Trancelike Poems | Examples

Premium MemberTrancelike Dream

I don’t want to 
Submit myself 
To flashing ads 
And transient script 
From a digital screen, 
I want to hold a real book, 
Lose myself in its pages, 
In a trancelike dream.
Categories: trancelike, integrity, life, literature, nostalgia,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberMake Believe


It came to me in moon’s soft shadow,
As it will at times, still as the frost
Withering the leaves, branches unsheltered,
Buried in embittered …
On December’s naked chill,
Startling the shadows 
From forests who can fill
The heart with a sense of its 
Melancholic mist, fading…
Into the echo of night’s brave 
Silence, like a lost thought
Stuttering as it flies,
Right out of the mind, unbridled - 
Free as the wind and just as passionate,
A winged morsel of a dream,
Never sure it will be, but always hopeful,
Praying in faith, believing 
Despite the winter’s flakes, 
That spring will sing its perfect grace…
Into hearts who keep on dreaming,
Seeing the sun melt away each doubt,
Breathing prayers of certainty,
In spite of all the reasons for putting 
Away that trancelike state,
beneath layers of make believe!
Categories: trancelike, beautiful, moon, night, stars,
Form: Free verse


Premium MemberA Wake Up Call

A WAKE UP CALL
the sleep
     of centuries
trancelike
induced
restlessness
  delved the unconscience

ambivalence
   a constant interplay
 patterning
      tranquil hours
inviolate
profiled
in revolutions
    throes

THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived
Categories: trancelike, poetry,
Form: Other

Premium MemberFantasia Twenty-One

yellow bird is back to the tranquil meadow 
                    where my soul finds a true repose, 
                            she didn't leave me....
                         I speak to her every day, 
                        she tweets back with glee! 

             we talk about the illusory flamboyant days 
                       which tip-toed away in a veil, 
                    the glistening saffron-hued days ~
                          when I was twenty-one, 
      with trancelike beat in my feet, enthralling song in my heart, 
                   dreamy eyes unfolding beauty of love! 

                    with amber kindness in my soul, 
                    with tangerine hope in my voice, 
                      with azure grace in my walk, 
                with vermillion exuberance in my dance. 
 
                that twenty-one is never really gone, 
                      I feel its demure whispering, 
              the hope, the dream, the cadence, the beat, 
                      it's incredible! never left me
Categories: trancelike, allegory, bird,
Form: Imagism

Premium MemberDreamlike-

Dreamlike,
So surreal my dream
 I am floating in mid-air 
Falling from my inter realm 
A flying soul so ethereal
 Felt ever unreal
 I am amazed and in a hazy state 
What is my faith
 I'm falling to a new space 

In another scheme a violent dream
I was asleep to the shadowy streams
Again floating me emerging sedated 
Awakening 
Subconscious now fully arose 
And my cardinal state 
For longer I meditate
Wait! crackling brights of light flames

Flooring soaring high stills feels like I'm dreaming
Flame circulate in my room 
Of my home 
Through the doorway appeared essence and fears 
Am I at Hell's gate 
Imaginary my fate 
Fire scape 
Wither free falling in space

Twixt heavens Glory and Gates
DreamLike state? 
Questioning myself 
Am I free falling floating to heaven
Or am I awakened eyes blazing lying in hell
Shall I awaken in this beautiful yet scary trancelike wake
I am, I was in a dreamlike state


5/31/21
2nd place Placement in Contest
For Writing Prompt Dreamlike Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by  Constance LaFrance
Categories: trancelike, adventure, allusion, analogy, anxiety,
Form: Rhyme


Premium MemberImaginary Lover

Trancelike moments linger as I bid my time  
a glimpse of angular contour,  a face a smile 
warmer then the melting sun his hand in mine  
surreal in dreamlike state, his touch docile  

as gentle as the rain that falls from heaven's lair 
he, my imaginary lover my ethereal beau 
is a memorized forbiddance, together we draw air 
as we dance upon cloud nine without a care 

Unreal as the twinkle of a star in heaven's realm   
those hazy moments spent, devour me whole  
they take me to a shadowy place beneath the elm  
where we deflower every kiss, then lose control.   
   

May 30, 2021
Sponsor : Constance La France 
Contest Name: Writer prompt - dreamlike
Categories: trancelike, romance,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberAliferous Light

*Image of Abstract, Yellow, Fireflies provided by Pixabay.

Aliferous Light

Fireflies glint yon verdures lush blades
in their trancelike swells midst farmlands
stilled beasts ... surreal stars charades
shadowy realm lone moon commands.

Zephyrs thrust e'er more, rousing whole
fireflies glint yon verdures lush blades
deign wrenched ... ethereal control
neath nascent twilight's hazy shades.

Winged beacons currents dusk evades
dreamlike bugs e'er so oft lithe frames,
fireflies glint yon verdures lush blades
where breeds unreal orphic claims.

Languor beetle's their temporal flights
... imaginary thoughts cascades
prompts a fond adieu, dimming lights,
fireflies glint yon verdures lush blades.

2021 May 30
*3rd Place*
Writing Prompt - Dreamlike
~~Constance La France: Judged 2021 June 02
Categories: trancelike, fire, flying, insect,
Form: Quatern

Dawn Bell

Surreal
Unreal landscape
Imaginary light
Shadowy ethereal fog
Hazy

Dreamlike
Spires rising
Needles through wispy grey
As dawn breaks with sharp bells tolling
Trancelike

Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Constance La France
Categories: trancelike, good morning, silence,
Form: Cinquain

Premium MemberAnd When You Choose To Dream

Dream the dreams that have never been dreamt. David Bower

 And When You Choose to Dream  

Go on wings of hope
Not tiny robins’ wings
but bold and tireless dragon wings,
ethereal, shadowy, intangible in the air.

Go to the hazy realms beyond the imaginary
beyond the trancelike spell of what is unattainable
Where the unreal becomes real, 
even the dreamlike becomes surreal

Live on the words that bind your heart
Return - when you have the answers. 

~ First Place~
Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Poetry Contest
Constance La France
Date 5/29/21
Categories: trancelike, dream, imagination, word play,
Form: Free verse

Life Real Or Dream

50 years have passed since birth
Seems unbelievable
Fleeting moments, moving fast

Past is  HAZY
Mostly forgotten
Only few memories remain

Is this life real or IMAGINARY?
Am I real?

Are things actually happening?
Or
Are they DREAMLIKE, UNREAL?

Although I am fifty 
Still many mysteries remain unresolved!

Who am I?

I can survive with artificial organs, 
I can breathe with artificial respiration
I am surely not the body or breathe
Then who am I?
I want to see myself
Why am I hidden from view?

Morning to night, time flies
Although I live, life seems TRANCELIKE
Everything seems a figment of my own imagination, SURREAL

I feel I am a SHADOWY figure, ETHEREAL, 
I will very soon disappear

29.05.2021

Contest Name : Writing Prompt - Dreamlike
Sponsor : Constance La France
Categories: trancelike, life, surreal,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberMind-Travelin'

Some lackadaisical days,
I sit peacefully still 
in a trancelike state,
embarking on a spectacular, 
unreal adventure
to an imaginary somewhere
far removed from 
the present. My mind free as a bird
as I navigate through the hazy
and shadowy corridors 
of the terra incognita, arriving 
at a dreamlike no man's land;
an untouched, ethereal place 
of wonder fit for a king!
Could this be heaven?
I'm meditating,
but it feels like I'm in 
a surreal dream!


Submitted for...
Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Constance La France
Date written: 05/29/2021
Categories: trancelike, adventure, freedom, imagery,
Form: Imagism

Premium MemberDreaming

Dreaming

“Dreamlike”, I slipped deeper into an “imaginary” place -
A strange, silent, brooding, “surreal” castle,
Built into the side of a mountain in a land of perpetual snows,
And lighted only by “hazy”, flickering torches.

Deep into the “shadowy”, towering nimbus of
Doubt, depression, despair,
That dogged my every step.

Floating in “unreal” picture frames,
I travelled “trancelike” in search of Taktsang,
And the Tiger’s Nest,
Where I was told serenity and happiness abide. 

Later, awakening to the sound of prayer wheels,
The sun had crested.
A shaven, monk in a saffron, “ethereal” robe,
Who has nothing, but has no need of anything,
Presented me with a chalice of fragrant tea
Infused with peace, that transfigured my soul.  

May 28, 2021

Contest:  Writing Prompt – Dreamlike – Poetry Contest
Sponsor:  Constance La France
Categories: trancelike, dream, imagery,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberSublime Virtual Spree

“Where there is no vision, the people perish: but he that keepeth the law, happy is he.”  Proverbs 29:18 of the King James Bible

Wrapped around my virtual mindfulness spree
I behold our special child basking in freedom
beyond dreamlike fantasy, verily ecstatic
zooming around park, designed for surreal venture.

Never unreal midst my faith-brightened vision
our son radiates exuberance against hazy ambiance
as he recites Bible verses, fortified with distinct gestures
only imaginary in skeptic unbelieving minds.

Outshining shadowy doubts, our young man prevails
sharing the Gospel, enunciating the love of God…
thus I delightfully see in seemingly trancelike enthrallment
while praying for miraculous occurrence, very possible.

Whether those are ethereal or celestial moments
To me, they are heavenly sublime wondrous merriments.

May 29, 2021
2nd place, "Writing Prompt - Dreamlike" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France; judged on 6/2/2021.
Categories: trancelike, blessing, christian, faith, god,
Form: Quatorzain

Premium MemberTwisted Plots

She found a hero in the book's shadowy schemes,
 The detective who could enter the realm of dreams
 She turned the pages of her imagination
 As the book's surreal plot unfolded

 It was in this dreamlike dimension
 The fiend would be found,
 In slumber his dreams would give him away
 And her hero would be crowned

 Then the plot took another twist
 And her conclusions became hazy
 She realized her assumptions were unreal
 The lines became blurred in this imaginary zone

 She finally reached the last chapter
 in this twisted ethereal tale,
 She stared at the book in a trancelike state;
 Her hero was the villain she had come to hate!

 5-28-2021
 Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Poetry Contest
 Sponsor: Constance La France
Categories: trancelike, books, imagination,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberFireflies In Flight

Under a canopy of lime and teal,
Nature creates a hazy, dreamlike scene;
as dappled light fuels the surreal.
And with an ethereal spectral sheen:
the leaves appear gilded: no longer green.

Orange carpets the barren hoarfrost ground,
creating a hypnotic, trancelike feel;
treading upon Death's skin, crackled and browned.
And the frosty nights have a frigid feel;
even though Autumn seems so ideal.

A fantasy of color and shadows;
highlighted by scattered beams of sunlight:
colored leaves are destined to decompose.
And yet, like flickering fireflies in flight:
they compete with the twinkling stars at night.
Categories: trancelike, 10th grade, 11th grade,
Form: Quintain (English)

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