Long Revamped Poems
Long Revamped Poems. Below are the most popular long Revamped by PoetrySoup Members. You can search for long Revamped poems by poem length and keyword.
My First Love Experience
It was in the early days of our lives
We met
She was so beautiful
My eyes could not stop admiring
My heart kept racing
Every time it sensed
her good-looking approaching
But we were too young
To give full...
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Categories:
revamped, lost love, memory, beautiful, me, heart, woman,
Form:
Free verse
The Ever Rising Science Star
The brightest star so renowned,
Modern Cosmology well-governed!
The Universe was examined and Black Holes too
Brought General Relativity and Quantum Gravity intact!
Was he the one who diagnosed with dreadful ALS,
Transformed black holes from inexorable gravitational prisons?
“Lived decades...
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Categories:
revamped, 10th grade, 11th grade, 12th grade, identity,
Form:
Free verse
Real Mccoy - Or Is She - POTD
POTD
Synthetic hyper realistic - eclectic not eccentric
Android Humanoid - naturalistic totally orgasmic
Unnatural physicality this futuristic fem-bot fantasy
Against all normality she is the ultimate sexpot ecstasy
Soulless secretions a monster metallic
A...
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Categories:
revamped, desire, future, lust, technology,
Form:
Light Verse
Senator Mccain and Prayer For America
Dear Lord, look upon us graciously I humbly plea. We need you desperately in this home of the brave. Lead us from our cave of disunity in this land of the free. Contrary to what...
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Categories:
revamped, america, political, prayer,
Form:
Couplet
When Light Penetrates the Fog of Fear and Darkness
When Light Penetrates The Fog Of Fear And Darkness
When Light through the keyhole penetrates the malaise
And within that moment your soul gives sincere praise
For that divine gift that Life's sweet promise resets
Earth's clock to those...
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Categories:
revamped, creation, dark, deep, destiny, faith, inspirational, light,
Form:
Rhyme
if i die before i awake revamped
if i die before i awake
do not cry as am at heavens gate,
looking at you all down below,
showing you my love will always flow,
if you need me just call my name,
believe am here and never...
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Categories:
revamped, angel, bible, blessing, cry, dad, earth, faith,
Form:
Free verse
No More Coercive Control - FICTIONAL POEM
From the moment we met
he'd treated me like a princess
I was young and naive
flattered by his attention,
misinterpreting it as a forever love
Mum took an instant dislike to him
She said he was like a...
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Categories:
revamped, abuse, violence,
Form:
Free verse
I Am, Error
Love should only ever kindle the present and the future. Not the past…
Primarily, I am second.
For I have placed others on similar platforms
Made of charred cedar and revamped memories
Unintentionally
It is not intent that we embrace,...
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Categories:
revamped, friend, friendship, life, love,
Form:
Free verse
Dreams Part 2
A fairytale, commercial.
Raining onto minds window sill
An unfathomable deep.
Abominable monster on Life's seven seas.
Dreams, the valuable current sea.
A two edged sword for those sailing on the razors edge.
Balancing on it's journey.
They can bring us...
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Categories:
revamped, adventure, allusion, birth, care,
Form:
Rhyme
Karen's Brother
Sky blue eyes looking
past the bounty of pork rinds
past boundless skylines
stare blankly for way too long
then to the menu
cradled in his plastic hands.
Plant-based food options
required by government
mandate appear first
photographed in black and white
described...
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Categories:
revamped, conflict, food,
Form:
Choka
I Was Born
I was born of sand and sea
Of ozone so fresh
It could be tasted
I was born of a mountain
A picture postcard backdrop
Shadowing a small seaside town
It's grassy slopes
And sheer rock faces
Visible to all
I was born...
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Categories:
revamped, feelings, inspirational,
Form:
Blank verse
The Wheel Is Come Full Circle
“The wheel is come full circle.” William Shakespeare
The clock tick-tocks!
The tables have turn counter clockwise.
The knowledge would be known.
Life is only given once.
This is what humankind is told.
But the souls rise with suspended time and...
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Categories:
revamped, bereavement, betrayal, change, faith, funeral, grief,
Form:
Free verse
Defining Sleep
Sleep: An act done by oneself.
Almost seems silly to ask for assistance when it is the act of channeling ones
individually unique
center-stage by centering ones consciousness.
To be here by myself,
all...
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Categories:
revamped, thank you
Form:
I do not know?
With You In Mind
Walking in sailor fields amongst the nettles picking blackberries,
the brambles cut deep savage the mind. Yet the bowl to be filled
the jam to be boiled the bread of hope to be flavourful,
the innocence of it...
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Categories:
revamped, memory,
Form:
Haibun
Tyndall's Grey
The chameleon shuddered profusely,
It had never climbed to the top of a sky scraper before,
The melanin refused to scatter,
It could not make up its mind:
To take after the blue of the sky?
Or to be grey...
...
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Categories:
revamped, allegory,
Form:
Free verse
Hours of Flowers
*The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid*
6 million or more flowers to honor the dead
It's such a little thing-- remembrance, with flowers
a labor of love that would take many hours
Hardly even a start to...
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Categories:
revamped, art, flower, garden, holocaust, poets, prayer, remember,
Form:
Couplet
Creatures of the Flame
Creatures Of The Flame
Fierce friend or foe...earth element of fire;
In many ways advanced our humankind.
Relentless when unchecked, a beast so dire,
Engulfs and smothers, leaving ash behind.
Fire shaped the path for humans to progress:
provided them with...
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Categories:
revamped, fire, humanity,
Form:
Sonnet
Empty Bottles
Given empty bottles,
With deceiving messages in and out
That their lives will be changed, thus
Planting false hopes everywhere
Sadly, even young ones,
Believed they will get out of the ghetto
Delight in their renewed hope-
Lives changing- beyond dreams of...
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Categories:
revamped, corruption, depression, dream, freedom, heartbroken,
Form:
Free verse
The Revitalization of Detroit, Michigan
Abstrusely they spoke about things unknown.
They figured she understood because she responded within knowledge given by the Lord.
Never could she state what was meant.
She countered innately.
She rejoined her past.
Her findings were that someone, other than...
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Categories:
revamped, anger, angst, conflict, confusion, corruption, courage, wisdom,
Form:
Couplet
Just Driving Freely
just driving freely
on a whim, i get on the highway
knowing and not knowing where it leads me
i just drive and drive
i ache for a new scene after sweating for peanuts in the same reality
friday afternoon...
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Categories:
revamped, desire, how i feel, inspiration,
Form:
Free verse
Inconceivable
My affection for you
Wholly unmeasured
I’ve breathed of you
Precedingly
Before my eyes
Drank your quintessence
My love envisioned
...
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Categories:
revamped, devotion, lost love, love, passion,
Form:
Free verse
Tears of the Cross
Three crosses stood still that faithful day
As the skies sadly wept a guilted grey
On the highest hill, they would be seen
Ruled by Roman eyes that did demean
The middle cross covered in a rustic red
Where the...
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Categories:
revamped, christian, easter, jesus, spiritual,
Form:
Sonnet
Thirst Verse Outburst
First verse outburst you’ve never known worse
Be clever and disperse I’ve a nerve out to hurt
Unreserved calling on reserves
Ready to hurl at the deserved
Serve them nervous
This a hell bound service
Leave em burnt under...
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Categories:
revamped, anger, animal,
Form:
Rhyme
Destinys Sky
Destiny’s Sky
A world in turmoil secreting fear
Hope evaporates thru the atmosphere
The demons dance with great desire
Dreams held captive in tangled wire
Sorrow cascades thru hellion skies
As souls prepare for their demise
Pernicious breath now blankets all
Serpents salivate...
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Categories:
revamped, community, destiny, hope,
Form:
Quatrain
Refurbished Nursery Rhymes: Little Miss Muffett Or Don't Mess With PMS
When a big hairy spider
Came and plopped down beside her
As Miss Muffett sat munchin'
A light, healthy luncheon,
She screamed, "Sir, naught could be ruder
Than an arachnid intruder!",
And proceeded to prove the mistake he had made.
'neath a...
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Categories:
revamped, humor,
Form:
Light Verse