Dreaming

Dreaming

“Dreamlike”, I slipped deeper into an “imaginary” place -
A strange, silent, brooding, “surreal” castle,
Built into the side of a mountain in a land of perpetual snows,
And lighted only by “hazy”, flickering torches.

Deep into the “shadowy”, towering nimbus of
Doubt, depression, despair,
That dogged my every step.

Floating in “unreal” picture frames,
I travelled “trancelike” in search of Taktsang,
And the Tiger’s Nest,
Where I was told serenity and happiness abide. 

Later, awakening to the sound of prayer wheels,
The sun had crested.
A shaven, monk in a saffron, “ethereal” robe,
Who has nothing, but has no need of anything,
Presented me with a chalice of fragrant tea
Infused with peace, that transfigured my soul.  

May 28, 2021

Contest:  Writing Prompt – Dreamlike – Poetry Contest
Sponsor:  Constance La France
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Pathak Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 10:49 PM
Rich imagery riding on the wings of dreamlike sequence, and the result is a well-deserved win, congrats
Holmes Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 11:10 AM
Aniruddha - thank you - I enjoyed working on this poem for the contest. I appreciate you taking the time to send me a comment - David
Radice Avatar
June 17, 2021 at 2:50 AM
David, I've just come across this poem and felt I was there in Bhutan drinking the fragrant tea. I've said it before but your ability to transport the reader to a place through your words and imagery are enviable. Cheers - Gary
Holmes Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 2:20 PM
Dear Gary - thank you for your note. Words enrich our lives and provide wonderful sustenance. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my work. David
Roper Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 10:35 PM
David, great imagery and feeling. Congratulations on your win, David. Enjoyed reading. My warmest wishes. God bless you. <3
Holmes Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 1:11 PM
Eve - back at you - congratulations on your win too! Thank you for your comments - am glad you enjoyed reading, as I really enjoyed this contest - warm wishes to you too. David
La France Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 2:33 PM
David, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge, peace - Constance
Holmes Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 1:08 PM
Constance - thank you so much. I really enjoyed your contest and appreciate your comments and for choosing my poem - David
Alex Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 11:55 AM
Good Dream. Congratulations!
Holmes Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 1:11 PM
Christuraj - thank you for your comments - David
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