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Thunderscape

Dark thunderclouds hover uneasily over the red mesas and arroyos. I can feel the tingling sensation of charged air, an unnatural quiet as the thick, humid air seems to catch its breath, anticipating. Suddenly the landscape is overwhelmed by electric white veins of lightening that flash and spread like roots shooting down towards the desert floor. Urgent rumblings reverberate under my feet as I anticipate the loud claps of thunder to follow. Large, beaded raindrops, lukewarm begin to drop steadily onto the dry dusty terrain, marking the sandy soil causing plants to rise up like excited exclamation points. I savor the moment, relishing in the wonder of nature's drama admiring the intense power I see feeling reinvigorated and renewed in body, mind, soul and spirit. Written on 8/10/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/18/2016 10:39:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Laura
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/18/2016 2:45:00 PM
Thank you, James. I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 8/18/2016 8:18:00 AM
Beaded raindrops is so beautiful,loved the expressions.Congrats laura!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/18/2016 2:44:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sara. I appreciate your kind words:)
Date: 8/17/2016 10:56:00 PM
Beautiful...such nice poem to read for this contest...Congrats, Sunita.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/17/2016 11:01:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sunita :)
Date: 8/17/2016 10:48:00 PM
Wow, such a beautifully described poem. I loved it. Congrats on your win, Laura.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/17/2016 11:00:00 PM
Thanks so much, Afzal! I appreciate your kind words:)
Date: 8/17/2016 9:54:00 PM
This was outstanding, thanks Laura!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/18/2016 12:12:00 AM
Also, thank you for my placement in your fine contest:)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/17/2016 10:59:00 PM
Thanks so much, John! Your kind words mean a lot to me :)
Date: 8/17/2016 2:03:00 AM
Hi Laura, I havn't seen your work before, just came across it. I enjoyed this poem, lovely job. Best wishes, Craig
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/17/2016 10:58:00 PM
Thank you, Craig! I'm happy you liked it!
Date: 8/13/2016 7:29:00 AM
I like the rising exclamation points !!...Very nicely written...
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/17/2016 10:57:00 PM
Opps, my previous reply skipped! Thank you, Joseph:)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/17/2016 10:56:00 PM
Thank you, WW :)
Date: 8/12/2016 8:31:00 AM
A thunderous verse my friend Laura...enjoyed it...god bless and good luck...^WW^
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/17/2016 10:57:00 PM
Thanks very much, WW :)
Date: 8/11/2016 11:26:00 PM
What a beautiful poem, I really found these lines powerful ( pardon the pun) "by electric white veins of lightening that flash and spread like roots shooting down towards the desert floor."
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/17/2016 10:56:00 PM
Thanks, Arthur! Glad you liked it :)
Date: 8/11/2016 4:38:00 PM
I've seen desert thunderstorms and you describe them perfectly. Great imagery in this poem, Laura.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/11/2016 5:28:00 PM
Thanks, Daniel. I appreciate your kind words:)
Date: 8/11/2016 12:18:00 AM
Terrific, Laura, love the buid-up in the first stanza, crashing midsection and that elated finish. Fetch me a towel. Viv x
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/11/2016 5:26:00 PM
Thanks, Viv :)

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