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Imaginary Lover

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Trancelike moments linger as I bid my time a glimpse of angular contour, a face a smile warmer then the melting sun his hand in mine surreal in dreamlike state, his touch docile as gentle as the rain that falls from heaven's lair he, my imaginary lover my ethereal beau is a memorized forbiddance, together we draw air as we dance upon cloud nine without a care Unreal as the twinkle of a star in heaven's realm those hazy moments spent, devour me whole they take me to a shadowy place beneath the elm where we deflower every kiss, then lose control. May 30, 2021 Sponsor : Constance La France Contest Name: Writer prompt - dreamlike

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/3/2021 9:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a story/write and picture. The heat was coming off the page. Have a blessed day..........

Constance La France

Date: 6/2/2021 3:20:00 PM

Mystic, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge, and I like your image too, love - Constance

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/2/2021 12:09:00 PM

Wonderful Image. Congratulations!

Ann Foster

Date: 6/2/2021 7:52:00 AM

Sweet images... lovely words. Ann

Eve Roper

Date: 6/1/2021 7:23:00 AM

Beautiful imagery and the feel of romantic love, Mystic Rose. Good luck in the contest; I enjoyed reading. I hope you and Aldo are well my friend. Hugs Eve

Quoth Theraven

Date: 5/31/2021 4:37:00 PM

Mystic Rose Rose, It's no small thing your gift in expression. Breath a little easier when I finish your writes. You go to such fine places way up on a wire, walking.. without a net. -Richard

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/31/2021 2:30:00 PM

Very well done prose, your wonderful symbolism and wording use shed even more beautiful rythme on your Poem, best wishes for a win. Blessings and hugs

Judy Ball

Date: 5/31/2021 7:01:00 AM

Lovely my friend. I think many have had a dream lover from time to time. Reminds me of the words to an old song. "I keep a dream lover so I don't have to dream alone." Well done. Hope you win. God Bless, JB

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/31/2021 4:58:00 AM

Deflower every kiss and lose control--imaginary or not your poem is dreamlike. All the best, Vienna.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/31/2021 12:54:00 AM

You must have had a deep dream for this lovely romantic poem. Best for a win. Hugs.