OPEN VERSE 11-12

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THESE ARE OPEN(organic) VERSES using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretation unique to the moment

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EXPLORATIONS
divergent
  transition
extinguish
in
surroundings
with
echoes
 defined
&distinctive
crytalising
the
symbolic
patterns
  fused
alongside
  the
geometrical
  harmony
revealed
in
deeper
 things&
draw close
PRESENT-MOMENTS
different
  facets
particularly
 stylistic
intense
  & preoccupied
enclosed
focussed
in
a
  sweeping
     panorama
of
naturalistic
 simplicity
of
common
 consciousness
closely
linked
 in enthusiastic
cultures
of
 imagination


OBJECTIVES
in
realistic
 representation
implicated
by
 characteristic
emphasis
of the
   naturalistic
& contemporary
motifs
in
uniform
  focus
schematically
displayed
panoramically
&
monumental
in expression
of attitude
poised
  & orientated
in
visionary
emotion
  of a dream

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