Mystic Rose Rose Poet Rhyme

Imaginary Lover

Trancelike moments linger as I bid my time  
a glimpse of angular contour,  a face a smile 
warmer then the melting sun his hand in mine  
surreal in dreamlike state, his touch docile  

as gentle as the rain that falls from heaven's lair 
he, my imaginary lover my ethereal beau 
is a memorized forbiddance, together we draw air 
as we dance upon cloud nine without a care 

Unreal as the twinkle of a star in heaven's realm   
those hazy moments spent, devour me whole  
they take me to a shadowy place beneath the elm  
where we deflower every kiss, then lose control.   
   

May 30, 2021
Sponsor : Constance La France 
Contest Name: Writer prompt - dreamlike

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Paula Goldsmith June 3, 2021 at 9:21 AM Congratulations on your win. What a story/write and picture. The heat was coming off the page. Have a blessed day..........

Constance La France June 2, 2021 at 3:20 PM Mystic, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge, and I like your image too, love - Constance

Christuraj Alex June 2, 2021 at 12:09 PM Wonderful Image. Congratulations!

Ann Foster June 2, 2021 at 7:52 AM Sweet images... lovely words. Ann

Eve Roper June 1, 2021 at 7:23 AM Beautiful imagery and the feel of romantic love, Mystic Rose. Good luck in the contest; I enjoyed reading. I hope you and Aldo are well my friend. Hugs Eve

Quoth Theraven May 31, 2021 at 4:37 PM Mystic Rose Rose, It's no small thing your gift in expression. Breath a little easier when I finish your writes. You go to such fine places way up on a wire, walking.. without a net. -Richard

Sotto Poet May 31, 2021 at 2:30 PM Very well done prose, your wonderful symbolism and wording use shed even more beautiful rythme on your Poem, best wishes for a win. Blessings and hugs

Judy Ball May 31, 2021 at 7:01 AM Lovely my friend. I think many have had a dream lover from time to time. Reminds me of the words to an old song. "I keep a dream lover so I don't have to dream alone." Well done. Hope you win. God Bless, JB

Vijay Pandit May 31, 2021 at 4:58 AM Deflower every kiss and lose control--imaginary or not your poem is dreamlike. All the best, Vienna.

Victor Buhagiar May 31, 2021 at 12:54 AM You must have had a deep dream for this lovely romantic poem. Best for a win. Hugs.