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Premium Member Untitled. Written on March 3, 2010. I am now 33 yrs.

I translated this from German to English. Which unfortunately makes it less elegant. 


      To share my love,
nothing more painful can I imagine,
       than to tear my heart in two. 

To be bound to someone eternally,
     but never fully belong to him
     There is neither yes nor no,
           just endless desire. 

     To be betrayed, in the
     most cruel way, is not
       with the body, but
          with the heart. 

 Chaos of emotions, Love and
 Suffering have never been closer to
each other. 

                 How will this End, no
                 solution in sight 
                 With pain and tears?
                       I don't know

 
         The obligation, to have to make a decision
          weighs heavily on my Shoulders

Premium Member I miss you

I miss you
I MISS YOU (how to let go?)

Why can't I be with you?
Every day like the sunshine. 
They say time heals all wounds,
But my Heart is
                          for all eternity to yours
                                                          Bound.
I have to comprehend,
I can't see you..  

It sounds like a joke,
But to miss you this much,
It really breaks my heart!

For Pierre.

Premium Member Hello Salome

Stay a child of the sun in your life

Because whosoever hath the sun

Can give the sun!


Premium Member Liebe nicht mich


If you love wealth, do not love me
For there are many who are richer than me

If you love beauty, do not love me
For there are many who are more beautiful than me

Yet if it is love that you love, only love me
For there is no one who loves you more than I.

Giving Up the Ghost

heavenly father  
not my will, but yours be done —  
my life in your hands

I’m Not Giving Up

some days feel heavier
than I ever admit out loud
and I wake already tired
before the morning has even settled

but there’s a part of me
that keeps going anyway
a small, stubborn spark
that refuses to go out

I’ve walked through things
that could have stopped me
yet here I am
still standing
still trying
still choosing to move forward

and I need to hear this clearly
from myself
to myself

I’m not stepping back
I’m not losing heart
I’m not letting the hard days
decide who I am

I’m not giving up on me
not now
not ever

because I deserve a life
that feels like living
not just getting through

and I’m already
on my way there


Premium Member Giving up on life

Guilty. You've chosen your poison.
You accept the worst consequences as inevitable.
Turning this around seems inconceivable.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 3rd place 2026

The Storm

A storm is coming

The sun is shining 
The birds are singing
The grass is green
That's when you know
A storm is coming 

You can feel it
The tension in the air
You can sense it 
The anxiety it brings

Nothing lasts forever
The high of happiness 
Always brings a storm

You start to notice
The shaking in your hands
The race running through your mind
The loss of your appetite 
The mess in your room
The self-isolation 
A storm is coming

Darkness clouds your every thought
Everything comes raining down
As your tears flood your home
Your life thundering with anger
Hoping soon the lightning strikes you 
The storm is here

Everything is destroyed 
The damage is permanent 
But no one seems to notice
The pain of what you’ve lost 

You call for help
No one answers 
Your alone
You search for safety 
But you can’t escape yourself

The storm is never-ending 
Until you decide to end it all

Premium Member Giving Up on the Garden of Eden

Mankind aims to colonize Mars
We plan to not repeat past mistakes
~ Nature has way of prevailing



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 3rd place 2025

Hesitation my friend lets die together

Hesitation greets me like a neighbor
Boring its eyes into my skull with a friendly smile
It has no face and no skin
It doesn’t even have eyes

The morning air is hot and solid
Like water but thicker
My hands are sweaty and covered in blisters
And my legs, do not respond

The air of dirty mornings
Shifts in scent
Till the sour tang of violence
Is hanging to interrupt

My soft bones of hesitation
Listen to be called out
For a violent lie
With violent intentions
Are never good for volatile patients

So I did grasp a hope of string
Around my neck did marry me
Such intimate things
To carry me
Away with hesitation and me.

If I were a poem

If I were a poem
metaphoric words would dance in
synchronicity,
similes would waltz the frown 
from off my face.
If I were a poem
I'd wrap sonnets around you,
Like tourniquet stanzas 
healing chapters in verse.


If I were a poem
cliches would clash with
unwritten rules,
words would not rhyme and dear diary would not exist.
If I were a poem
gone would be the day
that I smudged my own ink,
threw you in the bin and said
" I'm done with all this. "

Oh
if I were a poem
my legacy would remain
As a great prophet who once was
and always is-
If I were a poem.

Giving Up Their Motherhood

If mothers didn't bear children,
laughter would turn into monotony:
can we imagine mankind's misery?
No infant would cry when they are hungry,
no noisy kids screaming and having fun!

Wouldn't God be mad at us,
calling us evil, selfish beings?
Wouldn't empty cribs not be rocked
while a sweet lullaby is not whispered?

A mother's duty is to bear healthy children,
God gave his blessing to devoted couples being
faithful to each other to bring forth their offspring:
how often does an unmarried mother sing?

The woman's role can be misunderstood,
many choose the single life, choosing freedom
from responsibility to pursue their dream:
have they regretted giving up their motherhood?

Premium Member his soul giving up

Feelings of worthlessness consumed Derek
Of course it rained today, ruining his last day off work
Drips and drops of disappointment drizzled down his dendrites
He heard his sigh before he recognized it as his soul giving up
Wasted life

Some Days

Some days...
I just want to give up.
Most days...
like I'm never good enough to 
feel something real.
These days...
I feel down...
I feel down!
In need of love.
In need of love.
Someone to hold.
Someone to hold.
In need of passion.
In need of hope.
I feel I need your love...
your love...
Some days...

Quitter

Every day I try something new
And hope my plans don't go askew;
Because of this horrible quitting through and through

Thought I'd start knitting
But never thought of committing;
The name 'quitter' seems fitting.

I'll play Badminton for a day
But when it gets hard I'd rather not stay;
In this arena of players who paved their way.

They weren't like me,
Who has a procrastination guarantee;
When the game got tough, they didn't flee.

Thousands of things I said I'd do
That I tried to eschew;
And that's why, they're way overdue.

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