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Sloth Steaming Sin

Sloth’s Steaming Sin


Sluggishness slitters solely straightforward 
Sedentary survival styles scold, strain
Self-centeredness - sloth’s shinning standard 
Squandering silvers… spiritual sprain





July 21,2022     11.31pm





PS Syllable Counter
Syllables Per Line:	10 10 10 10
Total # Syllables:	40



Proverbs 19:15 
Slothfulness casts into a deep sleep, and an idle person will suffer hunger.

Sin of Sloth
Contest Judged:  8/2/2022 3:20:00 PM
Sponsored by: Margarita Lillico
Place 1 (one of the 8 first placers)

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Linda Alice Fowler Date: 8/11/2022 10:15:00 AM Clever alliteration Len. Congratulations on your win! Linda Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 8/15/2022 12:39:00 AM Thank you so much for your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Linda/ God bless.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/6/2022 5:01:00 PM This is so clever and supremely created Len. Well deserving of your first placement. Congratulations! Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 8/7/2022 12:29:00 AM Thank you so much for stopping by, your uplifting comments and congratulatory greetings my dear friend Connie. God bless you and make you safe always my dearest friend. Hugs

Michelle Faulkner Date: 8/5/2022 11:04:00 PM Very creative to do it all with 'S' words, simply sublime, and congrats! Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 8/7/2022 7:05:00 AM Thank you so much for your encouraging words and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Michelle. God bless you always. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/3/2022 11:36:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away................... Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 8/4/2022 11:18:00 PM Thank you so much my dear friend Paula for your congratulatory greetings and your very uplifting words. God bless you always. Hugs

Valsa George Date: 8/2/2022 11:07:00 PM A great entry and a great recognition! Congratulations Len on your well deserved win ! Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 8/4/2022 11:17:00 PM Thank you so much for your kind words and congratulatory greetings my dear friend, Valsa. God bless you always. Hugs

Bill Baker Date: 8/2/2022 3:46:00 PM Great entry for the contest, Len. The alliteration was perfect! Bill Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 8/4/2022 11:16:00 PM Thank you so much my dear friend Bill for your very uplifting words. God bless you always. Hugs

I Am Anaya Date: 7/28/2022 5:43:00 PM Perfect alliteration and message and goes well with proverb 19 15! Len good work! Best to you Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 7/30/2022 7:38:00 PM Thank you for your visit and uplifting comments my dear friend, Anaya. Blessings to you always. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/24/2022 7:37:00 AM awesome with the S alliteration, Len. Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 7/30/2022 7:37:00 PM Thank you for your visit and uplifting comments my dear friend, Andrea. Blessings to you always. Hugs