Ordeal Poems | Examples

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Premium Member Pokemon Have Gathered

Has the Milkyway been altered, does it 
now need saved?  Never mind, I’ll draw 
mermaids anyway.

I wanted steady onward.  Seems I’m never 
heard.  I need a mockingbird.  Could familiars 
best somewhere, somehow, still linger?

To get the sky back on track the galaxy must 
be regained or has it expired, its hope past
tired?  I’m stuck on the outer rim where no 
answer has ever been.  Join me, bring your 
confusion, you will both fit right in.

Not engaged or vacant, not present or absent,
his eyes hold no malice.  My eyes are filled 
with need to know how we should proceed.  
Pokemon have been gathered, some soft 
cushy and large, and some hard little figures.  
I believe what matters is the comfort he gets 
from just a squeeze.

Rough challenges bounce, smacking hours 
around.  Tough ordeals stack fears like circles 
in squares that cast their shadows unfair. 

Has the Milkyway been altered?  My child’s
health has faltered.  Long shadowy goosebumps 
are everywhere, even goosebumps mermaids 
believe in and wear.

Life After Ordeal


Dark fog of uncertainty
Breeds a grimy shade called rage
Where tempest of deceit mark
A stain peppered with sharp lies--
Now I design  my revenge
To face all odds and embark
On self,  light flooding within.


What Happened  After
created by nette onclaud
July 18, 2025

Days Ordeal

Ending days ordeal
Tomorrow will be better
With healing power.


Salmon Ordeal

Salmon fight their way
Upstream, work the last strength
Spawn and die there.

Premium Member Ordeal Has Begun

Oh my goodness, unbelievable fun,
Ordeal for my nemesis has begun !
Dreaming a favourite dream?
Must be my wishful thinking!
Am I his sole saviour, or he has none!

Ordeal of Demise

Ordeal of Demise 

Roaming in the lane 
Lane of demise 
Path full of Spine
Looking in the eyes 

I found demise 
Dead inside 
Falling apart 
Piece by piece 

Ordeals of my life 
Were unpleasant at least
I was all alone 
Glancing at the trees 

Trees which sight 
A Glimpse of joy 
It looked like heaven 
Wind on my face 

But as I realized 
I was stuck in the maze 
Maze of sorrow 
Maze of distress 

I was all alone 
Looking at a mess 
Darkness conquered me 
Who I was ? 

Ordeal of Demise 
Was unpleasant after all
As it come closer 
My days were over 

I fell apart 
Wanting to be sober 
Drunk in melancholy 
Glancing at the moon 

Death took over me 
The curtains fell
My life was not special 
I was alone over and over again.

- Sheridan_novels


Ordeal By Shop

I'm just off into Marks and Sparks 
My own  dear lady had said
In sheer panic I went and nodded 
Instead of shaking my head.

She picked up a blouse 
Asked did I think it looked nice
And there I was on the spot
Just in a little trice.
I never quite know 
What to say for the best
Does she really want to know
Or is it just a test,

Is my opinion really needed 
Or is it just her intention
Just to make sure
I'm fully paying attention.
Confused and struck dumb
And not sure of her intents
I made my excuse and headed
For the safety of the Gents.

I'm just a simple bloke who doesn't 
Understand fashion coloir and shades
And a wrong or hasty word could have 
Sent me to my own personal Hades.
It's a terrible ordeal
Which keeps a bloke on the hop
When he mistakenly accompanies
His other half to a ladies dress shop.

I can cook and I can clean
Do my share I must confess
But for love of God don't ask me
Help you choose a dress

Negate Ordeal

M-y
A-nnual
R-emembrance
I-n
C-reative
R-egards
I-solates
S-orrow

L-etting
L-ovely
A-crostic's
G-reeting
U-niquely
N-egate
O-rdeal

Topic: Birthday of Maricris C. Llaguno (January 04) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

Lethal Ordeal

L-ethal ordeal in outbreak
I-nflicts damage to humanity; 
B-acteria of morbid menace
A-pplies grime so
Y-ucky.

A-bate the horrible hazard, 
M-itigate the pandemic peril; 
A-lleviate the terrible threat, 
R-epel the lethal
O-rdeal.

Topic: Birthday of Libay J. Amaro (June 21)

Global Ordeal

G-lobal ordeal implements
L-ethal link of illness; 
E-erie epidemic employs
N-uisance of
N-astiness.

G-lobal ordeal traps mankind, 
A-pplying the terrible threat; 
R-isk of rabid infection includes
G-erms and bacteria from droplet.
A-n atrocity of alarming ailment
N-otoriously makes risk real; 
T-he mystery and silent spread
A-re truly a global ordeal.

Topic: Birthday of Bro. Glenn Garganta (June 06)

Fight the Ordeal

L-et doctors fight the ordeal, 
I-n doing their tasks at hospital; 
E-ndure the contaminated
Z-one of danger so
L-ethal.

F-rontliners fight the ordeal, 
R-epulsing the furious flu; 
A-trocious ailment of lungs
N-astily turns red into blue.
C-ontagion of vicious virus
I-s either mysterious or real; 
S-cientists search for the solution, 
C-ommunities fight the
O-rdeal.

Topic: Birthday of Liezl Francisco (May 29)

Ordeal of the African Albino

When tongues arise to condemn racism 
None speaks the ordeal of the African albino being 
Defined by different views of ethnical beliefs 
Discriminated by his brothers for lacking melanin 

He is but subjected to verbal condemnation 
With chants of mockery upon his head 
Discriminated by hypocrites who speak against discrimination 
Begging love and acceptance from his fellow man 

Have not many mocked his blurred eyesight? 
And taunted his nystagmus as he squints in the sun? 
Have not many tongues wagged in ignorance? 
Spitting forth myths about his existence 

Where now is the ignorant Yoruba cook? 
That says "Afin ojeyo" with all boldness 
Where is that man that showcases emptiness? 
To say the sun beclouds an albino's reasoning. 

Many myths are said and put to practice 
Cursed is the man that sacrifices an albino child 
For the zeal of greed has made men fools 
To think the albino's blood a charm 

Many a person living with albinism 
Are daily deprived of the right to noble labour 
So if ever tongues shall wag about racism 
Fail not to speak of these black beings in white skin.
By: Adams Elizabeth Oyarese
Lizdiamond Poetry World

Respiratory Ordeal

R-espiratory
O-rdeal's
S-ymptoms
E-ndanger
L-ungs
L-etting
E-pidemic

I-nfection
L-ethally
I-nflict
G-ruesome
A-ttack's
N-astiness

Topic: Birthday of Roselle Iligan (April 10) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

An Ordeal

Appointed by GOD for doing evil
Satan is launched all over as devil
God is almighty
Satan on duty
Hell not for him; human in ordeal!


-December 23, 2018 Chattogram

Incubus

Incubus 

His icy fingers perform a slow staccato on my tense limbs
Enveloped by a deathly chill
Still I lye on the table in this lair 
Strapped down
Locked in

Putrid and stale, breath deep
Inhaling my fear with desire 
Hearing his feet dragging beside me
Can’t fight him
Won’t win

 Of the capture I have no recollection 
No fight left in me for how to escape 
The monster has hunted victoriously 
He has his prey
He will sin

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