Tears of the Cross

Three crosses stood still that faithful day As the skies sadly wept a guilted grey On the highest hill, they would be seen Ruled by Roman eyes that did demean The middle cross covered in a rustic red Where the blood of Christ, sacrificed shed The limpid lamb died for our shameless sins With whispering winds spun by Angels wings The Christened cross was made thus Divine For Christ awaited ascension to the Holy Shrine And the weathered wood of dogmatic Destiny Dexterously dismantled bereaving blessedly Christ was carefully rested in a timeless tomb As His Loving Light created a newly found womb. Revamped from an older poem... Feb.27.2019 Cross - Your Interpretation Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire Placed 2'nd...Thank You
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Romios Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 11:43 PM
A beautiful poem, indeed! Panagiota
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 8:28 PM
Hello W,W, our lord Jesus went through a lot of pain for all of us.Have a nice evening my friend.
Roper Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 12:26 PM
Such a beautiful poem and great tribute to our Lord Jesus Christ.
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 12:06 AM
- A congratulations for your beautiful and touching winning poem, W.W. :) - "The word cross can mean many things", it's really true :) - So many different suggestions :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Nicole Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 7:54 PM
Beautiful, tender and heartfelt. Your words touch me deeply. Congratulations Winged Warrior, on this win. Love and Light. ~ Brandy
Allison Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 5:19 PM
a beautiful sonnet WW, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Lindley Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 4:20 PM
I love this brilliantly crafted piece my great friend. Its beauty, power and message are all powerful reminders of faith.. A fav.. a glowing jewel..
Devonshire Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 12:53 PM
Even without seeing the picture, you described the crosses on Mt. Calvary very well, W.W. Because of the meter and varied syllable counts, it reads more like an amazing rhyme than a sonnet to me. Enjoyed it very much! With many outstanding entries, judging was difficult (again). Congratulations on a second-place win! And thank you for supporting the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
Callus Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 1:58 PM
Beautiful, descriptive and true to Christian belief, WW. I see a sure winner! Regards // paul
Y. Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 11:31 AM
WoW! WW, What a well written and powerful entry for the contest theme. Excellent interpretation of the cross. Well done. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Cunningham Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 10:58 AM
Beautiful sonnet W.W. , love your interpretation of the cross. Good luck in the contest. Tom.
Smith Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 10:48 AM
Wonderful entry WW, best wishes...
Gauthier Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 9:25 AM
A powerful poem, WW. Bravo.
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