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Giving Up on the Garden of Eden

Mankind aims to colonize Mars
We plan to not repeat past mistakes
~ Nature has way of prevailing



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 3rd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Wolf Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 8:14 PM
Ain't it the truth? If mankind ever gets close to the Red Planet, Mars will probably feel like Charlotte, NC feels right now, what with the arrival of I.C.E. to their city.
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November 16, 2025 at 8:36 PM
Maybe moving to Mars has its advantages ~ lol Thanks, Gershon
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