Best Comment Poems
What - No CommentWhat? No Comment?
I read your latest poem today
But did not leave a comment
I don’t know what you meant to say
Couldn’t decode your intent
I wanted to be supportive
And offer encouragement
Wax...
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Categories:
comment, on writing and words
Form:
Rhyme
Whoops, I Forgot To CommentWhoops, I forgot to comment
Upon that nice poem you wrote
Please don't take it personally
My reasons are many, take note
It's too long, I'm easily bored
It's not really what I expected
I though it might have rhymed a bit
So now I'm a little dejected
I've nothing special to say
When...
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Categories:
comment, on writing and words,
Form:
Rhyme
Comment On ThisI write unto the blank papers stare
A ball point pen in hand without a flare
The words enscribed should be a future quote
As I am the best or at least so you denote
I listen to your comments out loud
And damn you make me feel so proud
I...
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Categories:
comment, parody, people, words, me,
Form:
The Comment Queen - Contest For PdShe is always there with a comment
Never a negative word passes her pen
Doubt whether she has heard of the people
A comment gives them a boost , to write again
Has a habit of blogging with animation
If I knew how to do it would try
Have a few...
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Categories:
comment, for her,
Form:
Rhyme
Sunday, Lets Make It a Comment Day For AllALL OF YOU POETRY SOUP MEMBERS JOIN ME ON THIS DAY
LEAVE A FEW EXTRA COMMENTS , MAKE SOMEBODY'S DAY
REMEMBER TO BE KIND AND TO LEAVE A GENEROUS WORD
TONGUES CAN BE AMBIGUOUS PLEASE WATCH YOUR WORDS
WE ARE NOT HERE TO COMPETE...
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Categories:
comment, encouraging,
Form:
Couplet
No Need To CommentNo need to comment
No need to comment,
I’m still gonna write
Wishing good morning
and saying good night
Penning these poems,
hoping to share
Whether you read them,
whether you care
For I am a writer,
though not very good
I’d do much better
if only I could
But this is the best,
it’s all I can do
When...
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Categories:
comment, good night,
Form:
Rhyme
The Comment WitholdersThe Comment Witholders
Read others poetry but will not say boo?
Perhaps their gang here at The Soup,
may not approve of you?
But the poets with big hearts in
comments names you will find,
Their torches there to encourage you
all of the time.
And yes, some even Soupmail...
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Categories:
comment, inspirational, poets,
Form:
Rhyme
Buddy Can You Spare a CommentI feel like I can move forward now
I have completed what I think is my legacy ?
I've staked my reputation on it
So if you want or feel the urge to comment
Please go ahead make my boring day
As to me even criticism I do not...
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Categories:
comment, appreciation,
Form:
Free verse
Fr - Comment Te Dire Adieupeu à peu comme une rose
quand vient l’automne
je t’ai vu faner
devant moi tout lentement
je n’aurais pas cru
voir éclore entre nous un amour si serein
garni d’un parfum plus divin
tu m’as offert l’intimité comme un trésor
que l’on offre sans rien à cacher
d’un cœur innocent
cette proximité restera...
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Categories:
comment, death, grief, lost love,
Form:
Free verse
The Superb CommentI recall a superb comment when
I first posted a poem here, but then
what dismay! I could see
beneath most poetry
that same comment again and again!
For the Comments Poetry Contest of Jack Horne...
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Categories:
comment, humorous,
Form:
Limerick
No CommentLonely poems sitting
isolated- Something
like real life.
Poems read secretly
in silence..Not even
to say
Hi: I read your poem
today or:Kilroy was
here.
Lonely
poems..sitting on
a site read
incognito.
Snob asks "what is
the form"?
I am just miniature
I just like to write
I don't teach
literature.
When poets fail
to acknowledge
poetry
that could befriend
them,it is a sad
state.
No...
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Categories:
comment, analogy, betrayal, how i
Form:
Blank verse
Made Me Smile - Comment ContestA lovely comment I received
I treated it as fun
Surmised I was a girl from the east
With attributes per sun
Thought I might have been
delicate and womanly
As though I am not, for sure
I wonder if she thinks that I'm
A great big boring Boar
I know when she reads...
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Categories:
comment, smile,
Form:
Rhyme
No CommentWhen Donald Trump rants
or a drunk pulls down his wet pants
Mike Pompeo runs his detention camps
in Gods name of course
When the Fox
Is wiser than the hen
One day Freddie
will boil in mercury
never to come back
from the dead
Queens will have their say
Pushing the bully over to the...
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Categories:
comment, america, art, christian, political,
Form:
Couplet
A Pocket Full of Comment ChangeI would rather spend a dollar commenting
than waste a half-dime on replies (SORRY!!);
I would rather say how good yours is
than thank you for applauding mine.
I do like remarks, genuine;
obligations, please do not maintain--
feel free, not painfully constrained.
Sharing thoughts that stimulate
massages both our brains.
Copyright, August 19,...
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Categories:
comment, community, writing,
Form:
Free verse
A Rocker and a CigarI may not be happy
with the way things are,
I may express dissatisfaction
In my local bar,
But I refuse to burn down
my street in extreme reaction
to some civil distraction--
seems to me somewhat bizarre.
I must take care of business
in my own neighborhood,
Being no part of any fringe faction.
Give...
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Categories:
comment, how i feel, me,
Form:
Free verse