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Ordeal Has Begun

Oh my goodness, unbelievable fun,
Ordeal for my nemesis has begun !
Dreaming a favourite dream?
Must be my wishful thinking!
Am I his sole saviour, or he has none!

Copyright © Malabika Ray Choudhury | Year Posted 2024

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Jack Horne Date: 5/28/2024 7:43:00 AM LOL, very clever write Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 5/28/2024 9:32:00 AM Thank you so much, Jack! So glad you enjoyed!

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/1/2024 6:37:00 AM Clever and humorous. I like this one. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 4/1/2024 10:24:00 AM Thank you, Sara. I am glad you enjoyed!

Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/31/2024 2:39:00 PM Love that the bird’s dreaming a favorite dream…a cat in a cage. Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 3/31/2024 3:55:00 PM Isn't that such a clever dream? Loved the picture - see how grumpy the cat is! Hilarious! Thanks, Kim.

Don Iannone Date: 3/25/2024 7:20:00 AM Hi Malabika, Love it! Felt compelled to reply in limerick: In a twist of fate, a hero's plight, His nemesis dreams in the dead of night. But I, with a grin, foil the plan's thickening, For in this game of chess, I’m the kingpin. And so he finds, in the light of the sun, he's not alone, for the saving's been done! Login to Reply Don Iannone Date: 3/25/2024 12:12:00 PM Malabika, All of us have voices that the world needs to hear through poetry. Your work is wonderful! Don Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 3/25/2024 11:40:00 AM Hello Don, what an exquisite Limerick! Now I am feeling embarrassed with my humble effort. Dear Poet, you are one of the best at this site! How come I didn’t read your poems before?! Thank you and Warm wishes ~

Beryl Edmonds Date: 3/24/2024 10:23:00 PM A very clever, humorous limerick Malabika, enjoyed the read… Beryl Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 3/25/2024 5:03:00 AM Thank you, Beryl, for dropping by and commenting. appreciate your inspiring comment. Enjoy writing Limericks - short and sweet!

Ink Empress Date: 3/24/2024 7:57:00 AM Brilliant limerick, goes so well with the picture too dear mala, its been a while since iv read your work, and i must say im not at all disappointed, one that is light hearted and deep too, which has so much depth, behind the light that flows in such eloquence with creative rhymes, i loved this! Best wishes for the contest Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 3/24/2024 9:12:00 AM Thank you, Dearest Friend, for reading my humble limerick, and commenting so graciously on it! I was travelling for last two months to my home-country, and participating in various cultural events. When I am there, my life is totally different! This picture for Margarita's contest is so funny and interesting that I wanted to try this format. I love this poetic form, although I believe my greatest strength doesn't lie in funny poems. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Btw, I have started a new blog on cooking - just letting you know in case you are interested! A talented poet like you must be great in many other areas. Love, sweet friend...I am glad you did not forget me.

Silent One Date: 3/24/2024 7:48:00 AM Great limerick Malabika.. it is fitting for the photo and the contest.. Best of luck.. Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 3/24/2024 9:16:00 AM Thank you, Dearest Poet, for your inspiring, encouraging and kind comments. Limerick is such a cute poetic form, I want to try now and then. I am sure you are busy with life, but truly appreciate your reading and commenting on my poems. Looking forward to reading some of yours...every time I read one, I learn something new. Warm wishes ~

Joseph May Date: 3/24/2024 6:19:00 AM Turning the tables on its nemesis, Nicely done Malabika Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 3/24/2024 6:27:00 AM Thanks, Joseph for commenting . Writing limerick is fun - short and sweet!