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Brutally Broken

Born in the summer,
with curly, black hair.
You had stolen my heart,
Exposed what was there.
You made me a mommy,
Tiny and perfectly made,
My heart outside of my body, 
My life for yours I would trade.
I watched as you grew,
And the years went by too fast.
You became a young woman,
I wished your childhood would last.
You were not only my child,
But also my friend.
You'd call me for everything,
I prayed it never would end.
I thanked God for His gift,
Of giving me you.
He must have seen you were perfect,
Because He needed you too.
I've been shattered and broken,
My soul now missing a piece,
My heart shuttered and bleeding,
No more joy and no peace.
I’ve cried so long and so hard,
Begging God for you to return.
But death is too final,
I’m beginning to learn.
You were sweet, kind and gentle,
And loved by so many.
People said you were flawed,
But I didn't see any.
The days have seemed longer,
The nights now stretch on.
I want to reach out,
But forget you are gone.

Brutally Honest

I’m thirsty
It’s hot
I order a cold, refreshing soda.
I can hardly wait

My tastebuds excited as they wait for the glorious liquid to envelope the inside of my mouth

Anticipating the rush of little bubbles exploding with fervor as they make their way down my throat.

The satisfaction of feeling the cold fluid colliding with my internal thermostat, plunging the reading back to decency 
Refreshing my ever parched and dry soul

Only to swallow a flat, warm soda.

That has been my experience knowing you.

Premium Member - Waves Hit Brutally -

When the storm is cold and strong
                             and I feel as I'm going under
                             far out into the northern sea
                                     The ice cold wind
                                  stinging my wet cheek

                              Some days the sea takes me
                         in waves of pain and heavy thoughts
                      Bitter storms will come and they will pass
                             no matter how I deal with them
                              Right now the sky is dark gray






30.01.2023
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Brutally Honest

Brutally honest

I can't hide my shadow 
I can't be silent 
I love to express my mind 

So let me speak 
Am not perfect 
But I got a mind too

Don't get offended 
With my words 

When am loud to say 
The truth 

Cos I know most times 
My words are 
Brutally honest

Brutally Beautiful

Brutally beautiful is this lady before me
Red fox of desires hallows her body
Udder of males she fills with biting milk
Twinkling eyes prick trembling hearts
All who see her are traumatized by her curves
Little oval lips spear cheeks of daring men
Legs on the move paralyzes all imaginations
Yabbering, her shadow bursts in silent sermons  

Behind, her mountains speak obscene words
Eye-lashes flog men’s eyes into shyness
Above her, hang swords of romantic doom
“Ugly” flies into hiding once she’s around
Tight attire assaults holiness in any male
Invitation to her side triggers tears of joy 
Fire in hell tolerable; her beauty intolerable
Unimaginable are her shy and piercing looks
Lying profile chops any man’s self-control

Premium Member - Brutally - Pleiades B -

Bless all the world's children

Between earth and the stars

Believe that you are loved

Beauty grows in the heart

Blown sweet strawberries kiss

Brushed cotton angel wing

Breathe deeply start to fly














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Each line has only 6 syllables
(poem in the Pleiades form)
- Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)


A Brutally Honest Valentine's

My darling enigma, my dove   
You’re the epitome of my love
Your smile shines at me pearly white      
Pale skin shines and glints in the light       
Silken locks, obsidian flow
Eyes just like ice, crystalline glow        
Peals of laughter ring like a bell            
Enchant me; I’m under your spell    
You walk with a musical flow
Tiptoeing with softness through snow

But, alas, you open your mouth
Utter tripe spilling out
If only you’d keep your mouth shut.

(Love from Anonymous)

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