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March 24, 2024

"Picture Prompt" Limerick Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Margarita Lillico

Oh my goodness, unbelievable fun, Ordeal for my nemesis has begun ! Dreaming a favourite dream? Must be my wishful thinking! Am I his sole saviour, or he has none!

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Jack Horne

Date: 5/28/2024 7:43:00 AM

LOL, very clever write

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/28/2024 9:32:00 AM

Thank you so much, Jack! So glad you enjoyed!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/1/2024 6:37:00 AM

Clever and humorous. I like this one. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/1/2024 10:24:00 AM

Thank you, Sara. I am glad you enjoyed!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/31/2024 2:39:00 PM

Love that the bird’s dreaming a favorite dream…a cat in a cage.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/31/2024 3:55:00 PM

Isn't that such a clever dream? Loved the picture - see how grumpy the cat is! Hilarious! Thanks, Kim.

Don Iannone

Date: 3/25/2024 7:20:00 AM

Hi Malabika, Love it! Felt compelled to reply in limerick: In a twist of fate, a hero's plight, His nemesis dreams in the dead of night. But I, with a grin, foil the plan's thickening, For in this game of chess, I’m the kingpin. And so he finds, in the light of the sun, he's not alone, for the saving's been done!

Don Iannone
Date: 3/25/2024 12:12:00 PM

Malabika, All of us have voices that the world needs to hear through poetry. Your work is wonderful! Don

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/25/2024 11:40:00 AM

Hello Don, what an exquisite Limerick! Now I am feeling embarrassed with my humble effort. Dear Poet, you are one of the best at this site! How come I didn’t read your poems before?! Thank you and Warm wishes ~

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/24/2024 10:23:00 PM

A very clever, humorous limerick Malabika, enjoyed the read… Beryl

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/25/2024 5:03:00 AM

Thank you, Beryl, for dropping by and commenting. appreciate your inspiring comment. Enjoy writing Limericks - short and sweet!

Ink Empress

Date: 3/24/2024 7:57:00 AM

Brilliant limerick, goes so well with the picture too dear mala, its been a while since iv read your work, and i must say im not at all disappointed, one that is light hearted and deep too, which has so much depth, behind the light that flows in such eloquence with creative rhymes, i loved this! Best wishes for the contest

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/24/2024 9:12:00 AM

Thank you, Dearest Friend, for reading my humble limerick, and commenting so graciously on it! I was travelling for last two months to my home-country, and participating in various cultural events. When I am there, my life is totally different! This picture for Margarita's contest is so funny and interesting that I wanted to try this format. I love this poetic form, although I believe my greatest strength doesn't lie in funny poems. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Btw, I have started a new blog on cooking - just letting you know in case you are interested! A talented poet like you must be great in many other areas. Love, sweet friend...I am glad you did not forget me.

Silent One

Date: 3/24/2024 7:48:00 AM

Great limerick Malabika.. it is fitting for the photo and the contest.. Best of luck..

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/24/2024 9:16:00 AM

Thank you, Dearest Poet, for your inspiring, encouraging and kind comments. Limerick is such a cute poetic form, I want to try now and then. I am sure you are busy with life, but truly appreciate your reading and commenting on my poems. Looking forward to reading some of yours...every time I read one, I learn something new. Warm wishes ~

Joseph May

Date: 3/24/2024 6:19:00 AM

Turning the tables on its nemesis, Nicely done Malabika

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/24/2024 6:27:00 AM

Thanks, Joseph for commenting . Writing limerick is fun - short and sweet!