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Sublime Virtual Spree

“Where there is no vision, the people perish: but he that keepeth the law, happy is he.” Proverbs 29:18 of the King James Bible
Wrapped around my virtual mindfulness spree I behold our special child basking in freedom beyond dreamlike fantasy, verily ecstatic zooming around park, designed for surreal venture. Never unreal midst my faith-brightened vision our son radiates exuberance against hazy ambiance as he recites Bible verses, fortified with distinct gestures only imaginary in skeptic unbelieving minds. Outshining shadowy doubts, our young man prevails sharing the Gospel, enunciating the love of God… thus I delightfully see in seemingly trancelike enthrallment while praying for miraculous occurrence, very possible. Whether those are ethereal or celestial moments To me, they are heavenly sublime wondrous merriments.
May 29, 2021 2nd place, "Writing Prompt - Dreamlike" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France; judged on 6/2/2021.

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Date: 6/2/2021 3:22:00 PM
Beata, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge, and I like your quote too, love _ Constance
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" Love how you added Proverbs 29:18. Have a blessed day..................
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Date: 5/30/2021 4:18:00 PM
Creative way to go with the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
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