Draw Close Poems | Examples

Premium Member The Shadow Dwellers

Emerging from my teens
I had a head full
of ghosts to escape from -
inhabitants of an inner world
I kept to myself. Future life
was over there, 
at the end of a train line, 
a long road, the last port 
of call on a ship's long voyage.

I could never get far enough
away - they always 
found me hiding in some
masquerade, a clever cover
concocted to conceal - 
at times I even fooled myself.
Mirrors were a bane,
they told the truth 
and so I learned to look away.

A lifetime on 
they are still with me but now
I know each by name. 
There are days  
when they draw close 
and become weepy
as if seeking love,
though still afraid to leave
the refuge of my shadow.

Prayers at Dawn

I’m ushered into a new day,
I walk along its path,  
As I long to be embraced by its elements,
I pray to find the door to the light of redemption.  

Nothing is within my strength to accomplish, 
I’m like a turbulent sea,  
Hoping to find tranquillity in the day I’m privileged to see,
I pray, Lord, for rest from my chaotic thoughts.  

How do I know if my devotion carries a worthy fragrance?  
I’m just clay seeking acceptance from the Potter,
I’m only dust yearning for a place in the palm of the Immortal One,
I desire to drink from the river of Your pleasure, O Lord.  

How can I change the tide?  
I’m encumbered, entangled, and entwined,
O Lord, hear my deepest cries,
Bring me into Your light as I draw close to You.


March 14, 2025.

lost in dream

I hold three magic rocks, in my hand
Rolling them over and over and over
Leaving this reality behind, far behind

I ride on a sound Arabian stallion
He takes me to snow mountain
Where snow trees are stunned 
by cold wind

I get down by a swirling stream
I walk with him downhill
Where I see Lynx and Bear
busy fishing

Off again on our course free
I ride at ease gracefully
I see a palace at a distance
My heart set racing

We draw close to the mansion
I see a delicate princess
Walking elegantly in rose garden
Blushing wind

She was singing to a chickadee
Birds were chirping to her
As butterflies danced on flowers
Enchanting

I took my three magic rocks
Wrapped in silk, I sent her as gift
With a note that read, ‘Be so
Blessed dear, walk in truth’

‘A rock for good health be
A rock for good life be
A rock for divine blessings be’
Amen

Even before she could read my note
I was riding away on my stallion
Who flew faster like falcon
Down the mountain


Another manger

What trembling light,
what quiver of eternity
gleamed in the shepherds' eyes,
unaware heralds of an hour
that would shatter time
like a vessel overflowing with heaven.
You wish for the transparency
of that intact heart,
naked of pride and fear,
to draw close to the threshold
of the cave,
where the earth breathes
the miracle that overshadows it.
You long for eyes of crystalline wonder,
pure as the first morning,
to seize the whisper
that transforms the world,
the silent song
that illuminates every distance.
You yearn for trembling lips,
almost like dawn,
to stammer the name
that fills and dissolves everything,
while the star keeps watch,
high, invincible,
above the abyss of time.
Yet that moment belonged
only to the shepherds,
the first fruits of the waiting
of all humanity.
History will not return,
but a threshold remains open,
and if you come much later,
it does not matter:
the mystery awaits.
It is enough to make your heart
another manger,
a womb of silence,
where the Infinite
may be incarnated again.

Premium Member ROTHKO ekphrasis



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Premium Member CHRISTMAS

C Christ, the child, born on this day.
H Heavens alight, a bright star in the east.
R Riches from afar, the wise men three.
I Infant, innocently sleeps upon the hay of a manger.
S Simple beginning for the newborn king.
T Tender and mild, he does not cry.
M Mary, gently tends to her beloved son.
A Animals draw close to watch over and protect.
S Songs of the angels echo through the heavens.


Premium Member OPEN VERSE 11-12

EXPLORATIONS
divergent
  transition
extinguish
in
surroundings
with
echoes
 defined
&distinctive
crytalising
the
symbolic
patterns
  fused
alongside
  the
geometrical
  harmony
revealed
in
deeper
 things&
draw close
PRESENT-MOMENTS
different
  facets
particularly
 stylistic
intense
  & preoccupied
enclosed
focussed
in
a
  sweeping
     panorama
of
naturalistic
 simplicity
of
common
 consciousness
closely
linked
 in enthusiastic
cultures
of
 imagination


OBJECTIVES
in
realistic
 representation
implicated
by
 characteristic
emphasis
of the
   naturalistic
& contemporary
motifs
in
uniform
  focus
schematically
displayed
panoramically
&
monumental
in expression
of attitude
poised
  & orientated
in
visionary
emotion
  of a dream

Premium Member Diamonds

On earthen shores are treasures

                                 Of love, of joy, of life

                                A family's forever bond

                            The children, Husband, Wife

                           Treasure troves of memories

                          Within' these earthen treasuries

                          The blessed earthly life of years

                     And yet, can break, and rush to tears

                   The tears like diamonds fall like the sands  

                      Lift them Father, within Your hands,

                       The broken hearts in sorrows weep  

                     And in Your love, please. Father, keep  

                    Those washed in tears sweet memories

                         Flows from earthen treasuries

                  Comfort the broken, draw close and near
 
                          Drying, every diamond tear

                          
                                         Amen

Let Me See Those Two Eyes Shine

Let me see those two eyes shine 
Like South Africa’s Gold Mine;
For weeks you had had to pine 
Over what makes voices whine,
Your lips distanced from Red wine;
From what you would on them dine.

Love’s seat you draw close to mine, 
Love arms round my waist entwine;
Would both mean lending lifeline  
Brow freeing of the squeezed line
A phone still holding its line?
The Phoned still on the right line?

Then, to both I say quite fine!
All that I haveth just thine’
You’ll live your life – a Cat’s Nine,
To all fluids taste except brine …

Let me see those two eyes shine 
Like South Africa’s Gold Mine.

Premium Member Indictment of Hope

I have never told you how I feel,
Only through love is life made real,
I would never let you into my heart,
You've never left me; we were not apart.

I intend to abandon my nomadic status, 
I inspect the finances, but no apparatus,
I love quiet in my heart, or rather, loudly,
If I could see us rapt, I'd dream proudly.

Spare me from the agony of heartache,
In my life, I've never felt what's at stake,
To embrace you is my ultimate dream,
Any time you draw close, I crave to scream.

To slump you a piece of heaven to settle,
I might tell you how much I can handle.

Written: January 16, 2023

Should a Woman Put On Trousers

Should a woman put on trousers?
Yep: ones that don’t men make browsers:
That let Top Secrets remain secret;
Documents eyes should not just meet:
Trousers that won’t hatch Internets,
Lust cause to beat its castanets…

Trousers fully masking Womanhood,
Easily The Misunderstood:
Sometimes, seeming to say “Draw close,
So that you may pick up your Rose…
	
Women may be free with trousers
But trousers could turn howitzers: 
Pastors and Imams gunning down, 
Priests causing to smile who should frown,
Maiden forcing to dump her gown;
Strongly shake the firmest crown!

And may men put on the skirt?
Yeah: if their trousers packed up dirt
And nearing it could image hurt
Worse than a woman’s for Shirt.

Premium Member Results Day

Swaddled in a grey woollen scarf
Soft rain falling gently on your face. 
Crows CACKLING in the trees overhead
Tipping leaves, laden with droplets,
DRIPPING  like heavy tears,
SMACKING the concrete path below.

You sigh as you draw close to me
FLICK your cigarette, take a draw. 
Hands trembling, you open the car door
The CLUNK of metal breaks the hush. 

A train RUMBLES in the distance. 
The scent of your chanel perfume 
OOZES into the frost chilled car. 
Outside a gaggle of nurses
CHATTER  and FIZZ after work. 

I turn to you and MURMER ,
Fumbling for words like a fool, 
You WHISPER clasping your hand round mine,
 “ I’ll be alright  - the tumours benign.”

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Premium Member Found In May

eveything glows
     is reflectve
       nothing happens

garlands of blossom
the wonder of it all
   cowslips in  flower
     buttercups bloom
colour
     shines golden

           in the heart of nature
visible
    vulnerable
tender warm&
                    true
that
   something special
look
   more closely
at
   beautiful shapes
unsophiticated

draw close
    to the looking glass
                          of nature
splashed
with love
       brings out tenderness
entirely possessed
by
   the rhythm of the day
watching
     we marvel
     in patience &hope
each morning
a happening
         to feel
as day
     succeeds day
the invisible
           hidden from sight
as summer
     grows within

Premium Member With a Thousand Lights

Light the skies with a thousand lights and bolts 
dismember every fear and talk to the stars  
watch the golden orbs appear from far remote  
and glide yourself home down the river of Oz 

Feel every stroke, draw close to the waters edge 
remember your place in the sun , the yesterdays 
that brought you grace and youth, 
chide with the fairies and the angels on high 

Dream as big as you dare my lovely human 
navigate and journey  as you fall afresh 
pamper your heart on this one special night 
and light the sky, with a thousand lights...

If Tomorrow's Promise Was Broken

beneath the effulgence
of obscured moonlight
emanate shadows stalk
as i draw close
within the weakened sighs
of misted breaths
on bended knee
as pleas abate
within the confines
of dark nights

cockcrow may come
without rise
of my eyes
sanguine skies
blushed against
pale skin
as folded hands rest

fear not
for i will join those
bereft of life
in more than memory

my eyes have seen
tangerine tips of trees
within autumn's breath
pirouette down
in scribbles on ground
beneath bloodied sun
against crimson skies
as lilac hues faded
against the ocean

i have heard
its thunderous roars
as it wet-kissed the sand
while gulls scurried
in its wake

i have tasted
the lingers
of its salty spray
fall from the corners
of mine own eyes

the sands of time
have etched
the same trails
upon my face
of my yesteryear's
plight

i am weathered the same
as the shores edges
in its lash
as it pressed back
against storms

i have etched my words
upon paperless memories
in the depths of your mind

for i will linger there
if tomorrow
were to never rise
through my own eyes


August 20, 2019

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