Indictment of Hope

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I have never told you how I feel, Only through love is life made real, I would never let you into my heart, You've never left me; we were not apart. I intend to abandon my nomadic status, I inspect the finances, but no apparatus, I love quiet in my heart, or rather, loudly, If I could see us rapt, I'd dream proudly. Spare me from the agony of heartache, In my life, I've never felt what's at stake, To embrace you is my ultimate dream, Any time you draw close, I crave to scream. To slump you a piece of heaven to settle, I might tell you how much I can handle. Written: January 16, 2023

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Hilo Poet

Date: 1/22/2023 9:53:00 AM

The intricate values of relationships as each define the wherewithal and its delicate thread. An involving piece of corners and doors, Lasaad, Aloha William

Valsa George

Date: 1/18/2023 3:26:00 AM

Contradictions and ambivalences seem to rule the love life. You know only through love, life is made real, but you don't want to let her in.... but both of you have never been apart. Enjoyed this surreal relationship.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/18/2023 1:42:00 AM

This is romantic to the inth degree! "To embrace you is my ultimate dream, Any time you draw close, I crave to scream." Wonderful!

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/17/2023 2:51:00 PM

Very nice. I can feel this. Well written :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2023 9:31:00 AM

Very expressive and emotive lines penned in this one. Creative work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by. I like the picture of the poppies. Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/17/2023 6:01:00 AM

Highly emotive write my friend. Do I hear the voices of conflicting emotions?

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/17/2023 5:32:00 AM

To embrace you is my ultimate dream, Any time you draw close, I crave to scream!! Very nice, Lasaad!