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Premium Member Dream world

“creation is substantially nothing but a mere idea-play of Nature on the only Real Substance, God, the Eternal Father”
~ extract from ‘The Holy Science’


Ramana inquired, ‘Who am I?’
Strange it is, no one seems to know
We’re born in this form, which will die
Let’s find the truth in stillness slow

Senses look outward in the world
We assume we’re this body-mind
Lost in desires, we’re by thoughts twirled
The joy we seek, we fail to find 

Watching thought spirals come and go
Dropping concepts, if we be still 
Releasing cravings of ego 
Voids within us on their own fill

Although thoughts cease, we yet exist
As pure awareness self-aware
No to-do list, we’re a bliss mist
Thus with heart of God, we so pair

Ego dies, space and time too fade
We then see our true form as light
At peace in God’s heavenly glade
Love’s imbibed to our heart’s delight

God alone is and we’re as He
He dwells in us and we in Him
That life is a dream we now see
Projected because of God’s whim

When thoughts cease, we metamorphose 
Ego dies and we are reborn
Our Self glows in tranquil repose
Death of form is no cause to mourn

Premium Member SQUIRREL'S LIVES MATTER

SQUIRRELS' LIVES MATTER
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With tiny paws raised, scurry of squirrels took a stand,
"Dear gardener, how dare you! This is quite unplanned!
    You’ve vacuumed up our nutty feast,
    Our food supply substantially decreased.
Now we’re left with just crumbs in the strand!"

With their cheeks full of nuts, they declared,
"We demand that our acorns be spared!”
    With a chant and a cheer,
    They made it quite clear,
“Our hunger should not be impaired!"

They marched with their tiny fists bold,
In search of their acorns, their treasures of gold.
    With signs made of leaves,
    They voiced their grievances,
While the gardener laughed, "Oh, do be told!"

"Dear squirrels, your acorns are safe,
In the shed, they’ve found a new place!
    So rally your scurry, your crew,
    And I'll bring them straight to you,
Now your anger for me you must erase!"

Metamorph Prose

From need to want
From want to content

From scared to aware
From aware to circumvent

From lonely to dating
From dating to loving

From lost to found
From found to glowing

From hopeless to hope
From hope to seeing

From crying to laughing
From laughing to bonding

From empty to half-full
From half-full to overflowing

From poor to stable
From stable to substantially

No longer the past or future robs the present.


Premium Member Is This a Lie

Is this a lie?
Do you believe the truth, in fact?
Is this a lie?
Substantially, you do belie
the whale of a tale is fact-packed.
The honest truth can be sidetracked.
Is this a lie?

Premium Member Voyage Through Pages

 
Book pages riffle dance
Feeling its steady glance
 
Thoughts soaked up
Dreams turnup
 
Time doesn’t halt
Nostalgic vault
 
Somber fingers
Forehead expression lingers
 
Outside world nonexistent
Substantially existent


1/29/2025

Premium Member Vanessa's LIFE

Vanessa was a very vivacious 
Virgin with vast amounts of 
Various captivating capital.
Vanessa was still substantially 
Vigorously victorious. She was
Almost always blatantly Boldly
Brilliant always at every instant
Vanessa was never a victim.
Not quite part of the vicious 
System.  And too she was wondrously
Very vigilant in her position to the
Point of stellar strict religion 
Vanessa at times
Vehemently voicing her optimistic 
Obliterating opinion in the presence 
Of opposition and she was 
Young only thirty one. Vanessa
Was also at times valiant and
Deserved validation and rhetorical 
Respect. Played much of the time by
Her own rules until she met Val.
Then then and....


Premium Member The Way of the Future

We will build our "Mars Voyager Spaceship" on our Moon. 
this Spaceship can only be built on our moon, for weight, size soon, 
            we will power this craft not to compromise...      
              with Space-Based Solar Power Equipment...  
                technologies we now have on Earth...                  
  Since clouds, atmosphere nighttime is absent in space,
                  satellite-based solar panels magnificent...
     
 would also be able to capture while transmits substantially      
                   more energy than terrestrial solar panels...
reflectors also a microwave or laser power transmitter, continually...   
                        
directing solar radiation onto huge solar panels, attached,
                  on our 'Mars Voyager Spaceship'...
           these panels convert solar power, wa-la...               
   into either a microwave or a laser,  then beam uninterrupted power
                                     all our way to Mars Ta-Da

Premium Member Poetrysoup Potions: Just Talking

Poetry positively proud
Purposeful Pondering Petals 
Of a softest 
 perpetual Persuasion poetry
Soup potion renders elation 
Energy elevation? It is the
Escalation of the notion of a
Poetrysoup potion. Skipping 
Stones at the liquid ledge at
The edge of tomorrow look
Through time. Is it the kind of
Time when promises are
Kept. Rhymes to eccept. Left
Right left right crept. The
Potion of devotion.  Explosion 
Of the heart. Is there a Cardiac
Guard. It especially exceptionally 
Excellently. Artfully, awesome,
Substantially systematic just
Poetic words. That of which
Definitions never ever heard
Poetry potions poetic notions
I think the course has ended
But since I'm a versatile 
Occupational better version of
Myself I'll continue in another
Rhyme at a different kind of
Communication but, I care only
For diligent conversation it
Really shouldn't  matter though 
I communicate in poetry I know
All the cues. Carry on my poetic
Friends this is me signing out.
Farewell, Farewell again.
Farewell.

Premium Member Msdos Auxiliairr- a Dedicated Verse To Kaitlyn Tiger

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Rearward following  assistant gatherings
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Assistant nurtured provider
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   Ms. Dos Auxiliaire~

6/7/23
Written by James Edward Lee Sr 2o23 
a Pantoum Poem

Sea of Serenity

Shine on, dusk and dawn, shimmering shore, creatures explore
Ecstastically, rhythically, excitedly, substantially…playfully in harmony
Adoringly and in loathingly ways…sharks, eels, and other intriguing, but aggressive sea creatures share the ocean with humongous, gracious whales, dolphins of desire and delightfulness, and many fish and living things of that wild and free nature…

Oceans drift on, sun and moon reflected…
Freedom and chaos entwine, resurrected…

Shallow and deep…nothing in between…
Empathetic waters below low and up above
Radiance and abyss clash together and seperate the living from the dead
Emboldening the weak, feeble and unstable in heart
Nostalgic and memorable to the sea floor to the surface
Imaginative and spontaneous
Tidal waves soar — hope and happiness in store
You and I swimming together…all the more…

Premium Member Genuine Demeanor

What prepares your usurpations?
One more juncture of this person.
An individual who is rising
Misery is not too far off.
Shaking?

No odds, elderly friend.
You withdrew quite a while in the past.
Going in reverse on the scar.
Draining from the spine to the front!

I'm wearied of my own self.
And substantially slain from despair.
I was effectively let down.
And concede my responsibility.

As yet, I befall a cruel pundit of myself.
Signally on this spot, I am at long last.
Despite the injuries
I gain the height of a lance!

What were your suspicions?
Face in hassle.
In his authentic demeanor.

Something is devouring inside of me.
Otherwise, I have no chance of diverting it off.

Written: March 15, 2022

Premium Member Abecedarian Alliteration

An abecedarian Australian animal activist
Bagged bodacious big bucks
Caustically criticizing crocodiles,
Driving darling dragons
Essentially extinct. Eschewing
Fact, fabricating fanciful fiction,
Grifting gloriously,
He haughtily held hostage
Important, instructive information,
Juxtaposed jaundiced, junk
Kangaroo kills,
Leveling large lizard libel,
Manufacturing marsupial misinformation malevolently.
On other ominous occasions,
Preferring pernicious propaganda,
Quickly, querulously, quashed
Real, rational reports, rather,
Substituted several substantially
Tarnished technical travesties,
Undermining unified understanding.
Very vociferously, viciously
Wrote works without warrant,
Xenophobic xenotypic
yarns, yammering yellow-bellied yawps,
Zombie-like, zealously.

Stream of Conciousness

collaborate, elaborate

conductively emasculate

submissive, entanglement

collectively salivate.

redistributive contemplate

delirious encapsulate danger-

actualize, substitutive penalize.

collectively, abstractness from

radiance to darkness.

antagonistic death rate

the fallacy in dead weight.

reprehensible antithesis

conglomerate esophagus. 

speckled and corroded,

constructively demoted.

perniciously solitude, destitute and longitude.

contact free cohesively elongated actuality.

substantially creative

ingeniously innovative.

crafting masterpiece from thread

contempt breeds success or death.

the effort does not translate to achievement.

Premium Member Life's Cycle

Conceived and then born in accordance with God's plan,
I'm thrust into a world that I don't understand;
and introduced to pain.

As a child, fantasy forged my reality;
allowing me to feel untethered and carefree;
communing with nature.

Curiosity sparked my imagination;
marking my youth as a time of observation;
and loss of innocence.

I found the world a highly competitive place;
roughly divided by belief, gender, and race;
all conditioned to lie.

Hope provided me with something to hold on to,
a thread, from which a fundamental feeling grew;
blossoming into faith.

This mortal life seems substantially short to me
although I suspect it only appears to be;
for we're eternal souls.

To me, death's a journey, not a destination;
a spiritual extension of creation:
life's cycle; thus complete.

Immunity

The one I have adored substantially
Seems to mutilated me the worst 
It has made my heart rupture
The mystics of the universe 
Seems to make us an alliance 
And sworn adversaries 
Could this be a new induction
Of a vitality without insanity 
And of integrated tranquility 
This time there is no need for 
A ceremony or a diamond ring 
Our sustained time reciprocity
Can not be mistaken
For anything but a secure foundation 
And now it is time for 
A jubilant celebration 
Now I can pardon you 
With my love and immunity

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