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Pokemon Have Gathered

Has the Milkyway been altered, does it 
now need saved?  Never mind, I’ll draw 
mermaids anyway.

I wanted steady onward.  Seems I’m never 
heard.  I need a mockingbird.  Could familiars 
best somewhere, somehow, still linger?

To get the sky back on track the galaxy must 
be regained or has it expired, its hope past
tired?  I’m stuck on the outer rim where no 
answer has ever been.  Join me, bring your 
confusion, you will both fit right in.

Not engaged or vacant, not present or absent,
his eyes hold no malice.  My eyes are filled 
with need to know how we should proceed.  
Pokemon have been gathered, some soft 
cushy and large, and some hard little figures.  
I believe what matters is the comfort he gets 
from just a squeeze.

Rough challenges bounce, smacking hours 
around.  Tough ordeals stack fears like circles 
in squares that cast their shadows unfair. 

Has the Milkyway been altered?  My child’s
health has faltered.  Long shadowy goosebumps 
are everywhere, even goosebumps mermaids 
believe in and wear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Nicole Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 7:13 PM
Oh, my ! Your thoughts tug deeply at the heartstrings. When health issues tackle and adult, that's not good, but when they attack a child, it's heartbreaking. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. My best to you, CayCay. Hugs, Brandy
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 5:24 PM
parellel events captured in this uniquely constructed poem. loved 'goosebump mermaids.'
Wolf Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 3:24 PM
A hair-raising experience, CayCay. ~ Fare Well 2-Arms
Goldsmith Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 12:45 PM
I enjoyed reading your powerful write. No child should suffer. Sorry... Have a blessed/wonderful ~~ day/weekend writing away............
Dietrich Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 10:56 AM
Oh you went very personal with this one. Is it for Craig's contest or for Greg's. It seems to fit both. So I wish you luck . Oh I looked in your notes. Do it's for long shadows. It is very creative work, Caycay. Now I need to get creative and decide how to fit 3:errands into the next 3 hours!!
Greenhough Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 10:15 AM
I enjoy how you paralleled two events, one galactic and the other earth and human centered. I pray for the good health of all children. Best wishes.
Godwin Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 10:28 AM
Me, too, and I'm sure mine will heal to perfection. Thank you, Hilda, CayCay
Hind Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 9:26 AM
I'm sorry for his suffering. You let it out into the Universe, wishing you, a steady hand. Beautiful.
Godwin Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 10:27 AM
Indeed, I let it out one night watching him sleep on the sofa, it came and I had pen/paper. That's the way of a poet, eh? He's gonna be better than fine. Thank you ... CayCay
DiMino Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 4:01 AM
"Pokeymon have been gathered, some soft cushy and large, and some hard little figures. I believe what matters is the comfort he gets from just a squeeze." -- Very sad. I can relate. Laugh is all we can do sometimes. A toast to laughing. Perhaps I am reading this wrong. Great poem! You get a FAV from me.
Godwin Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 6:53 AM
Joe, I think you read it just right. Thank you so much for the fav, I appreciate it very much. CayCay
Crandall Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 9:56 PM
I think you have a really interesting way of putting things as you describe your experience. "Seems I'm never heard. I need a mockingbird." I think I'm also on the outer rim of the milky way, if I'm interpreting my star map correctly.
Godwin Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 10:06 PM
"Interesting", yes, my mind is an imagination factory!!! For you, and only you, I gift this part of the poem, "Join me, bring your confusion, you will both fit right in." Let's laugh. CayCay
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