Alz Is Not Well



The stranger in the mirror says:
Alz is not well

Those grey hairs alzways lose twenty-something
track of time ...
can’t tell when he’s at,
where he last slept
Or how he fell

My sixty-ish seconds of elusive,
lucid thought
wanna know why
am I wearing bottoms 
shaped like a bell

As this bruised sanity, 
so mnemonic frail,
vainly cling to the psychedelic notion
that these reminiscing eyes 
are seeing swell 

Alz is definitely not well

Got a funhouse mirror of the mind,
giving me the strangest
distortions of time

Had a spring dew wedding yesterday!
But my closest, unfamiliar kin repeatedly tell me,
my winter wife dearly passed away
ten years ago — 
The wrinkled tears seasonally show,
120 new moon recall cycles
that ebb and flows

It alzways bothers me,
how it can be
that cherished memories
vanish like vapor
Sunset forgetfulness dawns so easily

Like the mist on the mirror,
which that vaguely familiar stranger breathe

As the nauseating fog of forgetfulness
uneasily dissipates once more,
I'm beginning to slowly understand
why it is, that blank expression reflection 
in the mirror I do alzways abhor

It’s got my precious recollections evaporating,
these memento thoughts disappearing — 
Such a queasy, erasure sensation

This fading identity illness
is a sickly feeling
I'm slowly beginning to comprehend

Alz is not well ... or ending well

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 9/9/2019 6:50:00 PM
Hello Freddie, wow! What a poem you have created. You always write great poems. Have a nice evening my friend. peace,Love, Joy. Darlene
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Date: 8/31/2019 4:11:00 AM
Alzways too cool for words, Freddie, this poem highlights the ever-changing view of ageing with "precious recollections evaporating". Love it!
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Date: 8/28/2019 7:28:00 AM
I’ve said it before, you are one of the best poets here at the soup. I am never disappointed.
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Date: 8/24/2019 6:54:00 AM
Wow this is an extraordinary poem, great refrain and muse in fine rhyme scheme . Your word choice is also impressive. Sublime muse throughout. Kudos! Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 8/20/2019 2:39:00 PM
Alzheimer's profile, existence and ending. Just think, we may get to look back and see the few who actually cared for you in the end... because in this tomb, we couldn't appreciate those who've stood by and placed themselves second to care for those who are imprisoned by this. Amazing take on the subject. Blessings!
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Date: 8/14/2019 10:52:00 AM
Alz in Jesus and God He's Alz we need and Alz is Grand, Great and good when we believe it, receive it and leave it... Stellar write my brother.. Write on...There's praise in words and words in praise... A fav fer me peace and blessings... James
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