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Life's Cycle

Conceived, then born in accordance with God's grand plan, I'm thrust into a world that I don't understand, and introduced to pain. As a child, fantasy forged my reality; allowing me to feel untethered and carefree, communing with nature. Curiosity fueled imagination; marking my youth as a time of observation, and loss of innocence. I found the world a highly competitive place; roughly divided by belief, gender, and race, all conditioned to lie. Hope provided me with something to hold on to, a thread, from which a fundamental feeling grew; blossoming into faith. My mortal life experience seems short to me although I suspect it only appears to be; for we're eternal souls. To me, death's a journey, not a destination: an ethereal extension of creation: life's cycle, thus complete.
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Date: 7/17/2021 12:47:00 PM
We are indeed eternal souls! Congrats on your win, Emile! Blessings, Kim M
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/18/2021 7:20:00 AM
Thanks, Kim, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/16/2021 10:43:00 PM
In truth, the world's a highly competitive place roughly divided by belief, gender, and race, and conditioned to lie. Beautifully Written. Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/17/2021 10:51:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/14/2021 11:25:00 AM
Well said! I agree and believe in your last two stanza.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/14/2021 4:31:00 PM
Thanks, Rama, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/14/2021 10:26:00 AM
Powerful writing, Emile. When Deb found she was dying of cancer, she said, "I'm about to embark on my greatest adventure." We all anticipate that it will be such. I enjoyed your write.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/14/2021 4:30:00 PM
Thanks, Milt, I recall a time I almost died and it felt surreal, I wasn't frightened but I was curious as to what happens next, and someday I'll find out my friend, Emile.
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