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The Splice of Life
“The Splice of Life”



When colour 
was to be 
washed out
of the world 

the evil ones 
didn’t care

the Actor led 
with his 
Dementors 
either side of him

Laundry, 

they resolved 
to be the best 
pristine method 
for...

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Categories: criticised, humanity, political, religion, science,
Form: Free verse



Face Masks, Face Veils: Same Thing
https://youtu.be/c1gNm21YzfI


When last I visited India almost a decade ago
I recall riding on my brother's scooter 
as he drove me around town,
And I saw fully veiled Muslim women
half their faces veiled, masked in Niqab 
driving scooters,...

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Categories: criticised, health, truth, , western,
Form: Prose
Premium Member 100 fears
100 fears - but still OK


Will you accept me
When I admit that I am afraid of dying, 
Or inappropriately laughing,
Or suddenly crying.

And then there is the 
Fear of my emotional pain,
Of my rage
When it suddenly...

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Categories: criticised, conflict, confusion, dark, feelings, humanity, lost, trust,
Form: Rhyme
Life On a Pause
Destiny never announces to us our place of arrival
The streets, countries or cities
Sometimes our journey is by circumstance
Other times it is divine
At thirty eight years old
I was still looking for Mr direction
I was still in...

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Categories: criticised, inspirational, introspection, life, beautiful, me, people, beautiful,
Form: Dramatic Monologue
I Am
I am weak. I am strong. I am right. I am wrong. I am everything in between and more. But what else?
 
I am nothing but a label that everyone knows. I am what I...

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Categories: criticised, beauty, betrayal, bullying, feelings, i am, image,
Form: Free verse



Premium Member Frolic In the Off-Leash Dog Park
With a wag of tail and tongue bedraggled
dogs drag their owners to frolic off-leash
in parks devoted to dog meets dog dalliance and play.

Despite their authority, the owners know each
not by the owner’s names, but by...

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Categories: criticised, dog,
Form: Prose Poetry
Perfect Your Uniqueness
To the ones who are imperfect,

If anyone perfect is reading this please stop reading and go back to your amazing life. Yup life has to be amazing if you are perfect. Well if it's not...

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Categories: criticised, anger, anti bullying, art, childhood, parents,
Form: Prose
Premium Member Reflections In Silence - Moon and I
Battling the instabilities of reality.
Behind daylight's closed doors.
Imaginary chains keep me captive.

White walls decorated with 
silhouettes of suppressed shadows -
disappear, upon the sight of twilight.

Alone, my eyes search for companionship.

Then she appears, smiling down at...

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© Silent One  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: criticised, analogy, life, philosophy,
Form: Free verse
Tractor Boy
>Although I love writing, I would also like my books to sell. Then I can grant my wife her wishes and buy her a house by the sea. And if there is enough in the...

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Categories: criticised, confusion, health, how i feel, life, people,
Form: I do not know?
He Erased Us, Didn'T He
I hear a few songs from my playlists that make me think of you
And I wonder if you have any that make you think of me
You don’t call anymore, even after I asked you to
And,...

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Categories: criticised, brother, daughter, mother,
Form: Free verse
Writing Is Not For Poor Minds
Don't, if you can't!
Writing is not for poor minds that seek popularity,
You must kill your mind seventy times seventy time if you really want to write and write and rewrite and write for people to...

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Categories: criticised, africa, art,
Form: Blank verse
Meryl Streep Criticised Donald Trump
As you are aware I get what I call my inspiration, if that’s the word, for my poems from news items and a comment by Meryl Streep at the recent awards ceremony for actors/actresses /films...

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Categories: criticised, happiness, joy, peace, words,
Form: I do not know?
Trapped In the Boxe of Society
There is too much hypocrisy in our society
How can you be saved?
You get involved in that game of pretending
At first you tell yourself: come on 
It’s just a game act as if you were in...

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Categories: criticised, life,
Form: Free verse
Flux Eterna
“That body is female!”, they tell me.
At the turn of the moon
It purges itself of its sins,
Washing away what lives could have been,
Punished for failing biological duties.

“That body is female!”, they tell me.
Forever marked with...

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© Han Marlo  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: criticised, angst, deep, how i feel, identity,
Form: Free verse
I Cooked the Book That Would Not Tap
I Cooked the Book that Would Not Tap
 
A Doomsday, a nightmare gone wrong,
My hand shot with pain and didn’t stop,
Bandages hid the wound I wove for kong,
The silence echoed round the wheel fop.

I screamed...

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Categories: criticised, analogy, angst, appreciation, atheist, beauty,
Form: Quatrain
The Good Die Young
the good die young
Jonny was a good man
he was a man of his words
who sacrificed all he got
for the sake of his people
he never lived a life of lies
so truthful to his community
he offer help...

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Categories: criticised, africa, confusion, courage, heartbreak, humanity,
Form: Epic
Michael Jackson
MICHAEL JACKSON
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They called him a wacko,said he's a cracko;
But on the dance floor,he made them go loco.
He was nicknamed smelly,gyrated his belly;
But he danced like his birth was from a can full of jelly.
Born at...

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Categories: criticised, angst
Form: Narrative
Women In Chains
Cursed at birth, of anguish no dearth
For parents a liability, subject to partiality
Her studies are curtailed, her ambitions derailed
Childhood spent on household chores
Serving males one of her chores

Bound by chain, her childhood is slain!
Oh! The...

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Categories: criticised, woman,
Form: Free verse
Power of Courage
Initial days after marriage
They were the worst days of my life

Everyone shouted and criticised me. 
Daily I would cry
I felt I didn't deserve to live.
I was sad, depressed, contemplated suicide

Everyday I would resolve to be...

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Categories: criticised, courage,
Form: Free verse
Deep
You can’t avoid it, it’s all over the news.
Every clip and video, millions of views.
Varying opinions, not all of them healthy.
Is all this attention because they were so wealthy?

Some people say it serves them right,...

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Categories: criticised, death, deep, psychological, society,
Form: Rhyme
Doing As I Am Told
They tell me I was a most annoying child, not good looking like everyone else's son - 

ugh! nor bright as a button, but the 'thick' one. One of those who just tried to help...

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© Peter Dorr  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: criticised, passion,
Form: Free verse
SHE
She is strong, 
A survivor to the core, 
Fighting for the rights 
That should be hers, 
Instead she is denied of. 

She is brave, 
Courageous in the midst of her fear, 
Striving to give a...

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Categories: criticised, mother,
Form: Free verse
The Mona Lisa

I saw this darling little chick,
she looked a swinging geezer.
I thought I’d move to get in quick.
Her name was Mona Lisa.

I thought she had a perfect face,
a most bewitching smile.
She swayed with such amazing grace.
Oh...

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Categories: criticised, hope, sad,
Form: Verse
To Be a Man
I am a woman and I'm not trying to speak on behalf of men with my poem... 
But, I do know many men are struggling... 
Today more than ever... And I wanted my guy friends...

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Categories: criticised, encouraging, meaningful, men, society, spiritual, visionary, wisdom,
Form: Rhyme
Barrenness To Adoration
Orphanage home is her home.. 
Dedication with commitment
Modesty and submissiveness 
God first before another..
Harmonious with pureness 
Ruth is her name
for she's compassionate 

Married to the kingdom works...
for she set sight to win the race..
Here comes...

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Categories: criticised, anxiety, depression, wife,
Form: Bio

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