Long Neil Poems

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Premium Member The 1960's

In the 1960's the winds of change were blowing
As a generation came into its own
A feeling of revolution was growing
The seeds had already been sown

It was a time of hope and tears
Of the good the bad and the ugly
Of spaghetti westerns so aptly named  
Make love not  war  protests proclaimed
But the  war raged on just the same 

The Barbie doll was introduced
 And  Beatlemania was set loose
Platform shoes were riding high
Mini skirts showed off thighs
Neil Armstrong walked on the moon
"This Magic Moment" was a hit tune
Everyone was doing the twist
To rhythms they couldn't resist

John Kennedy  was the new president, 
And planned to change the status quo
But on a fateful day in 1963
An assassin's bullet found its mark
And left a nation in the dark 
Dr King and Robert Kennedy met the same fate
They were both killed in 1968

By the end of the decade we were left with a sad song
 "Has anybody here seen our good friends Martin, Robert, and John
They stood for freedom and justice
But we just looked around ....and they were  gone"
© Joseph May  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme


A Stranger and a Friend

A shadow, nay, sullen thunderhead 
inducing a deluge of emotions 
moved across thousands of darkened souls

Freaks, stoners
shy, smart
geeks and loners
outcasts with dreams and compassion in their heart

Strangers like me

To us, you were a friend
we live vicariously through words we couldn't write
thoughts that help us defend
against wolves attacking for spite
we battle predators until the end
paper mache hearts now confettied and contrite

When in need of a voice to understand
you are the poet on which we lean
like a crutch of a crippled, broken man
assisting our stride and making us gleam

Mean pride, through our veins, does pulse
your gift - a gold ingot - exclusively ours
now smelted - our throats convulse
as if poisoned by many whiskey sours

Cancer soiled your beautiful brain
muddied thoughts and took your life
washing future elegance down the drain
freaks are shredded with strife 
like targets at a firing range

Suddenly gone leaving the lives bereft
upon which you left your mark
warrior, graciously, exit...stage left
a celestial journey calls to you embark

Created the soundtrack for our misfit lives
making memories connected to your art
our hope that your music survives
thousands of years touching many a heart

A collective "Thank you Neil"
us castaways won't soon forget
how your lyrics and talent made us feel
ghost ride to your garden in the sunset
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Mandella Was In My Dream

I had a dream
went to a meeting
in an international metropolis
somewhere in Asia Minor
with Mandella, Bono
Schuller and Lieschke.

Clapton and The Edge
were jamming in the background
Santana just shook his head
heavy matters were decided
whilst Neil Young remembered
to wage heavy peace

Mandella just smiled and 
reassured us that no matter what
we must not let fear stand in our way
of carving the road ahead, the road to freedom

Madonna said that the road to hell
is paved with good intentions
and broke into song
yet the harmony sounded more like
don't let fear, don't let fear, don't let fear
intimidate your vision
even if you're blind.
© Uwe Stroh  Create an image from this poem.

Man on the Moon

                                                        “That’s one small step for a man,
                                                             one giant leap for mankind.”
	                                                                 Neil Armstrong

Earth’s planet, moon, 
exposed by the sun's reflection,
beams larger than life in skies of contingency.
Likewise, mankind 
manifested through his mentor, the Son
gains without measure - spiritual magnitude.

Neil Armstrong’s famous words 
after stepping foot on the moon
remind us how minuscule man really is…
Although, the psalmist says,
man was made ruler over the earth...
the moon’s potentate is not specified.

Man on the moon
felt very small, insignificant
yet, left considering infinite possibilities. 
Mankind’s ascent to the skies
embraces every person in good time 
Creation’s current focus – man’s earthly mission.

Mankind’s highlight
to be the first to claim the moon
as property rather than as God’s instrument.
Moreover, made in God’s image
individual man and corporate bodies
will eventually cease and the moon will be “suspended”.

How majestic is God’s name in all the earth. Psalm 8

Useful Moon

It has come to my attention that the moon is capable of growing
green bananas, keeping sheep and goats, but not cows
the cattle emit too much gas.
If we send refugees there and not to Rwanda, they must be
nonsmokers; which surprised me as a packet of Camel was
found by Neil Armstrong, it was planted there by young Putin 
to blame the USA.
The Palestinians refuse to settle on the moon and insist 
on staying in Palestine despite the Zionist efforts to kill them.
Mind, a day might come when the Zionists have to go
to the moon and build a new Jerusalem in a moon crater.
In the meantime, IDF is tasting their skill in Gaza.
© Jan Hansen  Create an image from this poem.


Premium Member The Presser

the Buzz, Collins, Armstrong, applause.
first man, there were three
earthlings who were projected into space.
crowded, not of this world
of celebration and glory.
before lights flashing, attention-demanding.
mission impossible, a presser.
to the moon, but dry
in the throat.
watch the hands, fiddling with papers,
sooth-petting. not practiced
in speech; not 2024 peak.
lights out in black box - perhaps
the famous astronauts
imagine they’re back in space,
clear from prying eyes
as they turn attention to the somewhere screen.
In 2024, we’re bored
because we’ve learned to be entertained
at fast speed, not stuttering-suspended
in animation. fine fellows, firsts
paved the way to now - history-bound.
funny photo caused levity,
liftoff of audience lightened
the payload. next up,
Buzz in blue,
looks directly at the crowd,
hands in pounce mode.
fight or flight, so apropos.
Neil continues, more comfortably explaining,
after his two constituents calmed the waters.
later the moon will peer down
in the night sky.
today kids don’t dream
of flight, they fly
effortlessly through the skies
and little Einsteins
is not impossible in their eyes.
but back in 1969
a sleepy me, just 8,
witnessed the first moon landing.

Premium Member - Judging Or Not Judging - I Need Expert Assistance -

I sent my poem to Supreme Court judge in the US, Neil Gorsuch
He was clear about his personal opinions
"WooW, a first class poem ~ a top winner poem"
Should I trust him, a friend of Donald Trump



I called the Supreme Court judge in the US, Brett Kavanaugh
(I read my poem to him)
"Now, what do you think ... is this a winning poem" ? ... I asked
Brett Kavanaugh replied,"I drank some beer last night and got black out
... harassment, this poem is just crap ... you will get an N / A "










07.03.2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
Copyright © All Rights Reserved

You Be The Judge Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Bobby May
2nd place in the contest

Premium Member Neil Young At the Door

'You are like a hurricane

          There's calm in your eye

                    And I'm getting blown away'

	                        (Neil Young Like a Hurricane’)


his friends had given him their version of the weather report

gale force winds flood warning thunderstorms and destruction

she has done it before is a dreamer addict and rides on a broom 

close the shutters put a log on the fire and check the drain pipes


their advice sounded hollow for when a hard rain’s a gonna fall

blowing in the wind may be the better option than dying inside

he had no time for torrential tears and sounded the depth of her soul

filled with emotions as he searched for Atlantis at the shore of her eyes


mesmerised they made love in the beach hut of smooth drift wood

lay on sea grass and pebbles and embraced dolphins and star light

her broom was a sceptre of kindness and wielded naked compassion

passion and lust like a hurricane steadied their minds and cohabitation


calm and tranquil they glowed like the moon waxing and waning

as they sailed on pleasure love joy on winds and growth of change

the roof leaked but did not halt a wild wet and magical passage

of time surrender fulfilment and reincarnation of forgotten treasures


jellyfish sea-horses peace doves and a circling gull gave their blessing

shouted as by law of nature you must spread your wings and fly high

sand caressed their skin and ground away sadness sorrow and doubts

and the beacon of freedom watched over intuition courage and tides



'Take him by the hand
           
          Make him understand

                    The world on you depends

                             Our life will never end'
	
                                       (The Doors Riders on the Storms)


23rd October 2020

Premium Member Sweet Carolyn

Corresponding to the song "Sweet Caroline" by Neil Diamond


When it began, 
All those years way back when 
All the poets like me, who knew you well 
You, touched our hearts 
And our hearts felt your warmth 
Who'd of believed you'd come along
 
Hearts, touching hearts, reaching out 
Touching us, touching you 

Sweet Carolyn, our times never seemed so sad
 
I've been inclined, to believe it never could, But now I 
Think of you gone 
Although we're saddened 
We can only smile, thinking of you 
Although we hurt, and hurting may last forever 
We can only smile, hurting for you 

Hearts, touching hearts, reaching out 
Touching you, touching us

Sweet Carolyn, your presence touched us, clearly 
You will be missed so dearly 
Rest in peace, our sweet Carolyn  


*Dedicated to the very lovely Carolyn Devonshire 
May she rest in heavenly peace 


Tributes to Carolyn Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: Constance La France 
8-13-2021
Form: Lyric

Premium Member Jukebox

The Rolling Stones, The Beatles, Bread
Billy Joel and The Grateful Dead

Suzi Quatro, Styx, Kate Bush
Elton John, Yes, Kiss and Rush

Freda Payne, The Brothers Four
Dolly Parton, Sandie Shaw

The Jackson Five and Bruce Springsteen
Elvis Presley, Slade and Queen

David Bowie, The Beach Boys, Sweet
Rose Royce, Madness and The Beat

Dusty Springfield, Fox, Nick Drake
Neil Sedaka, Sparks, Greg Lake

Three Dog Night and The Ramones
Pink Floyd and The Undertones

Blue Öyster Cult, The Dave Clark Five
Bachman-Turner Overdrive

Golden Earring, Argent and
The Sensational Alex Harvey Band

Mott The Hoople, E.L.O
Dr. Hook and Status Quo

Skeeter Davis, Iggy Pop
Alice Cooper, ZZ Top

The Rev. Al Green and Steeley Dan
The Who, The Jam and Steeleye Span

The Monkees, Abba, Cream and Free
Lynyrd Skynrd, 10CC

Renaissance, Blondie and The Clash
The Faces, Love and Wishbone Ash

The Moody Blues, Deep Purple, Mud
Frankie Goes To Hollywood

Bob Dylan and The Shangri Las
The Kinks. The Birds. The Doors. The Cars

The Seekers and Roberta Flack
The Drifters, T. Rex, Fleetwood Mac

Tina Turner, Prince, James Brown
..And all the music from Motown.
Form: Rhyme

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