, I appreciate it. Hugs, John
Date: 7/7/2022 4:52:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... a grim reality, exposed and expressed poetically. God bless you.
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/7/2022 4:56:00 AM
The situation in the Ukraine is a sad reality, it's hard to believe this could happen in the 21st century yet here we are. Thank you for your comments, Beata, I appreciate it. John
Date: 7/6/2022 3:24:00 PM
A well written Rondeau congrats on your 1st place win dear John
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/6/2022 4:18:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vie, I appreciate it. John
Date: 7/6/2022 12:51:00 AM
An amazing write in a difficult form and so relevant to the ongoing humanitarian crisis. Congrats on your top win, John!
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/6/2022 4:55:00 AM
Thanks so much US, I appreciate it. John
Date: 7/5/2022 9:07:00 PM
Congrats on your win, beautifully written
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/10/2022 5:24:00 AM
Thanks so much, I appreciate it.
Date: 7/5/2022 4:48:00 PM
Congratulations John, with this top win in the contest. So deserving, my dear sweet friend. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/6/2022 4:54:00 AM
Thank you, Brandy, I appreciate it. Hugs, John
Date: 7/5/2022 11:48:00 AM
An apt poem on the subject done so impeccably. Well done and congrats on your top finish.
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/5/2022 1:01:00 PM
Thanks, Jesse, I appreciate it. John
Date: 7/5/2022 9:32:00 AM
Wow John. This leaves me speechless. Great work and congratulations! Linda
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/5/2022 12:18:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda, your comment leaves me speechless. Hugs, John
Date: 7/5/2022 8:39:00 AM
You are such a wonderful writer. Congratulations!
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/5/2022 11:48:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your kind comments. John
Date: 7/5/2022 7:36:00 AM
John, my congratulations to you for your first place trophy win in my contest. This poetry form is not easy to navigate, but you have do so very well, and I'm proud of this poem. Your theme is timely and your rhymes were excellent.
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/5/2022 7:41:00 AM
Thanks Milt, I appreciate it and thanks for hosting the contest. I did find it to be a challenging form to write, but it's good to challenge ourselves once in a while. John
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