If Tomorrow's Promise Was Broken

beneath the effulgence
of obscured moonlight
emanate shadows stalk
as i draw close
within the weakened sighs
of misted breaths
on bended knee
as pleas abate
within the confines
of dark nights

cockcrow may come
without rise
of my eyes
sanguine skies
blushed against
pale skin
as folded hands rest

fear not
for i will join those
bereft of life
in more than memory

my eyes have seen
tangerine tips of trees
within autumn's breath
pirouette down
in scribbles on ground
beneath bloodied sun
against crimson skies
as lilac hues faded
against the ocean

i have heard
its thunderous roars
as it wet-kissed the sand
while gulls scurried
in its wake

i have tasted
the lingers
of its salty spray
fall from the corners
of mine own eyes

the sands of time
have etched
the same trails
upon my face
of my yesteryear's
plight

i am weathered the same
as the shores edges
in its lash
as it pressed back
against storms

i have etched my words
upon paperless memories
in the depths of your mind

for i will linger there
if tomorrow
were to never rise
through my own eyes


August 20, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 4/24/2020 12:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I love where you say, "i have etched my words upon paperless memories in the depths of your mind." So very true. Have a wonderful day and enjoy your win.....
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Date: 8/25/2019 3:10:00 PM
Back with congrats Sandra on a well deserved TOP win.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/26/2019 7:31:00 AM
Thank you :) hugs
Date: 8/25/2019 6:55:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win, my friend! This one IS a winner for sure!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/25/2019 11:10:00 AM
Thank you my friend...with school back in session my time is more limited, as i know yours is too...appreciate your kind comments and visits :) hugs
Date: 8/24/2019 10:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/25/2019 11:08:00 AM
Thank you so very much Eve for your visit and kind comment :) hugs
Date: 8/24/2019 1:21:00 PM
A deserved top prize , a wonderful write congrats Sandy on outstanding work!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/24/2019 6:15:00 PM
Thank you so very much John, i appreciate you kind comments and visits :) hugs
Date: 8/24/2019 11:24:00 AM
beautiful, just perfection. I adore your gift. congrats :)-luloo
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/24/2019 6:15:00 PM
Thank you my friend...you have that same gift... hugs :)
Date: 8/24/2019 8:45:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/24/2019 6:14:00 PM
Thank you so very much Anne-Lise... hugs :)
Date: 8/24/2019 7:40:00 AM
Brilliant! You're such an awesome poetess, Sandra:-) Congratulations on your win!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/24/2019 6:14:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words and visit.... hugs :)
Date: 8/24/2019 3:56:00 AM
wow, your poem took me on a journey, one thinking about the end... your poem is fitting to the theme and I thoroughly enjoyed your vocabulary to create emotive and vivid imagery.... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/24/2019 6:42:00 AM
Wow thank you so much for the honor of a win and for hosting the contest as well as your generous comment :) hugs
Date: 8/21/2019 6:10:00 PM
- It feels like you are prepared and your suitcase is ready .... it is packed with love, your story / life and your memories :) - A wonderful poem Sandra - Best wishes in the contest ... I am sure it becomes a great winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/21/2019 6:38:00 PM
... so sad to hear about your family ;(
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/21/2019 6:17:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise, longevity is not in my family and diabetes effects everyone...i just got it in january, type one so no fighting it....i hope to extend my years beyond all the families but one never knows what cards fate may deal! hugs :)
Date: 8/21/2019 3:22:00 PM
OMG how much better can you get? FAVE
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/21/2019 5:59:00 PM
Wow thank you for the compliment and the honor of a fave :) hugs
Date: 8/21/2019 11:17:00 AM
It was such a delight to ponder the glimpses of the past in your words..great details and imagery..my very best for a TOP win, Sandra.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/21/2019 5:59:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay, not even sure where this one came from, i started with one thought and my muse took off on me :) hugs
Date: 8/20/2019 9:02:00 PM
Wonderful write...nothing less is expected from you, never disappointed!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/21/2019 9:34:00 AM
Thank you John for your wonderful comment~ hugs :)
Date: 8/20/2019 3:33:00 PM
Lovely penning Sandra, bringing many thoughts to make one ponder on life! Great imagery and insightful thought! HUgs and blessings, Gordon
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/20/2019 6:15:00 PM
Thank you Gordon, we are never promised our next breath of air, so we put our faith in tomorrow’s rise :) hugs
Date: 8/20/2019 11:48:00 AM
Another soft and enchanting poem. This was crafted beautifully, it flows so smoothly and leaves a good feeling even if tomorrow never comes. Best of luck.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/20/2019 11:57:00 AM
Thank you Chris, those around me have died young...i know life has no promises of a tomorrow, so all we can do is take in the beauty of life as it unfolds and love those in our lives :) hugs
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