Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Pleiades

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- Brutally - Pleiades B -

Bless all the world's children

Between earth and the stars

Believe that you are loved

Beauty grows in the heart

Blown sweet strawberries kiss

Brushed cotton angel wing

Breathe deeply start to fly














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Each line has only 6 syllables
(poem in the Pleiades form)
- Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)

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Bl Devnath August 28, 2016 at 2:10 PM It's a beautiful gem of beautiful heartfelt expression my lovely lovely friend. A great 7. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl Anne-Lise Andresen August 28, 2016 at 3:03 PM - Bl, thanks for the beautiful comments a 7 and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven August 19, 2016 at 9:55 AM Fabulous poem, awesome message. Anne-Lise Andresen August 19, 2016 at 12:08 PM - Thanks Scott, for beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel August 19, 2016 at 6:19 AM Children are truly God's gifts to man:) Anne-Lise Andresen August 19, 2016 at 6:31 AM - Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy August 18, 2016 at 12:22 PM A 7 for this lovely, moving poem! Janice Anne-Lise Andresen August 18, 2016 at 12:52 PM - Janice, thanks for the beautiful comments a 7 and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud August 18, 2016 at 11:20 AM what a beauty, anne, children are the best gifts of heaven... huggs and happy day! Anne-Lise Andresen August 18, 2016 at 12:51 PM - Thanks for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis August 17, 2016 at 5:37 AM Superbly written dear, Anne-Lise! A 7 for certain! Hugs! Anne-Lise Andresen August 17, 2016 at 8:09 AM - Thanks Demetrios, for the beautiful comments a 7 and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich August 16, 2016 at 3:40 PM wow, this is so sweet and the message is awesome!

Andrea Dietrich August 16, 2016 at 3:40 PM wow, this is so sweet and the message is awesome! Anne-Lise Andresen August 17, 2016 at 8:07 AM - Andrea, thanks for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud August 16, 2016 at 12:56 PM you have the heart of a child, dear anne.. so wonderfully expressed.. happy day with hugggs Anne-Lise Andresen August 17, 2016 at 8:07 AM - Thanks for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper August 16, 2016 at 12:14 PM Wonderful write, Anne-Lise, my favorite line is, "Blown sweet strawberries kiss". Hugs Eve Anne-Lise Andresen August 17, 2016 at 8:06 AM - Dear Eve, thanks for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper August 16, 2016 at 12:13 PM Wonderful write, Anne-Lise, my favorite line is, "Blown sweet strawberries kiss". Hugs Eve

Jan Allison August 16, 2016 at 11:52 AM A beautiful tender write Anne Lise:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen August 17, 2016 at 8:06 AM - Thanks Jan, for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior August 16, 2016 at 9:57 AM Beautifully done Anne-Lise...a winner in my eyes...god bless the children and you...^WW^ Anne-Lise Andresen August 17, 2016 at 8:05 AM - W.W., thanks for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith August 16, 2016 at 9:08 AM Sweet entry Anne-Lise, best wishes in the contest... Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2016 at 2:41 PM - Charlie, thanks for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick August 16, 2016 at 8:24 AM Enjoyed reading your work..Yes, sometimes even in the best of homes children suffer..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2016 at 2:41 PM - Yes, it's really true Sara - thanks for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith August 16, 2016 at 8:00 AM Such truth A-L we must believe in ourselves. Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2016 at 2:40 PM - We must believe in the children, Tim - thanks for beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner August 16, 2016 at 7:56 AM Anne-Lise, you are such a lovable teddy bear! You have such a kind heart and gentle soul. This is a tender write which displays what I'm talking about. Thank you for sharing your kind thoughts and words. Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2016 at 2:38 PM - ... and I love your long silky ears, Daniel :)- Thanks for beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)