A Respectable Tree

The tree of my ritual was old and tall,
though not a true giant;
the next one may be, but needn't.
It possessed consequence in its bough
and the places around it,
which may have been occupied
for one of any number of reasons.
It was a fine tree, and my ritual was,
I hoped, appropriately reverent.
Respectful, yet uneasily godless,
my incantations whispered 
with the light and gravity of the shade.
Hopeful, yet sorrowfully faithless,
my supplications revolved patiently
and drifted irreversibly into the air,
seeped deep beyond the bark,
sank into the soil and the root.
Godless as I was, I would not pass up
a fancy of random thought;
if it was a fancy of still unknown truth,
it would need nurture,
dutifully I would nurture.
Only such a tree could be worthy
of such faithless supplication.

18th October 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 10/23/2018 10:33:00 AM
Hi Lawrence, i do love to read your creativity, letting your words paint such wonderful images in my mind. Your words always draw the reader into an excellent read. I have enjoyed perusing your words this late afternoon my friend. May your pen ever run gold. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike. A fave.
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Date: 10/23/2018 1:35:00 PM
Thanks Mike, too kind.
Date: 10/18/2018 6:44:00 PM
Such thought-provoking poetry, DBL (Down By Law.) Your ink strokes are consciousness elevating. A rare bird outer limits flight of supreme innervision. I tip my humbled pen to you. Masterpiece prose indeed! An instant fave. Love and best wishes always.
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Date: 10/18/2018 11:40:00 PM
Down By Law ? I'll take it ! Thanks, Mr Fred, I really appreciate such positive feedback (and fave !) from a penman of your stature.
Date: 10/18/2018 3:34:00 PM
Profound verses my dear friend. I so enjoyed immersing myself in the depths of thinking that you create in with your exceptional poetry. A fav....
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Date: 10/18/2018 11:38:00 PM
Thanks so much Robert, fave and high praise very greatly appreciated.
Date: 10/18/2018 11:18:00 AM
A respectable tree..godless..faithless chants..your discourse is deep my friend..taking the reader in search of unknown truth as you put it. Intriguing poetry...makes one think and reflect.
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Date: 10/18/2018 1:34:00 PM
Thanks for visiting, and I'm pleased if you liked it. If it can provoke any degree of thought, that quite satisfies me.
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