Thunderscape

Dark thunderclouds hover uneasily 
over the red mesas and arroyos. 
I can feel the tingling sensation of
charged air, an unnatural quiet
as the thick, humid air seems to
catch its breath, anticipating. 

Suddenly the landscape is overwhelmed
by electric white veins of lightening 
that flash and spread like roots
shooting down towards the desert floor.
Urgent rumblings reverberate 
under my feet as I anticipate 
the loud claps of thunder to follow.

Large, beaded raindrops, lukewarm
begin to drop steadily onto the dry
dusty terrain, marking the sandy soil
causing plants to rise up like 
excited exclamation points. 

I savor the moment, relishing 
in the wonder of nature's drama
admiring the intense power I see
feeling reinvigorated and renewed 
in body, mind, soul and spirit. 






Written on 8/10/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 10:39 AM
Congrats on a fine win Laura
Leiser Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 2:45 PM
Thank you, James. I'm glad you liked it :)
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August 18, 2016 at 8:18 AM
Beaded raindrops is so beautiful,loved the expressions.Congrats laura!
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August 18, 2016 at 2:44 PM
Thanks so much, Sara. I appreciate your kind words:)
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August 17, 2016 at 10:56 PM
Beautiful...such nice poem to read for this contest...Congrats, Sunita.
Leiser Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 11:01 PM
Thanks so much, Sunita :)
Nusker Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 10:48 PM
Wow, such a beautifully described poem. I loved it. Congrats on your win, Laura.
Leiser Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 11:00 PM
Thanks so much, Afzal! I appreciate your kind words:)
Hamilton Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 9:54 PM
This was outstanding, thanks Laura!
Leiser Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 12:12 AM
Also, thank you for my placement in your fine contest:)
Leiser Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 10:59 PM
Thanks so much, John! Your kind words mean a lot to me :)
Emu Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 2:03 AM
Hi Laura, I havn't seen your work before, just came across it. I enjoyed this poem, lovely job. Best wishes, Craig
Leiser Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 10:58 PM
Thank you, Craig! I'm happy you liked it!
May Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 7:29 AM
I like the rising exclamation points !!...Very nicely written...
Leiser Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 10:57 PM
Opps, my previous reply skipped! Thank you, Joseph:)
Leiser Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 10:56 PM
Thank you, WW :)
Warrior Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 8:31 AM
A thunderous verse my friend Laura...enjoyed it...god bless and good luck...^WW^
Leiser Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 10:57 PM
Thanks very much, WW :)
Vaso Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 11:26 PM
What a beautiful poem, I really found these lines powerful ( pardon the pun) "by electric white veins of lightening that flash and spread like roots shooting down towards the desert floor."
Leiser Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 10:56 PM
Thanks, Arthur! Glad you liked it :)
Turner Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 4:38 PM
I've seen desert thunderstorms and you describe them perfectly. Great imagery in this poem, Laura.
Leiser Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 5:28 PM
Thanks, Daniel. I appreciate your kind words:)
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August 11, 2016 at 12:18 AM
Terrific, Laura, love the buid-up in the first stanza, crashing midsection and that elated finish. Fetch me a towel. Viv x
Leiser Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Thanks, Viv :)
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