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Written on November 19, 2023

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It came to me in moon’s soft shadow, As it will at times, still as the frost Withering the leaves, branches unsheltered, Buried in embittered … On December’s naked chill, Startling the shadows From forests who can fill The heart with a sense of its Melancholic mist, fading… Into the echo of night’s brave Silence, like a lost thought Stuttering as it flies, Right out of the mind, unbridled - Free as the wind and just as passionate, A winged morsel of a dream, Never sure it will be, but always hopeful, Praying in faith, believing Despite the winter’s flakes, That spring will sing its perfect grace… Into hearts who keep on dreaming, Seeing the sun melt away each doubt, Breathing prayers of certainty, In spite of all the reasons for putting Away that trancelike state, beneath layers of make believe!

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Date: 11/19/2023 3:18:00 PM
you imagery was just magnificent, Regina! This was my favorite part: Breathing prayers of certainty, In spite of all the reasons for putting Away that trancelike state, beneath layers of make believe! Faith is so magical, isn't it? I'm always uplifted after reading your poems...you have a beautiful spirit and light about you. Have a great Thanksgiving, Sara
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Date: 11/19/2023 3:16:00 PM
A magical enchanting poem Regina! Lovely….Debx
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