Sluggishness Poems | Examples


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COFFEE MORNING-STARTER

Coffee-Maker – drip drips
As coffee-blenders…zip zips
Brought my morning sippy-cup
For a quick zip from your caftan mug.

I don’t need a lot
Just a snippy-zippy  single shot
To start the day and awaken my mind,
Speed my pace - fall not behind.
There’s much to accomplish and much to do
Just takes a minute to heap a brew!

Of all rounded beans, coffee beans are the best
Add some chai for a zest
Sipping a sip from my sippy-cup
My slumbering eyes do wake up!

Oozing comfort warms my throat
Warms my soul like a coat
A Rush of kinetic energy electrify
Procrastination and sluggishness desensitize
A sudden burst to run a race
Productivity produces a rhythmic pace

Word-clutters arise like the morning sun
Time for work…Time for fun!
Coffee certainly is a legal drug!
I’m all wired-up - though unplugged -
From one little zippy drip 
Of a coffee sip
From the  grinded drug 
Poured into my sipping-mug…?•

Premium Member L M N O P Q R S T

Light larkish lackadaisical lassie lithe and lean
Measured Mesopotamia’s millionth mammoth, not all mean
Nonetheless, noticing the level of lithium in a coffee bean,
Opposing ornery ocelots who are seldom city seen

Providing palatable parables to Patty, platypus who loves to preen
Quarreling with irksome quail-herders who captivated lassie’s queen
Resisting relatives reaching for gardenia’s gruesome globs of green
Stalwart soldiers seriously slicing sluggishness from a computer screen.

Sipping Coffee

A sip of the elixir that invigorates the soul. 
The euphoria that it gives calms the nerves.
A fuel of one's enthusiasm to face a new day. 
Waker of one's slumbering blood.

Like a burning sunrise that sets the mood,
its glowing reflection stirs the spirits
to dip within the depth of its warmth 
and burn the roots of sluggishness. 

Where bursting figures desire to be lean,
it fits the path towards the flinty goal,
for, it awakens even the drowsing souls, 
to flex and stretch their limpy limbs. 

*I don't drink coffee, except native "barako".*


Flourish

Flourish,  
Flourishing as the sun shining you daily 
Rejoicing  as  abundant rain watering your fields 
and creating some dams 
for farming fish and feeding your animals. 
You are burgeoning in the eyes
 of some lazy folks
 who have big mouths 
to talk senseless speeches in the streets 
and forgetting  their arable lands 
which are fitting for industrial  agriculture. 

Flourish, 
Oh! Laughing deafeningly sometimes 
when I focus on some tête -à-tête debates 
Which concern poverty in rich continent like Africa. 
Some folks suffering because of some circumstances 
and others dependence due to sluggishness. 

Flourish, 
DRCongo has more billionaire businessmen 
and some politicians 
who keep their money in their mansions 
and banks  
in Europe,  Asia  America and other African countries...
Other rich people hide their money  under the grounds 
 than investing in industrial fishing and agriculture 
and infrastructures to uplift 
the economy of the Country. 

June 23/2023
Written for poetry contest sponsored by 
Constance la France 
....F WORD CHALLENGE....

Dire Necessity

Dire necessity kills the sluggishness of time. 

February 23, 2023

Premium Member Sloth Steaming Sin

Sloth’s Steaming Sin


Sluggishness slitters solely straightforward 
Sedentary survival styles scold, strain
Self-centeredness - sloth’s shinning standard 
Squandering silvers… spiritual sprain





July 21,2022     11.31pm





PS Syllable Counter
Syllables Per Line:	10 10 10 10
Total # Syllables:	40



Proverbs 19:15 
Slothfulness casts into a deep sleep, and an idle person will suffer hunger.

Sin of Sloth
Contest Judged:  8/2/2022 3:20:00 PM
Sponsored by: Margarita Lillico
Place 1 (one of the 8 first placers)


Premium Member Listless Lassitude


apathy grows, dread heavy in the heart
laziness lingers on the spirit’s light
sluggishness gestures - cloudy, dimming hope
idleness, lethargy, dark shadow’s plight





Sin of Sloth Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Margarita Lillico 
July 9, 2022

Premium Member Sluggishness

I broke
my proper thumb
within venial borders
a shear from a bygone era

on your
tip of the iceberg
you spread a ruffle in my
bleeding shadows

we steer
the flow
on with the ebb and tideway
cutter with sawtoothed teeth
 
the scorn
of buoyant tethering
In a state of torpidity

5st PLACE CONTEST WINNER

Written: March 27, 2022

A BRIAN STRAND 1098 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand


THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived. ( Poem inspired by Poet Brian Strand Form)

Premium Member Curtains of Your Heart

Grieving an emotional bind
Curtain hung to guard heart and mind
Fraught with sadness, loss and pure blind
With pain of a loved one combined

Cruel effects on God's temple
Sleeplessness and absence ample
Of hunger, broken-heart angel
Flood-gate unleash in its chapel

Feelings of hopeless hopelessness 
Deep loneliness and worthlessness
Emptiness leaving sluggishness
Withdrawn in complete hollowness

Veil of the heart volume apiece 
Set the Spirit to life and peace


12/22/2020


Curtains Of Your Heart Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

Premium Member A Sloth On My Stay-Cation

I am on a little stay-cation.
No plans. None.
Melting into my chair, my eyes close.
This is a napping house.
We keep it dark for the TV advantage.
It is easy to not know if it is day or night with our black-out curtains.
I can go back to lull-a-bye land all day long if I want to. 
The glory of staying up all night or just way too late is, no one comes here.
This sluggishness and sloth-like behavior is taking a toll.
I am annoyed at my ability to watch six Andy Griffith shows back-to-back.

Premium Member Choose Wisely

Acid reflux.
Swollen ankles.
Arthritic feet.
Try not to get old.

Extra weight.
Bad teeth.
Unhappy gums.
Stay young as long as you can.

Sluggishness.
Apathy.
Indifference.
Okay, now, people, we’re getting into choices now.

Choose wisely.

Magnanimous Zeal

M-agnanimous zeal within 
E-nhances the ray of light; 
A-iming to show spiritual courage, 
N-ot fearing the dark of 
N-ight. 

G-reat vigor ends sluggishness 
O-r lethargy that you feel; 
M-onday February twelfth, 
E-mploy a magnanimous 
Z-eal.

Feeling Better

I’m better because,
 I’m positive
 I build the right frame of mind
 I dream big
 I’m a believer
 I’m benevolent
 I’m bold

 I’m like the rainbow.

There are
no sinking feelings
sluggishness
back-biting
 or retrogresses

Love's Journey

As lilac lace conjures softness
as forest's green sparks with life
walk in splendor with one heart
be humble in your fondness - for
sluggishness arises - when love for granted haps
when lilac lace is fading - and the tree spark's dim
life's serenade will whisper - tis not a time to linger
Allow your hearts refreshment - lock your eyes again
seek the continuity - of devotion's tenderness
strike the match demurely - slow burning - more endures
trusting not to numbness - forgiveness enters in
the heavens count for all concerned - it's showers bringing forth
stability - the leveling - of love's maturity
life's passions shared - like petals picked
God's orations loud - kindness - sets the bouquet
His essence wafting in

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