Defining Sleep

Sleep: An act done by oneself.

Almost seems silly to ask for assistance when it is the act of channeling ones
individually unique 
 center-stage by centering ones consciousness. 
  
To be here by myself,
 all alone I perceive a problem. 
 
Despite more than enough peace and quiet,
 I am driven to an insanely hypnopompic state by my own pleas,
 to no longer be tortured and pained and kept from slumber by simple separation 
 from the only remedy I require to reach a relieving saccadic stage, 
 found effortlessly when lying next to you. 

No matter what air, region, or pallet benevolence is formed upon, 
 I swear it true that you bring with a distinguished state of slumber 
 that can not be revamped, copied, or stolen. 

So I lie here redefining this “Sleep” and state that it must be preformed, 
 if wished to be done so properly and propitiously, 
 with you by side. 

Right or left matters not, 
 I give you the choice,
 for both sides of the fence have been lusciously green.

I leave on a note of thanks that has been jotted wholeheartedly
 stating that your helping-hand is greatly adored.
 
I often find it a difficult task to ask for assistance and can not quite recall requesting
your’s, slightly stunned I standby then ask pretentiously
 “How did you know I needed you there?”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Scherber Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 6:59 PM
I will honestly admit that I had a small battle with the way I wanted that section to read, but my strongest thought was to accept it like you see..I do enjoy the grammar catch nonetheless. ;^D I wanted the passage to give more of the impression that the person under spotlight offered a universal and/or mundane solution rather than "English teacher friendly" which made me feel as if I were expressing my unique needs thus for not appealing to outside readers.
Benkhen Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 3:13 PM
if wished to be done so properly and propitiously, with you by my side. Did you purposely leave out My? Or was it a Type"O?
A   Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 9:57 AM
Heidi, a very interesting poem. Keep your mind open with wonderful poems to share like this,..p.d.
Fraser Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 9:50 AM
A write that desires contentment. It was nice to read you Heidi. A warm welcome to the Soup >> James
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