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Premium Member Doors

‘Enter and explore’ read the sign above Blake’s Hall.    
Sliding open the French doors I stepped inside
where I was greeted by a row of coloured doors.

Intrigued, I approached a green door, rested my hand
on the knob and turned it slowly. Peeping in I glimpsed
hope and harmony holding hands...then behind I espied 
two scary beasts, eyes gleaming with greed and envy.

Hastily I closed the door and moved to the next, a red one.
Its intensity drew me like a magnet, and unhesitatingly
I opened it to reveal a room divided in two sections; in
one, passion, love and desire lay in warm embrace...
in the other, danger and malice lurked in the dim light.

Unsure of myself, I walked on to the next, a yellow door.
With renewed energy I stepped in to be met by joy’s
cheerful countenance, but this soon was obscured by
the unpleasant smell of sickness and foul decay.

Again, another hasty exit which led me to a purple door.
Inside I witnessed luxury; felt an aura of power, mystery...
at the same time foreboding gloom, and frustration
sent a shiver up my spine; uneasily I closed the door behind me. 

Perplexed, abandoning my curiosity, I headed for the exit.
At that moment it dawned on me what Blake’s Hall stood for…
It was a clear reference to ... the doors of perception.

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 © 31st March 2017

A Respectable Tree

The tree of my ritual was old and tall,
though not a true giant;
the next one may be, but needn't.
It possessed consequence in its bough
and the places around it,
which may have been occupied
for one of any number of reasons.
It was a fine tree, and my ritual was,
I hoped, appropriately reverent.
Respectful, yet uneasily godless,
my incantations whispered 
with the light and gravity of the shade.
Hopeful, yet sorrowfully faithless,
my supplications revolved patiently
and drifted irreversibly into the air,
seeped deep beyond the bark,
sank into the soil and the root.
Godless as I was, I would not pass up
a fancy of random thought;
if it was a fancy of still unknown truth,
it would need nurture,
dutifully I would nurture.
Only such a tree could be worthy
of such faithless supplication.

18th October 2018

Eating Out

EATING    OUT

Seated uneasily at the edge tables,  café males alone, silent  -
Focused on eating, heads moving, looking around to defend,
Guarding their plates against enemies and, finished, quickly  leaving.
Am I feeling  different from these?  Or not really believing?

This man, round-shouldered  predator over a fresh kill,
Shoveling in untidy dangling heaps on a fork, devours his fill,
Bare arms laid either side of plate, his shaggy hair a lion-mane.
Salty meaty-stuff in great hunks : it’s feeding time at the zoo again.

Elbows-off-table, not for manners, but for speed,
That man’s cutting with edge of fork and filling his need,
Stabbing  the meat like it was alive and needed subduing,
Levering huge pieces into his mouth and rapidly chewing. 

In rapid action their jaw muscles ripple :
It’s a job of work to be completed as quickly as possible.
The chewing muscles in sync with moving ears :
Must  finish it all off -  before any enemy appears. 

Café-females are nested in the central tables  -  to chat, to think.
In table-groups of two or three, discussing the food and drink , 
Sweet cakes’  crumbs carefully swept with back of finger,
They eat only incidentally, no purpose for them, they linger - 

It is a process, not a product, an experience, an exchange of souls.
Select one from a plate of small sweet  rolls,
With small bites  chewed slowly, elegantly, with thought,
Sitting up straight the way mother taught.  

Hands occasionally touching for spoken emphasis in speech,
Unhurried, they pause over coffee and talk intently each to each.
Heads move neither up nor down nor away to the side. 
Over each other’s faces, appraising, their eyes roam wide.

I assess these people closely, and rub my chin-stubble in thought:
With the eyes of a poet I mentally note their features as I ought.
Drink up my coffee quick, and move to the counter for more meat pies 
Before any enemy arrives.
Form: Couplet


Alz Is Not Well


The stranger in the mirror says:
Alz is not well

Those grey hairs alzways lose twenty-something
track of time ...
can’t tell when he’s at,
where he last slept
Or how he fell

My sixty-ish seconds of elusive,
lucid thought
wanna know why
am I wearing bottoms 
shaped like a bell

As this bruised sanity, 
so mnemonic frail,
vainly cling to the psychedelic notion
that these reminiscing eyes 
are seeing swell 

Alz is definitely not well

Got a funhouse mirror of the mind,
giving me the strangest
distortions of time

Had a spring dew wedding yesterday!
But my closest, unfamiliar kin repeatedly tell me,
my winter wife dearly passed away
ten years ago — 
The wrinkled tears seasonally show,
120 new moon recall cycles
that ebb and flows

It alzways bothers me,
how it can be
that cherished memories
vanish like vapor
Sunset forgetfulness dawns so easily

Like the mist on the mirror,
which that vaguely familiar stranger breathe

As the nauseating fog of forgetfulness
uneasily dissipates once more,
I'm beginning to slowly understand
why it is, that blank expression reflection 
in the mirror I do alzways abhor

It’s got my precious recollections evaporating,
these memento thoughts disappearing — 
Such a queasy, erasure sensation

This fading identity illness
is a sickly feeling
I'm slowly beginning to comprehend

Alz is not well ... or ending well

The X Factor

"The X Factor"


hunger does strange things
to souls running on empty
last stop, full to the brim

a journey unravelling 
ravenous poetry sings
other broken hearts in

how much do words mean?
how much do they sting?
Inside wants out in everything

in everything,
we believe,
we stir uneasily to let in

life hides inside stories
lost hidden gems live somewhere
buried in all the dirt deep deep beneath

above magnetises
cloud busting 
some souls reign miraculously

outside of the assizes

more telling than tears
lets the light
shatter feeble faux in

gleaming
victorious
mesmerising

something unknown
it's completely foreign
something sincere

in time to be made clear

(LadyLabyrinth / 2022)



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A Conversation In Autumn

There were silence and stillness in the autumn air
Foliage adorned the trees like fair auburn hair
The stream did not bubble; the pond had no ripples
The garden seemed uninhabited by people

But the garden was not void of good company
On a bench was seated the little girl and me
‘You look quite troubled. What could be wrong?’ I asked her
‘Is there any way I could make you feel better?’

The little girl looked at me and said, ‘I feel lost…’
‘There is a debt that comes at much too high a cost
I cannot meet the price; it is just too hefty
This unmet debt unsettles me; I feel guilty…’

‘Debt? Hefty? Guilty?’ her vague statements puzzled me
‘What you are saying to me is a mystery!
What hefty debt could come at much too high a cost?
Is it greater than the price Christ paid on the cross?’

‘I understand what you’re saying in my mind’s eye
But my heart condemns me; that I cannot deny
For Christ, my Lord, tells me to love my enemy
But I can’t show concern to the one who hurt me’

I could not find the proper words to comfort her
Guilt burned within me like hot, ignited sulfur
Since the one who hurt me is not my enemy
Why does it repulse me to show her some pity?

After some silence and reflection, I asked her:
‘My dear, have you brought this struggle to God in prayer?’
‘Prayer?’ the little girl fidgeted uneasily
‘Well, no… I can’t…’ she sighed and bowed her head sadly

‘Well, why not?’ I pressed her for a clearer answer
‘I’m afraid… Afraid to pray about this matter
I’ve locked it up in that dark, familiar closet
It is something I want to, but cannot, forget’

‘Why would unlocking the closet bring you such fear?’
‘I don’t want to go to that room… I’m happy here
I was once held captive in that dark, dreadful room
Confined in a closet where despondency loomed

What if my return holds me captive forever?
What if the closet recaptures its prisoner?
No, I will never set foot in that room again!
Dear Lord, please spare me the trauma; save me the pain!’

Lost for words, I reached out and took hold of her hands
‘Our fears and struggles, our Lord Jesus understands
Though words of prayer may fail us, He knows our frailty
Entrust our guilt to Him; our load He will carry’
Form: Rhyme


Villagers Storm Frankenstein's Castle

Villagers Storm Frankenstein’s Castle

By Elton Camp

The huge stone castle looms high above the town
Night approaches & villagers uneasily look around

Yet another innocent of their number has been killed
With fear and a desire for vengeance they are filled

“It’s evil Dr. Frankenstein and the hunchback Igor.
We just aren’t going to put up with them anymore.”

An enormous, ugly monster has been lurking about
Frankenstein and Igor are to blame, there’s no doubt

In the graveyard, late at night, they have been seen
All swear they are doing things unholy and unclean

The villagers have had enough and ready to have a fit
Their flaming torches they very soon will have lit

They march en masse up to the hulking castle door
Torches thrown inside and soon it will be no more

What they don’t see is Frankenstein and his pal Igor
As they both slip quietly out of the castle’s back door

Then one day to the villagers’ horror and surprise
They’ll return, once again the populace to terrorize
© Elton Camp  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme

Sore Toe

.


My toe just stubbed 
the stubborn 
piano's iron foot.

          It hurts like hell, 
          torments like a 
          cigarette butt.

Doc said: stay home, 
don't walk, take a day 
off or more.

          I did, but now I'm 
          bored to death, 
          not only sore.

But boredom quickly 
breeds some crazy 
thoughts, you see.

          Seems my easy chair 
          sits on me
          uneasily.

Quite weirdly, 
colors I now hear, 
sounds I now see.

          I ache to be 
          stirred as sugar 
          in hot coffee !

.

Premium Member Tribal Tripod

The tripod stand of the three major tribal 
 domains;
Stands forged by force in 1914 by the
 British ambitious chains.
These stand's can't be undone now without 
 rocking the pot uneasily,
Unless broken into pieces, they are already
 knitted, though unequally.
United we stand Nigeria, divided we fall, 
 Nigerians, hold refrains.
Form: Limerick

Ask the Moon

ask the moon

two approaches
two dead ends.
love doesn't die it just slips into your
back pocket
shifting uneasily
like detached spiders legs
you must remind it
that there's no where left to
run.
bodyless memory
entity unto itself.

towards and away
connected at their ends
by the circumference
of doubt.
each movement the derivative
of mute-faceted equations
that click away
between want and
denial.
you approach the subject
of love
with drama and a 
top hat
twirling on a cane
with a razor edge.

slicing into
and stretching up
stopping up flows
that quench the need for
chronic seepage.
love has answered none of the
questions
least of all
are you able to love?
or can love exist
in the spaces you have left it?

at first love looms
like the steps of a library
littered with strange words
as you peer through the knees of
understanding
time alters the grandeur of
romance
revealing it as mere discovery.
then the first house
the patch of green
and the settlement grows
a cancer
or a mass of promises-
either way it seems incorrect.

and so the long
goodbye
a deja vu of ripped ligaments
and voided wombs
love remains transient
a boarder in the back of your
mind
an impossible achievement 
incomprehensible as
immortality
while love,
the primeval
cytoplasm,
alters its shape
in order to survive.

are we left with
nebular inconsistency
or with
love?
ask the moon 
it will reply
"rocks"
ask the universe
and it will remain 
silent.

Joseph A Adler  copyright 1975

Premium Member Thunderscape

Dark thunderclouds hover uneasily 
over the red mesas and arroyos. 
I can feel the tingling sensation of
charged air, an unnatural quiet
as the thick, humid air seems to
catch its breath, anticipating. 

Suddenly the landscape is overwhelmed
by electric white veins of lightening 
that flash and spread like roots
shooting down towards the desert floor.
Urgent rumblings reverberate 
under my feet as I anticipate 
the loud claps of thunder to follow.

Large, beaded raindrops, lukewarm
begin to drop steadily onto the dry
dusty terrain, marking the sandy soil
causing plants to rise up like 
excited exclamation points. 

I savor the moment, relishing 
in the wonder of nature's drama
admiring the intense power I see
feeling reinvigorated and renewed 
in body, mind, soul and spirit. 






Written on 8/10/2016

Premium Member Fly Back Home

Away from home for many years,
Would shadow of the past be clear?
Old friends and family members
Will be smear, uneasily remember.

Away from the warm motherland,
Thousands miles where I stand,
Pursue freedom and happiness,
Blue sky shows ways of success.

Fly back home with melancholy;
Do the hand prints rest steadily?
Do the works retain their shape?
Or time lets sweet past escape?
Form: Verse

Oval Sanatorium


Nutty grandpa president
is talking crazy uncle Donald again
His little Chucky thumbs
is tapping epithet tweet nonsense
Batty grandpa’s been 
grumpily sucking 
on the hate hot sauce bottle
stashed in his KKK closet
Now he’s sporting a Commander-in-Chief cap,
dressed in a wrinkled birthday suit
Churlish grandpa wanna blow the nuclear candles out
in his Oval padded room
He’s trying to smear his coconut-frosted 
pejorative German chocolate cake 
on every African looking face
Calling Doctor Strangelove and nurse Annie Wilkes Misery,
bad Grandpa is verbally pooping all over the place
His anti-social, mood swing meds
is scattered everywhere on the bed
Nutty grandpa prez
is a stable genius he says
But his schizophrenia behavior
is open and shut caged rage ... Jekyll and Hyde
Hannibal Lecter ... American Gothic suicide
Old Grandpa says
young women love him like Frankenstein’s bride
His paranoid soul
got a misogynist itch
in it’s nether parts
Curmudgeon grandpa claims he’s really rich,
and has an Ebenezer Scrooge heart
Nutty grandpa prez don’t like no immigrants
who came from where he ain’t
Straight jacket truth wraps him wrong,
he loves to swear that he’s no saint
Crazy grandpa just wanna roam the West Wing halls at night,
cursing at everybody left and right
His angry autocrat ticker just wanna be dictator loved
with family suck-up sniveling loyalty
Cuckoo grandpa flew his nest egg eyes over someone in the staff,
whose nurse Ratched mirror image greedy
Nutty grandpa president just got another person fired
for improper cleansing backside kissing
And the raucous din, 
rising from the voter base-ment,
means it’s electoral shock therapy time again
So lock the border doors — 
keep it dissent quiet, dum-dum
Czar grandpa prez don’t like all that democratic noise
Silence of the lambs,
that soothing lullaby hum
Is the sweet sound 
that calms his Joker tweeting thumbs
Rest your rage, nutty grandpa prez:
Uneasily snore deeply, 
wearing your Mad Hatter MAGA brim
(keep having more troubled, neo-Nazi policy dreams
of Making America Great Again)
As the White House hospice staff is issuing
M.A.S.H unpatriotic greetings 
to Parallel reality refugees 
seeking insane asylum ...
Welcome, to the Oval Sanatorium

When Muse Whispers

11:45pm

i was at Andrew's, 
she says

oh, i see, i say

you remember Andrew?
she says

i don't, sorry,
what about Andrew?
i say

i told you
i had a crush on this guy 
7 years back in the PhD
remember?
she says

i don't mind, i say

listen, 
after long hangouts together 
and many frozen dreams 
i realized he was a gay,
she says

oh, i see, i say,

and he was married 
married as two husbands
and the other husband 
who also adopted a child 
cheated on him
and they divorced...

she continues

oh, i see, now, i re-member,  
i say

what **** is "oh, i see, i re-member..."? 
5 hours i was with Andrew tonight,
with my gay friend, and once in a week, 
why are you mad? 
she says

listen, i used to mind,
but not now, girl friend or gay friend,
i say, self-assuredly but uneasily 

...when you act superior 
unsuccessfully, though, 
you sound lunatic, 
she says

and worse,
when two lunatics join
not knowing where to go 
and stumble in darkness 
of their ignorance of each other 
they are nothing but walking sacks of ****,
i say

oh, i see, she says,
mockingly

you are the dog of night
who barks at something 
he cannot see,
she adds

oh, my...! I scream, am I alone,
where is my 
"My Brother's Keeper" gone?

now, my muse, Atete, jumps in
she walks me out
and whispers:

"Ase, listen! you can't run
from anything like this anymore
face it! make it or break it!"

"oh, Atete, now i see," i say
to my muse--

my muse aims to sing 
songs of Love and Hope for me
but there isn't time...

and i come back
to balance:
the struggle within 
and 
the struggle without--

and to think of this
uneventfulness of Being...

now, before we go,
let us close this goddamned story thus: 

when your muse whispers
when you don't listen
when there is not much to remember 
when there is not much to forget
you are at dead-end, at an impasse-- 

maybe you made them a Priority 
maybe you are to them only an Option

you can't tell turkey by feathers

let your Life and your Death be
not like theirs...

if Love betrays 
Luck doesn't...

listen, beautiful loser!
Form: Narrative

Of Vice and Virtue

He's a degenerate corrupted by the immortality of humanity,
uttering beguiling lies,
piling sin upon sin upon sin,
inexorable sin enveloping every ounce of good
lying within his dark heart, 
impending like a ticking powder keg

Grief leaves him with a toxic conscience; 
utter vice,
bound to everlasting condemnation
Hopeless with no affection; no virtue in sight

Envy seeps from his encrusted eyes
Pride, 
ebbs what remaining modesty he beholds
Morals,
contaminated by sheer evil

He sits uneasily, contemplating 
like a terrorist pending to commit genocide

The Devil smirks at his rebellious acts
destruction, corruption, demoralization,
decaying God's Creation

This is evil
This is wickedness
This is vice

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