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Alz Is Not Well

The stranger in the mirror says: Alz is not well Those grey hairs alzways lose twenty-something track of time ... can’t tell when he’s at, where he last slept Or how he fell My sixty-ish seconds of elusive, lucid thought wanna know why am I wearing bottoms shaped like a bell As this bruised sanity, so mnemonic frail, vainly cling to the psychedelic notion that these reminiscing eyes are seeing swell Alz is definitely not well Got a funhouse mirror of the mind, giving me the strangest distortions of time Had a spring dew wedding yesterday! But my closest, unfamiliar kin repeatedly tell me, my winter wife dearly passed away ten years ago — The wrinkled tears seasonally show, 120 new moon recall cycles that ebb and flows It alzways bothers me, how it can be that cherished memories vanish like vapor Sunset forgetfulness dawns so easily Like the mist on the mirror, which that vaguely familiar stranger breathe As the nauseating fog of forgetfulness uneasily dissipates once more, I'm beginning to slowly understand why it is, that blank expression reflection in the mirror I do alzways abhor It’s got my precious recollections evaporating, these memento thoughts disappearing — Such a queasy, erasure sensation This fading identity illness is a sickly feeling I'm slowly beginning to comprehend Alz is not well ... or ending well

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Date: 9/9/2019 6:50:00 PM
Hello Freddie, wow! What a poem you have created. You always write great poems. Have a nice evening my friend. peace,Love, Joy. Darlene
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Date: 8/31/2019 4:11:00 AM
Alzways too cool for words, Freddie, this poem highlights the ever-changing view of ageing with "precious recollections evaporating". Love it!
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Date: 8/28/2019 7:28:00 AM
I’ve said it before, you are one of the best poets here at the soup. I am never disappointed.
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Date: 8/24/2019 6:54:00 AM
Wow this is an extraordinary poem, great refrain and muse in fine rhyme scheme . Your word choice is also impressive. Sublime muse throughout. Kudos! Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 8/20/2019 2:39:00 PM
Alzheimer's profile, existence and ending. Just think, we may get to look back and see the few who actually cared for you in the end... because in this tomb, we couldn't appreciate those who've stood by and placed themselves second to care for those who are imprisoned by this. Amazing take on the subject. Blessings!
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Date: 8/14/2019 10:52:00 AM
Alz in Jesus and God He's Alz we need and Alz is Grand, Great and good when we believe it, receive it and leave it... Stellar write my brother.. Write on...There's praise in words and words in praise... A fav fer me peace and blessings... James
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