I Am, Error

Love should only ever kindle the present and the future. Not the past… Primarily, I am second. For I have placed others on similar platforms Made of charred cedar and revamped memories Unintentionally It is not intent that we embrace, but the end result. Good, brief. Bad, seared.
Branded
I hang my smile on half-mast remembrance, The elaborate touch of yesterday’s smile
Forgotten
And days go by Where cryptic anger holds me dear Because my identity becomes nothing more Than a discarded 140 characters Yet, this handsome error Will still smile through the equally equivocal flaws Of others We are a marathon running on seismographic parallels. Faults, unbecoming Faults, embedded One-sided Expiration, denied The pricelessness of my heart, cost overridden Perhaps it has become the only option To keep love’s punishment, subdued While songs of psychic animosities, Lay judgment on unawareness’ smile It is not easy to reach wanton goals, While attempts to (mind) read incoming ruptures Incorporate 50% success rate We stumbled when we ran yesterday. We will stumble when we walk today. We shall stumble upon the sunrise & sunset of tomorrow. Why couldn’t you just hold my hand when we fall? … I am, Error. One day, I will become a candle in the wind Extinguished Will the winds upon angel’s wing Be guided by those same smiles Tossed into amnesia’s similar gust ©D.J.E.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/20/2016 12:00:00 PM
thank you for reminding me that i am still a work in progress, drakey... what a darn splendid work.. huggs
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Date: 5/27/2016 12:12:00 PM
Thanks Franco.
Date: 5/19/2016 7:19:00 AM
Captivating and profound poem that illumines the depths of the soul! Superb poem and a seven! Time to talk I think dear, Drake!
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Date: 5/27/2016 12:11:00 PM
My good man, we shall reconnect soon. :) Many, many thanks!
Date: 5/14/2016 7:42:00 PM
Oh me oh my!! what an awesome poem. You are the Poets Poet 7X7
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Date: 5/17/2016 12:20:00 PM
Many thanks, Lara.
Date: 4/28/2016 12:02:00 PM
Hey you....this is SO signature you. I've missed you. Glad you've resurfaced. I went under for a while, but I've resurfaced too. I loved the "I hang my smile on half-mast remembrance." Never in a million years could I come up with a line like that. NO...you will not become a candle in the wind...EVER. Remember our collab? Glad to have you back. I've got news. Hugs
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Date: 4/29/2016 12:35:00 AM
I'VE MISSED YOU TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Of course I remember our collab. :) How could I forget one of the most hilarious bloopers in the history of my Stand As 1 show? :D Email or message me on the news!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
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