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Premium Member The Spirit, The Water and The Blood

last thing I remember is the look upon his face
shot him dead right where he stood then left without a trace 
killed a man while robbing his white castle for some change 
if I could I'd take it back my life I'd rearrange 

(chorus)

as I lie here on this prison bed I look up toward the sky
His Word says He still loves me though I can't help wonder why 
the man I am today is one He pulled up from the mud 
I've put my trust in these three things
 
the spirit, the water, and the blood 

growing up I never knew the man who caused my birth 
the only dad I ever knew destroyed my own self-worth 
the day he beat my mother was the day I thought I'd die 
I swore it'd be the last time this young man would ever cry 

as I lie here on this prison bed I look up toward the sky 
His Word says He still loves me though I can't help wonder why 
the man I am today is one He pulled up from the mud 
I've put my hope in these three things
 
the spirit, the water, and the blood 

(bridge) 

looking in this broken mirror I see a man redeemed 
my newborn faith in God above uplifts my self-esteem 
the One who sent his Son to die forever set me free 
these bars that keep me locked up now will soon no longer be 
(I'll pay the penalty) 

the time has come the needle waits I find myself at peace 
today's the day to pay my dues before I find release 
forgiveness I have begged from Him for causing so much pain 
my hope is He remembers me and that I'll live again 

as I lie upon this bed of death I slowly close my eyes 
his family's all gathered 'round no need to wonder why 
the man I killed's dear widow helped to pull me from the mud 
(because like me) 
she's put her faith in these three things

the spirit, the water, and the blood
© Tom Woody  Create an image from this poem.

Sweet Jesus

On the day our eyes open to the prism of the sun

On that day, Winter solitude  would be gone

The avalanche of differences melts into nothingness 

Through the same breath,through  the same soul

We would live again as one ,no matter who we are

 No matter the colour of our skin,Gay or straight

rich or poor,innocent or once found guilty.

No matter if  We are lawyers,prisoners,doctors,drug victims or pheasants

No matter our political believes ,nor our different religions

A  catholic,a muslim,a buddhist , a hinduist,or a  jew .

On that day,we would all wear identical dresses

We would all be the significant other ,because He has died,

and He has died for all. Jesus died for Peter,John and Judah

for Lazarus and Maria Magdalene, Jesus died for me ,

He has died for you ,for him ,for her,and even for them.

He gave up till the last drop of blood and painful cry

  for each and every name engraved upon our Father's palm.

He was  born to die,but its not his death that we celebrate ,

We celebrate His life ,because we believe in life

We celebrate His forgivness ,because We experienced

the beauty of forgivness ,the happiness ,the return of  blissful joy.

and , We celebrate the ever present love

Because  it is the  gift of love that He bestowed on us

Jesus was born to die , but He was born to rise

Upon death He has risen , through His death We survived

Because of Him , in the darkness ,in the labyrinth of our night

There will always,always be the little flicker of  a candle

that fills our hearts with hope ,and  warming  light.

Premium Member The Gifts of the Fourth Chakra

Wild spirit -
I cherished you tender 
within my halo of prana;
careful not to hurt you
as I worked to set you free
using hands of peace
in harmony 
with my heart's song 

I beheld your fragile form 
of freedom lost 
as your panicked eyes 
pleaded release..
and in those precious
and few sacred moments 
I felt you relinquish 
your fight or flight
to my mission of mildness...

a unifying lesson of love
befell us that day
as we exchanged gifts -
and when again you flew
through reflective silvery winds 
on turquoise wings anew 
we elevated in mindful mercy
to compassionate heights
in revered reverberations... 
gratified to be reborn
in your new found freedom 


Susan Ashley
October 7, 2018


Premium Member Forgive and Forget

I asked you what I have done wrong
But there is no response - just a stony silence
No words can convey my guilt, my inner sadness

This will be my last goodbye
My final letter to you my love
Tears flow down my ashen face
Tears of sadness, tears of regret
Drip
Drip 
Drip
Drip 

Tears fall on the paper as I write
They mingle with the damp blue ink
The inky water leaches into the paper 
Its colour starts to bleed and spread 
Until it fades into nothingness
I am empty, devoid of emotion
I can say no more

Forgive me for being me
Forgive me for caring
Forgive me for loving you

Goodbye forever


02~15~15

Premium Member Forgiveness

As dawn would bring no daylight without dark
empty night; the clearest day no beauty hold
without the dreary rainstorm's dismal mark.
As spring would bring no rebirth without cold
winter sleep; the fallen snow no cleansing
without the ashen stain of fall.  As love
would bring no healing without the stinging
wounds of hate; and laughter give no joy of
gladness without the woeful tears of pain.
As peace would have no glory in its quest
without the fear of war.  Life's thrill would wane,
no meaning hold, without the awe of death.
As heaven is no prize without hell's fires therein;
forgiveness is no virtue without the sinner's sin.

Premium Member The Hourglass Wears Wings

In shadow 'neath the shining of a soul 
a heart trembles
for her lost 
control.
Hope 
lives 
in Him
who forgives
trespass and sin
as flight with Mercy’s angel does begin.


Susan Ashley
October 7, 2020


~ First Place ~
Contest: Double Tetractys 4
Sponsor: Eve Roper
syllables checked: howmanysyllables.com
10, 4, 3, 2, 1, 1, 2, 3, 4, 10


Poet’s note: The hourglass, sometimes with the addition of metaphorical wings, is often depicted as a symbol that human existence is fleeting


Premium Member Ode To the Redwood

I was once a little twig with dreams of being a mighty tree
So people would come from all around just to look at me
As the years started to come and go I fell in love with the wind
I would open myself big and wide swaying to the music of my friend
My rings became many and my bark was as red as red could be
Then the day finally came I was the tallest of the tallest trees
I stood tall and I stood proud and everyone knew my name
As my rings continued recording my destiny to fame
Then the fateful day it came my friend and I had a fight
Looking back I can't recall who was wrong or right
I said, "You are but the wind something people can't even see"
" And I'm the king of them all the tallest of the tallest trees"
That night the wind started to howl she really started to blow
And I the tallest of all the trees learned we reap what we sow
My roots struggled to hold on tight but without a soul around
She who had been my dearest friend knocked me to the ground
The loggers came and cut me up then shipped me away
To my soul that truly was a sad and lonely day
Torn from all I knew and loved wishing I didn't have to feel
I was cut into boards and post down at the local mill
Now I'm back here at home just a few feet away
From where my friend the wind and I used to dance and play
I'm the deck on which you stand I lay below your feet
There is a bench made of me would you care to have a seat
Sometimes in life our roles change just take a look at me
The trick is no matter who are what you are be all you can be
See I was once a little twig who became a mighty tree
And now I'm a redwood deck as proud as proud can be
And of my friend the wind she visits me everyday
So I can thank her once again for helping me find my way

Premium Member Don'T Throw Me Away

You look at me so uninviting;
I may have some missing teeth, stumble when I walk, bout' to FALL!!!
Stutter when I talk, but yet I'll still call;
Might smell like ole mothballs or mint or maybe even Old Spice;
You see me and you stare, you're looking at the patches of my skin YES! it's different (maybe  diseased ) different;
different colors and wrinkled on my face, the gray in my hair;
Yes you still stand there and stare. . . 
I may talk bout RCA, Philco record players you say "what's that;
I might talk bout Annie Oakley, BoZo the Clown, Captain Midnight, you say Whose that;
Well child let me tell you all...
Don't throw me away;
Cause I'm just like you;
Don't put me out cause I'm too slow;
You think I'm in the way and I can no longer grow;
Don't throw me away, place me in a rest/nursing home;
Don't put me away because you think I'm in the way;
I', senior don't talk bout me in front of me I don't understand a word you say;
I'm alive, I have more brain cells and I got all my memory, well;
That's more than I can, say for you huh-hey!
Imagine if I'd treated you such;
But I wouldn't cause I've got God's love in me so much. . .
Love you see
::::::::::::::::::::::::what?::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
So I just suck it up turn the other cheek;
I may tumble but I won't fall;
I may forget something's but not all;
And yes I still eat meat;
Cause I got all my teeth;
Remember your just trying to get where I am at now;
I'm a senior don't throw me away;
I'm telling you I'm history and I'm a part of God's glory wanna hear, come here;
Come here and sit down, I sit in a chair can hardly rise or go anywhere;
You see me and you stare I drive slow you begin to cuss and swear;
I won't do you ill;
I won't act like you will;
I'll take you today......
But I won't, I will NOT THROW YOU AWAY

Dedicated to all Gods people's 60 years of age to 100 years
Thank you for your wisdom, thank you for your life. . .

Written by James Edward Lee Sr. July 6 2015©
For the book Poetry to Bridge Generations University Of Nebraska at Omaha 2015©

This poem also found in 2020 POETRY SOUP BOOK:." PS: IT'S POETRY A BRILLIANT POETRY ANTHOLOGY"

Premium Member Stand By Me

Stand by me when your dreams might fail,
And the burning light of your plans grows pale.
Stand by me when the world is cruel,
When they shake their heads, calling you a fool.
Come stand close, rest your head on my shoulder;
My feelings haven't changed, I simply grow older.
Cry your tears, I'll just be understanding;
I realize how life can be too demanding.

Stand by me when your heart is torn,
And your red eyes burn in the light of morn.
Stand by me; why go on alone,
When you knew I'd be here, just like this stone?
Come stand close, hide your face in my sweater.
For me right now, life couldn't get better.
I'll be here, like I've been for a while;
So stand by me that together we can smile.

Stand by me. Please don't leave again.
Never break my heart like you did back then.
Stand by me, and I'll stand by you;
Then I'll hold you the way I've always wanted to.
Stand real close, let the world be forgotten;
Breathe in the scent I wear, the smell of cotton.
Stand by me, I'll bear your weight of sorrow;
Hold on to me, I'll help you face tomorrow.

Premium Member Can We Be Strangers

the holes in the walls are all patched
and the plaster is dry
the broken glass is swept away
or turned to sand

I only want that when I see you,
you not quickly turn away…

to be forgiven--not to start over,
we know how that ends
not to be friends, we’ve tried that, too--

but, that you include my wretched
name in your whispered prayers for 
all humanity...

I hoped maybe we'd be
strangers and just
...smile


January 15, 2019
Free Verse Old or New Poetry Contest
Joseph May, Sponsor
© P.S. Awtry  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member My Heart Regifted

Forgive me for loving you, even though you never asked,
a secret kept like a pebble in my shoe, now smarting.
If heart dares to belong, it's just a weakness from my past.

Make scars worth the fight, put back the pin from grenade you grasped,
moment of truth arrives, met with two lips bruised and parting.
Forgive me for loving you, even though you never asked.

I thought I walked the streets alone, wearing a grotesque mask.
You were inside me all along, sweet message imparting.,
if heart dares to belong, it's just a weakness from my past.

How I've missed your awaited touch, and hoping it would last,
our sun grant'd pardons galore, for love's kindled restarting. 
Forgive me for loving you, even though you never asked.

I didn't say why I came back, you never took me to task.
tho' written in an inkling, the tear your eye was guarding..
if heart dares to belong, it's just a weakness from my past.

You never miss something until it goes and die is cast.
Your present regifted, from a long ago departing. 
Forgive me for loving you, even though you never asked.
If heart dares to belong, it's just a weakness from my past.

26 December 2020

Premium Member Coming Back Home

C ountry roots beckon regrets of past transgression
O ne-way ticket meant to soothe my innermost obsession
M emories of you not fading with passing of the years 
I  mmortal flame has kept alive cherished souvenirs
N aively thinking I’d drift and just avoid the truth
G ames were played in the foolish gardens of my youth

B almy nights not forgotten in the heat of summertide
A ugust breezes summon me to return home by your side 
C innabar and cinnamon reverie of your perfume in moonlight
K aleidoscopic magic remembered in your eyes at midnight

H eartstrings of surrender repentant to bygone wanderlust
O pen your heart and grant me a chance to earn again your trust
M oonstruck and lovesick ready to prove myself and pay my due
E nchanted under your spell I’ve come back home to you



AP: Honorable Mention 2021

Submitted on February 14, 2021 for contest COMING BACK HOME sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON  -  RANKED 2ND

Premium Member Show Me the Way

So long have I harped of regret,
For price of vice is not paid yet,
With rueful heart, Lord, now I pray;
O God, won't you show me the way.

Contrite in careless deeds of yore,
As mindless acts morals abhor,
I seek amends, and humbly say;
O God, won't you show me the way.

With remorse I sail for morrow,
Steer life’s ship through pain and sorrow,
And vow, all debts, I shall repay;
O God, won't you show me the way.

In lonesome past alone I moan,
For blunders made now I atone,
And pledge your edicts, I'll obey;
O God, won't you show me the way.

Though evil lurks, tries to cajole,
While, toll immoral, taxes soul,
From goodwill divine I won't stray;
O God, won't you show me the way.

Written: January 12, 2023
Placed 1st: Revealing Your Soul…Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Soto Poet
Form: Kyrielle (eight syllables per line)

Premium Member Garden of a Wounded Soul

Like an ebony rose in a province 
of ivory and golden flowers,
you poisoned each peaceful petal
with your senseless scent of death.

You were never just another floret.
Was I a fool to sow your seed in
hope your roots would grow strong,
portraying saffron scarlet hues with
an emerald stalk flourishing with
verdant leaves in serene sapphire skies.

When winds blew too boorishly,
I held your supple sepal with bamboo hands,
so your sunshine spirit would not perish
to toxic storms from organic forces.
I was willingly the earth to your foundations,
but your breaths became too bitter,
stinging in selfish stubborn sympathies,
as wild weeds strangled your stalk.

We could have nourished nectar with
hungry insects in need of nurture,
but your grudge left behind
broken bridges with a trail of
crumbling caterpillars seeking wings.

Cuts from your thorns remain,
ingrained as internal inflictions,
but still I plant bulbs to bloom.
To create an oasis of graceful charm,
where blossoms of compassion
softly soothe petals of pardon
in a garden of a wounded soul.

Forgiveness is a heavenly light.
A radiant beacon illuminating
through a canopy of trees,
eradicating shadows of hatred you 
left behind like excessive weeds.

A melody of redemption whispers in
harmonious refrains breaking chains
of regret with burdensome pains.
To let go is like maturing buds
releasing the grip of timeless hate,
as my meadows are a symbol of a
divine mantra only welcoming peace.
© Silent One  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Art of Forgiveness

To my enemies,
cloaked in t w i n k l i n g topaz~
I’ve become immune 
to your illusive m a n t r a s,
recited in roseate refrains.

I’ve learned to see 
the vermilion 
     f l o a t i n g 
between venomous
pigments of 
psychedelic sunsets

For life is a whirlpool 
     of uncertainties
slithering through 
l o o p h o l e s of adversities
We waltz through 
h i g h s and l o w s
while masked foes
orchestrate a 
a circus embellished 
in emerald s p r i n g s

Yet, I f o r g i v e
your i g n o r a n t skies, 
unable to grasp
the vision of loyalty
You’ve long been 
preaching in
verses of lyrical lies,
soaring above 
catastrophic canopies~
draped with my 
sentimental s i g h s
this conscience remains 
constantly crippled 
by the ecstasy of 
poisonous promises~
served from 
diamond chalices 
once upon 
   a blood m o o n

There’s still 
a pearlescent 
shore for faithless
footprints in the
island of h e a l i n g
in the marine bed
of softness 
  that f l o w s
beneath seething seas,
there I’ll sculpt a
lagoon of
  p r a y e r s across
fire corals that 
  f l i c k e r
in tints of 
  lethal lime green
As I allow aquatic
pearl ruffles to ripple
through weary waves, 
they become the 
sacred v e s s e l
that unveils
   hyacinth stars,
when your heart is 
as dark as the 
eclipsed moonflowers

Tonight, I’ll rewrite 
the poems I’ve woven 
from golden arrows 
that assassinated
the alliterative tranquility
in sinister silence
within my inner psyche

In the journey of revival
I’ve mastered the art
of wearing pain
like a crown of 
thistles and thorns

I’ll forgive you
amidst unspoken apologies, 
and e r a s e the 
a c h i n g colors
within greying rainbows,
behind your 
  soulless eyes.
For, I can feel the 
insecurities r u s h i n g
through those veins~
longing for an empathetic 
empire that
serves you
  k i n d n e s s

  So take these metaphors, 
make them yours, 
ink them across 
  your s u n l e s s canvas, 
and r i s e beyond the
   demons that lurk
as shadows within
    your a r t l e s s heart.
   May the light of twilight,
correct your insincere intentions.

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